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Old 07-28-02, 05:26 PM   #1
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Week 9 Hardcore Champion (3-0) Direkt Threat Vs (3-1) Dalyricalwhiz

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30 LINES MAX


MUST SIGN IN BY WEDNESDAY::


VERSES DUE FRIDAY MIDNIGHT::


IF YOU DO NOT SIGN IN BY WEDNESDAY,YOU WILL LOSE,IF YOU DO SIGN IN AND DONT POST BY FRIDAY YOU LOSE,IF THERE IS SOMEONE THAT SIGNS IN AND DOESNT POST A VERSE,YOU MUST POST AT LEAST TWO BARS FOR THE VICTORY
 
Old 07-28-02, 08:51 PM   #2
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Old 07-28-02, 10:38 PM   #3
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checking in
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Old 08-01-02, 11:48 PM   #4
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BTW, How Much You Keying Son, I'll Drop About 16-20, Peace.

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Old 08-02-02, 04:21 PM   #5
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Lightbulb keyed in like 6 mins good luck dawg 20barz!

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ya name should be philly, cause ya lifes at stake(steak)
want beef?, i'll serve u a steaming hot plate
plot on ya block while i pop thangz off my waist sealin ya fate puttin 2 holes in ya face
hybrid,......nuttin but 2 hoes in my face
direct no kinda threat......like little kids with shanks,
lyrical disgrace.......u non human, u more stupid than a one legged man ina foot race
u aint untouchable fam, but unfuckwitable's increditable dickryder.... laying inbetween his legs
co-signin his threads, this nigga thinkin he ill.......the whole time doctors givin em prescription meds
so actually u ill, just not lyrically inclined, so why try this? , hurt this herb, dianosed wit wack-I-tis
i plus what u minus, so nigga mind this, punish u both on one battle, so the sum is divided


infact u need a ghost writer to battle me, but u can't afford one wit ya micky-d's salary
so i guess u really got beef, not on the streets, but in the store grillin the meat-
crushing ya element with pistols, until ya image aint seen
eating ya wack raps like 29 cent burgers with cheese
hybrid?! it should be more like hybernation this win'er(winter) puttin u niggaz to sleep
so bear with me, or bare witness, wreck u direckty, my text killin ya writtens
beef wit techs, hittin everythang, even the kittens, u spittin? this kid gotta be kiddin
only thing u spit is saliva, cause u retarded, non survivor, my barz got u sporting black n white attire
my desire, dead-u-on-da-docks-for-da-dolo
leave ya stance unorthodox, like hi-deo nomo, nigga u strait gay, a -hetero-homo


edited for a spellin correction
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Old 08-02-02, 05:04 PM   #6
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WTF ^^ .. This kid said my name More than he said Direct threat .. haha
 
Old 08-02-02, 05:39 PM   #7
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Angry lol

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get the fuck outta here!
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Old 08-02-02, 06:40 PM   #8
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^^^good shyt. I'll vote when the other nicca drops.
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Old 08-02-02, 11:43 PM   #9
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Ok, I got about 20 min to key, get ready.
 
Old 08-03-02, 12:11 AM   #10
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Ha, I like Your Old Punches...

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Fuck, 20 Min Key, Be Happy!

Shit to know-Minute Is Orange Juice in the Morning.
HE talked bout Mcdonalds so I threw in A Lil Burger Line-
And Last Line was because he made jokes bout Hybrid...Blah.


Bruise Spitting! Key At Deadline, You'll Know Who's Missing-
DLW Will Lose Bitching! I'll Rip This Cat Like Movie Tickets-!
Sit And Pray; On Regular Day's Direkt Makes An Ass His Of Prey-
Try To Split-And-Bail...I Eat DLW Like Breakfast;His Minute Maid-
Claim Heads Severed; Direkt Has Kenetik Heat Like Lead Sweaters-
Said ForEver;Your Raps Are Like Aputated Legs, It'll Never Get Better-!
Flow Is New;Could It Be True That DLW Blows Dudes? I Told You-
Fagget Is Like Windy Season In The Forest;He's A Breeze To Go Threw-!
Rip My Lungs;I'll Still Breathe Fine! Kid Bite's Lyrics, But I Key Mine-
Only Situation He's Ever Clocked Kid's Is Teaching Them To Read Time-!
Slow Learner;Claims To Be Swifty, Call Him A Moinsted Jerker-
Fuck Your Noise;Im Gonna Serve Ya'! Talk Shit And I'll Poisen Your Burger-!
Honest Opinion, Your Wack I'll Say;He Loves Unfuckwithable! I Laugh At Gays-
Paths Astray...Internet Life Is Like The Sun;You Only Shine Half The Day-!
DaLyricalWhiz The Illest? Read My Verse; I'll Sharply Demenstrate-
Discard What He Says! Im Sperm In A Condom; Hard To Penetrate-!

[Fishisher]-DONT TALK SHIT KID!]
Verse You Can't Hear, Do I Got To Sign It? Burn Your Irisis;Now Your Blind Kid-
'Ill'; Shall I Define It? Can't Fuck With This Ill Type Member...Respect Hybrid-!

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Old 08-03-02, 05:53 AM   #11
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Hmmmmm, this was a close battle. After readin it twice I decided that lyricalwiz took this wit one punch that I felt was the hardest. Besides that, I felt everythang was equal. I'm talkin bout lyrical's "winter/bear" punch. Other than that they pretty much matched up. Keep elevatin, One Hunnid.
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Old 08-03-02, 07:43 AM   #12
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...It's funnt that you mentioned that line, it was used on RnR, but I can't find which thread, but o-well, if you say, 0-1.
 
Old 08-03-02, 07:46 AM   #13
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Direkt...
Pretty consistant verse. Not great wordplay, but some nice straightforward lines. I liked...
Said ForEver;Your Raps Are Like Aputated Legs, It'll Never Get Better-!
Solid, but not great.

DLW...
The first part barely held my interest. The second part was pretty hot though. If you had just posted that, I wouldn't have had to think so hard about this vote. lol
so i guess u really got beef, not on the streets, but in the store grillin the meat-
crushing ya element with pistols, until ya image aint seen
eating ya wack raps like 29 cent burgers with cheese
hybrid?! it should be more like hybernation this win'er(winter) puttin u niggaz to sleep
so bear with me, or bare witness, wreck u direckty, my text killin ya writtens
My favorite part of the battle. Clever and hard.

Vote: Upon further review, DLW's excellent section did not quite balance out his earlier sections that were fairly wack.
Direkt's lines were obviously keyed, but they were still more consistant than DLW's. This puts me in a strange situation. I can't decide whether to pick the more consistant verse that I enjoyed overall, or the verse with all its hot lines in one place. So I say tie.
Peace

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Old 08-03-02, 07:57 AM   #14
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WTF...are ya'll not reading the verse's or something?
 
Old 08-03-02, 08:56 AM   #15
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direkt was bad... no flow.. punches were too simple or just weren't there... hmmm.. wordplay was bad.. the verse i never liked.

Only Situation He's Ever Clocked Kid's Is Teaching Them To Read Time-!

that was the only line i think that was decent in his verse.. the rest was bad.

whiz verse was terrible.. flow was worse than direkt.. first section i wouldn't have even posted if i was him... it was awful... second section was slightly better but was still wack.. nothing in your verse stood out an dit had no flow at all.. not to mention the layout was terrible

both were bad but at least direkt had one cool line

vote - direkt
 
 


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