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12-11-04, 01:54 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Bigchase vs A k w o r d Z
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...30-50 lines... ...Check-ins due Monday... ...Verse due Wednesday... ...Topic: Love in Chaos... ...Votes due Friday/Saturday... ...Two votes required... ...No biting, cheating, or d/r... ...Have fun...Don't complain too much...
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12-11-04, 07:48 PM | #2 | ||||
New Jack
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checkin in....
Have Fun... Dont let your dick get rode too hard, might fall off. OK Ill tell LatinKitten to get off it soon BigChase
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12-12-04, 03:56 AM | #3 | |||||||
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check....
Try to get LatinKittens dick out of your ass And buy yourself some tampons your bitching never ceases....
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12-13-04, 07:23 PM | #4 | ||||
New Jack
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get real son.... actin like you're untouchable when you're takin your time postin a topic so you got a week to prewrite.... keep actin like you're fuckin with me. you'll need the luck.
Hmm.. Actually u will need the luck.. plz no more beef.. -I. Mind IF you harass another mod or another contestant your out.... BC
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12-16-04, 07:56 PM | #5 | ||||
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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extension is untill dis sunday!!
Kapeesh -Dabatos
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12-20-04, 01:25 AM | #6 | ||||
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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[QUOTE=BigChase]
She was my cure, she made me pure Without her my life would be a blur She's a divine creation; blessing by the Lord Our love couldn't be described with words She opened zones, her breathe my own Intimate were all the moments we spent alone Her hair so fair, skin so tender and smoothe breasts round and full, no blemishes or a bruise All her demands would suprise her that I would meet Taking comfort as I guard her body as she sleeps She hadn't learned of our passionate disposiiton She would soon desire our long forlorn traditons One night we were all alone, in our home there was a ring THere he was, chisled, tall, and yet evil's seed MY love for her beautiful body, and his evil raged Yet I couldn't stop my excitement as the slowly engaged He became me, his body my own, as I slowly mimic their actions I became one with them form my desolate spot, full of satisfaction Ahhhh the feelings of ingenuity built on top of with society I Deeply moan as pleasures of God's time with me As my deed done, my exhilation turns to rage Hes been holding me from my loved one, self imposed cage My search franticaly for his demise, an object of pain Steel to make quence my eternal thirst for limbs, his blood my rain MY screams mirrored his own, dark clouds surround our home the darkness only revealed one light her helpless groans I grabbed her soft pale hand tainting it with his blood His filth contaminated her enough , his mud on my dove I brushed her hair aside to look into her hazel eyes Her silence for minutes and the look of suprise I felt down her soft breast, lusciously with passion As my hand lowered I felt an object protruding and fastened I felt a handle, what is this object here as I looked down only the devils breath made such evil appear A knife affecting us all, death at it worst and best a sun risen in the east, clouded by the moon in west her beauty stolen from within but mine for the knife for us both now to lay as husband and wife
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12-20-04, 03:30 AM | #7 | ||||
New Jack
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some other feelin comin between us, want you to leave but somethin is keepin you coming to me, could it just be you love me too deeply, i'd shrug it off when you'd see me, pack-eged up my feelings, but always knew you would come back to me, couldn't belive that you'd be leavin thought these things would be weaved into a security blanket that we've built to cover our bitter cold hearts up,this here old acting parts up, both us mad & fed up, i just... wish it could be how it was when we first met, too much of it's goin down memory lane, memorys came & went, and would roll back to the same...Love in Chaos... look what the buggin made us do... loved'ed hating you, couldn't figure how'da behave with you,a shame, playin the blame game 'cept mosta what we're sayin is true,i cant see things the same way as you , wish i knew what we did'a get here n where it's takin you....hopefully we gonna make it-- half'a what i'm sayin, is just sayings, saving relationships is mad painfull...look at what it made, you'd take things i'd say, when you know i'm jus playin twist every word & mis-shape it, make things up, take everything we'd built & threw it away, reiterate how big of a mistake i was a sad day to have us both standin in the same shoe, walked a million miles till it started wearing down our souls... now where we 'posed to go...done ran outta ideas, through the span'a these years, what we had dissappeared... fa' now i'll jus sit back, half laughin, half scared ,till we're back in the clear,half pretendin i care, half happy for havin you here half wantin to leave till my other half isn't there akwordz
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12-20-04, 12:27 PM | #8 | |||||||
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12:30?
12@ night is the deadline.........
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12-20-04, 12:28 PM | #9 | ||||
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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jst forget it big!! Cuz come on, u really want a no show?
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12-20-04, 01:58 PM | #10 | |||||||
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no show is no show...I would have liked to have a battle w/ a new topic and I could drop dope instead of recycling but its too late...
Plus he had 5 days to drop....
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12-20-04, 02:12 PM | #11 | ||||
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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Big win's by deadline
Thread Closed!!! -I. Mind
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12-20-04, 04:23 PM | #12 | |||||||
G.Y.T.
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thread re-opened..
bigchase, i really have to be fair man, I gave you 5 extra day's to post your verse, and this guy didn't ask for anything, so 30 minutes extra is nothin bad, i really have to let that slide, it's jst not fair that you had 5 extra day's wen he jst needed 5 extra minutes
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12-21-04, 01:52 PM | #13 | ||||
New Jack
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... anyone gonna vote?
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12-21-04, 04:18 PM | #14 | ||||
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my vote goes to big chase
reason: i was feelin the story line that big chase had and he came more complex and creative with it and gave a good imagery. i enjoyed reading his peice cuz it had a good flow to it. i was feelin the emotion from akwordz peice but i felt like he didnt come as creative as big chase. he came closer to being typical with it. what akwordz lacked was a good flow. it was hard to flow with your peice because of the way you set out your rhymes to end, just work on your flow and ull get better. so overall i enjoyed reading big chase's peice more so... v.big chase ps. This is Elemental Soul |
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12-21-04, 05:02 PM | #15 | ||||
New Jack
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PSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WHAT FLOW???????????????????
you cant spit a verse when you can barely TALK it how are you gonna have a flow with half of his lines were forced as hell, "All her demands would suprise her that I would meet" he admitted to recycling his whole verse and I need to be more creative? booooooooooooooo Stop bitching
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