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Old 11-22-04, 06:23 PM   #1
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Heavyweight Championship: Sdizzle .vs. God

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Old 11-22-04, 06:24 PM   #2
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checking in.......
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Old 11-22-04, 06:38 PM   #3
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In... 10. Good luck.
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 11-22-04, 08:01 PM   #4
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hes always first to lose, and the last one to finish
kids a one man crew... and even hes not wanted in it
and i can see why..... not only is his future dark
i couldn't tell he existed.. till i seen where his eyes start
man uv always been wack, its not that hard to see
kids a herb on real sites.... but a fucking god on rv
u be buggin me all the time, u need to mind ur business
and god the king of the wack..
...& this rulers still short a couple inches
ur names wack..u aint gansta, so lets toss out the g
and the kid wouldn't come dope even with the o.d

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Old 11-23-04, 10:08 PM   #5
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Czech it...
RV's heads just ain't seein' you, kid, you have no place on the sight
And if I wanted to see old jokes, son, I'd just tune in to Nick at Nite
So I'll just leave dizzle lying dead here, but ain't this shit the truth?
His roots originate from RB.... & his God punches are from there too
God's a pro at takin' hits, 'cept ur con-cept's were already swung, b
I'd accuse ya of biting personals, but I know ur ass was just hungry
Our User Titles are equal, but see, in text or life we're not a match
Cause while God is on a fuckin' roll... sdizzle's just fuckin' rolls of fat
So I guess the only way to settle this is split the title, with no hate
Cuz my bars may hit Heavy, but damn, dizzle wins with the Weight!
Later

And no, I'm not gonna bother doin' something played and wack like postin' up your picture to get an extra edge here... But whateva floats your boat, dizzle! Just be careful not to sink it.
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 11-23-04, 10:37 PM   #6
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Vote: God

the kid fucked up dizzle to the days:

So I'll just leave dizzle lying dead here, but ain't this shit the truth?
His roots originate from RB.... & his God punches are from there too
^^^lmao

Our User Titles are equal, but see, in text or life we're not a match
Cause while God is on a fuckin' roll... sdizzle's just fuckin' rolls of fat
So I guess the only way to settle this is split the title, with no hate
Cuz my bars may hit Heavy, but damn, dizzle wins with the Weight!
^^^^rofl!!!

So yeah, he also had the better structures while dizzle screws up that bit

dizzle had some nice punches, but didn't hit as hard as god's:

hes always first to lose, and the last one to finish
kids a one man crew... and even hes not wanted in it
^^^^decent

dizzle also has some really played punches, subtitle, wack punches:

ur names wack..u aint gansta, so lets toss out the g
and the kid wouldn't come dope even with the o.d
^^^^gee....are you serious?
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Old 11-23-04, 10:40 PM   #7
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sdizzle:



hes always first to lose, and the last one to finish
kids a one man crew... and even hes not wanted in it
^^damn just e-dope 9/10
and i can see why..... not only is his future dark
i couldn't tell he existed.. till i seen where his eyes start
^^wack 3/10
man uv always been wack, its not that hard to see
kids a herb on real sites.... but a fucking god on rv
^^good meta 6/10
u be buggin me all the time, u need to mind ur business
and god the king of the wack..
...& this rulers still short a couple inches
^^good meta kinda weak punch 5/10
ur names wack..u aint gansta, so lets toss out the g
and the kid wouldn't come dope even with the o.d
^^ played concept but still good 7/10

overall : 30/50 (60%)

God:

RV's heads just ain't seein' you, kid, you have no place on the sight
And if I wanted to see old jokes, son, I'd just tune in to Nick at Nite
^^dope opener feeling this 8/10
So I'll just leave dizzle lying dead here, but ain't this shit the truth?
His roots originate from RB.... & his God punches are from there too
^^lmao hot maybe best bar of battle 9/10
God's a pro at takin' hits, 'cept ur con-cept's were already swung, b
I'd accuse ya of biting personals, but I know ur ass was just hungry
^^lmfao ok now this is the best bar of the battle 10/10
Our User Titles are equal, but see, in text or life we're not a match
Cause while God is on a fuckin' roll... sdizzle's just fuckin' rolls of fat
^^dam just stop sick bar 8/10
So I guess the only way to settle this is split the title, with no hate
Cuz my bars may hit Heavy, but damn, dizzle wins with the Weight!
^^good meta good punch 7/10

overall : 42/50 (84%)

v: god

this is probably the best verse i have seen in KLL good verses
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Old 11-23-04, 10:45 PM   #8
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i actually thought this was a close one...

but i think God got the edge here with a lil more wit and more decent lines than dizzle...

V/ God...
 
Old 11-23-04, 11:16 PM   #9
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Sdizzle:

hes always first to lose, and the last one to finish
kids a one man crew... and even hes not wanted in it
not a bad opener.
and i can see why..... not only is his future dark
i couldn't tell he existed.. till i seen where his eyes start
seen=saw, dialogue check.
man uv always been wack, its not that hard to see
kids a herb on real sites.... but a fucking god on rv
what?
u be buggin me all the time, u need to mind ur business
and god the king of the wack..
...& this rulers still short a couple inches
eh okay. a bit jumbly.
ur names wack..u aint gansta, so lets toss out the g
and the kid wouldn't come dope even with the o.d
punch was there, but worded all wrong.

*gave great effort, ya spent some time on punches, needed better personals. ya wordplay was lacking and there were a few parts ya lines didnt make sense (dialogue/tone). dont sweat it, overall decent read.


God:

RV's heads just ain't seein' you, kid, you have no place on the sight
And if I wanted to see old jokes, son, I'd just tune in to Nick at Nite
[b]good set up. good punch. vocab?

So I'll just leave dizzle lying dead here, but ain't this shit the truth?
His roots originate from RB.... & his God punches are from there too
nice.
God's a pro at takin' hits, 'cept ur con-cept's were already swung, b
I'd accuse ya of biting personals, but I know ur ass was just hungry
lol. decent set up.
Our User Titles are equal, but see, in text or life we're not a match
Cause while God is on a fuckin' roll... sdizzle's just fuckin' rolls of fat
lol. good comedy.
So I guess the only way to settle this is split the title, with no hate
Cuz my bars may hit Heavy, but damn, dizzle wins with the Weight!
lmao. nice closure.

*personals and punches were good, wordplay and structure were decent. no vocab. ya still win. good read.



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Old 11-23-04, 11:17 PM   #10
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nice battle god
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Old 11-23-04, 11:18 PM   #11
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ill see u in a week, still number one with the points, so ill be in the contenderhsip match next week.. hope ur still here when i return
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Old 11-24-04, 02:19 AM   #12
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yeah.. god got this.. well done both of you..

v/god..

some good flips on old concepts took this for him.
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Old 11-24-04, 11:05 AM   #13
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Yeah......God just came more consistant in this one, dizzle had a few blah lines so naturally, God took this one

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Old 11-24-04, 02:11 PM   #14
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Quote:
Originally Posted by sdizzle
nice battle god

ill see u in a week, still number one with the points, so ill be in the contenderhsip match next week.. hope ur still here when i return


Yeah, no doubt, good battle. And I don't plan on goin' anywhere for a while... LOL... See ya there, dizzle.
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One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud
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Old 11-24-04, 02:47 PM   #15
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I thought it was a tie but since God used the fat-sdizzle punches i gotta give it to dizz. seriously, i dont likey the fat punches no more, i dunno if all of dizzles shit was understood but he got some damn good creativity, except for the RV punches which he seems to use every verse here.

v:sdizzle

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