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6 - 10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 11-30-04 at 01:06 AM

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are we gonna battle or are you ducking me now?....becuz you wouldent shut your mouth you lil bitch

THE HYPE IS REAL has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 01:31 AM.

Two By Four has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-04 01:33 AM.

im bout to put an end to this nonsense
fuck the handle of a 4.5 ill just nock you unconsious
you just a dick ryder punk just a little kid
your still runnin to the bath room to pull that little dick
trust me you dont want none son us grown folk we be playin with guns
you thinkin bout your self instead of the loved ones how do think theyl feel when they find out you got done
shot stabed and left bleedin they see that shit that they only be readin in a book or seen on tv
boy its in your best intrest not to fuck with me

Your the kind of pussy that would pull “crocodile” Dundee
By saying no worries, im like a “alligator” & ur scared of Me
Im telling u ur rhymes are wack, whats ur “point” of doing It?
All I to do is “show” my finger to the position where I Spit
I don’t understand why im writing this for a bitch ass Newbie
By the time I drop he wont show, got old everytime Already

Voted For: THE HYPE IS REAL

flow-THE HYPE IS REAL
struture-Two By Four
wordplay-none
mulitys-none
puchs-none

but mah vote goes to THE HYPE IS REAL he came harder than 2by4 not much wordplay or mulitys from any side but i think he got this one wit tha skim of his teeth flow was better

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hahaha i had punches you need elevation haha...uppin

Voted For: Two By Four

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Voted For: Two By Four

this battle goes straight to 3 by 4..... there is very nice flow and very nice stucture which wins this for you buddy.... lines are all even and sound good

Your the kind of pussy that would pull “crocodile” Dundee
By saying no worries, im like a “alligator” & ur scared of Me
^^^^^ pretty average intro...
I don’t understand why im writing this for a bitch ass Newbie
By the time I drop he wont show, got old everytime Already
^^^but nice closer.... you win this mate..

can you please return the favour... thx

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can you drop a vote on this battle please mate... it needs closing
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iight one sec.......................................

Voted For: Two By Four

Your the kind of pussy that would pull “crocodile” Dundee
By saying no worries, im like a “alligator” & ur scared of Me
^^
weak opener,nice rhyme. no personnal.6/10

Im telling u ur rhymes are wack, whats ur “point” of doing It?
All I to do is “show” my finger to the position where I Spit
^^^
hmm, im unsure about this line,could be a personnal that need's explaining,blaH5/10

I don’t understand why im writing this for a bitch ass Newbie
By the time I drop he wont show, got old everytime Already
^^
played line, weak closer, got old everytime already..<doesnt really make sense.5/10

im bout to put an end to this nonsense
fuck the handle of a 4.5 ill just nock you unconsious
^^
no punch,ok rhyme, no personal,weak opener.4/10

you just a dick ryder punk just a little kid
your still runnin to the bath room to pull that little dick
^^^wak, no personal at all,no rhyme

trust me you dont want none son us grown folk we be playin with guns
you thinkin bout your self instead of the loved ones how do think theyl feel when they find out you got done
^^
weak rhyme's,stretched bar,no personnal,no punch.2/10

shot stabed and left bleedin they see that shit that they only be readin in a book or seen on tv
boy its in your best intrest not to fuck with me
^^
weak closer,no punch no personal4/10

2by4 won this, only just . To be honest they are both weak. I struggled to pic a winner.

v-2by4