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12-24-04, 10:18 PM | #1 | |
05.Triple_N .vs. 17.Led Poetic
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Battles open Friday Night At 11:59 PM Eastern Time Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time Verse's Due By Tuesday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time Voting Ends Thursday At 11:00 PM Eastern Time 14 Lines No Biting No Feeding No Recycling The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney! Good Luck! Designated Voters: TitoBronsky New Method Mimesis 9th Degree Un'Touched Viscosity smokajoka666 If you would like anyone on this list removed, you must PM Schema BEFORE you drop your verse.
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12-25-04, 12:12 PM | #2 | |||
God is a Fable.
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IP: A10D 4933
yeah yeah check... and what the fuck i was supposed to battle empire this round homos
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12-26-04, 04:00 PM | #3 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: DBCE DC18
checkin in...son u know I don't no show..its all good
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12-28-04, 11:51 PM | #4 | |||||||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: DBCE DC18
Things you must know to get the personals:
1. He is a heavy weed smoker 2. couple days ago he slammed his middle finger in his car door & had to go the hospital. 3. He was banned from RB for biting 4. his AIM name is SK and Alz 81 5. He has an SC page wit tracks he spit an he has a very high voice You must of forgot you wack due to too many bong hits See, cuz a weed dependcy is only thing u gotta "deal wit" Claimin' u spray Sk's, I say its B.S., I know u ain't hoodin' But ya lies bring tears to cosby's eyes...................... ..........................cuz you proved "proof is in da puddin'" Ya gurlish voice is a sign of u bein' in prepubescent grapple Cuz at the dawn of man eve was led to eat "adams apple" Your verses is "2-pac's" & "ja-net" skillz ain't "jack-son" U gettin' ate's "poetic joetice"............................... ......like bicuspids I mash Leftover Edible Delicates, dun Plain & simpe u suck, it'd be dumb luck if ya made me duck Do any ya punches take karate lessons? cuz "none-chuck" In verses & real life u "stumb in da middle" ya prob lingers Dats why throught out this verse I'm giving you "da finger" RB prooved u a biter & I'm pose to believe a change in you? Fuck dat! I'm a be cautious.................. .......& erase all my cpu cookies cuz u might bite those too
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Haters spend all they time hating on another's life
Then wonder why when presenting there's to others...no one looks twice Because at the end of the day, you get what you give So, when you consumed with his...don't get mad when everyone else is |
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12-29-04, 12:04 AM | #5 | ||||||
Bone is gay.
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IP: D985 18C5
Bye...
Triple N?? I wont even ask how you got this far in this.. But how's it possible to have an ego bigger than ya sig Wack fuck, he'll soon find out it's the win he's missin.. Kids breath is so bad, his audios come in mint condition I spread like a disease, so my fists'll spread on this bitch Dumb fuck thought an infestation played today's top hits I'll blow ya all apart, and leave nothin but steam and vapors Whats worse is... Ya verse has more quotes than my college English paper ^That's a predetermined punch...I aint seen ya shit yet And I aint talkin countries when your loss is easy Tibet Master of punchlines? how can we respect your shit?? When his location isnt where he's from..it's what he is You fuckin drop garbage...and that's ya style bitch.. After I murder ya you'll feel at home... Cuz I'll leave Triple.....N the fucking dumps as it is |
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12-31-04, 06:40 PM | #6 | ||||
In ya area.
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IP: 3358 DF00
Triple N:
You must of forgot you wack due to too many bong hits See, cuz a weed dependcy is only thing u gotta "deal wit" Decent opener, ok personal Claimin' u spray Sk's, I say its B.S., I know u ain't hoodin' But ya lies bring tears to cosby's eyes...................... ..........................cuz you proved "proof is in da puddin'" Decent setup, punch was lacking Ya gurlish voice is a sign of u bein' in prepubescent grapple Cuz at the dawn of man eve was led to eat "adams apple" Good wordplay here, had to read it twice but I uderstood it Your verses is "2-pac's" & "ja-net" skillz ain't "jack-son" U gettin' ate's "poetic joetice"............................... ......like bicuspids I mash Leftover Edible Delicates, dun Dope setup, nice wordplay, punch hit, but could've been worded better Plain & simpe u suck, it'd be dumb luck if ya made me duck Do any ya punches take karate lessons? cuz "none-chuck" Lol good multis in setup, punch hit, even had me laughin' a little bit In verses & real life u "stumb in da middle" ya prob lingers Dats why throught out this verse I'm giving you "da finger" Decent personal RB prooved u a biter & I'm pose to believe a change in you? Fuck dat! I'm a be cautious.................. .......& erase all my cpu cookies cuz u might bite those too Another decent personal, but mixed with a cretive punch. nice closer Led Poetic: Bye...Triple N?? I wont even ask how you got this far in this.. But how's it possible to have an ego bigger than ya sig Decent personal, but the bar didn't really rhyme, so opener was blah Wack fuck, he'll soon find out it's the win he's missin.. Kids breath is so bad, his audios come in mint condition Good personal, made up for a weak setup I spread like a disease, so my fists'll spread on this bitch Dumb fuck thought an infestation played today's top hits Decent meta here I'll blow ya all apart, and leave nothin but steam and vapors Whats worse is... Ya verse has more quotes than my college English paper Another good personal here, nice punch too ^That's a predetermined punch...I aint seen ya shit yet And I aint talkin countries when your loss is easy Tibet Nice wordplay in the punch, overall a good bar Master of punchlines? how can we respect your shit?? When his location isnt where he's from..it's what he is Decent personal, creative way to word a "gay" punch You fuckin drop garbage...and that's ya style bitch.. After I murder ya you'll feel at home... Cuz I'll leave Triple.....N the fucking dumps as it is Nice play off his name, good closer overall As close as this one was, I'ma have to give it to Led Poetic. His opener was weak, but he made up for it with the rest of his verse. Punches/personals/metas stayed consistent. Trip you had a good verse too, some nice punches and wordplay, but the thing that brought your verse down was the personals. You used personals that I wouldn't have got unless you had the explanations, so that was a negative aspect of your drop. But no hate, keep bangin'... V// Led Poetic
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12-31-04, 11:28 PM | #7 | ||||||
CHRYMESINDICATE
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Thread Cleaned..... Please comence Voting
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01-01-05, 02:35 PM | #8 | ||||||
Bow Chicka Bow Wow
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You must of forgot you wack due to too many bong hits
See, cuz a weed dependcy is only thing u gotta "deal wit" lol nice Claimin' u spray Sk's, I say its B.S., I know u ain't hoodin' But ya lies bring tears to cosby's eyes...................... ..........................cuz you proved "proof is in da puddin'" no Ya gurlish voice is a sign of u bein' in prepubescent grapple Cuz at the dawn of man eve was led to eat "adams apple" decent Your verses is "2-pac's" & "ja-net" skillz ain't "jack-son" U gettin' ate's "poetic joetice"............................... ......like bicuspids I mash Leftover Edible Delicates, dun ehhh Plain & simpe u suck, it'd be dumb luck if ya made me duck Do any ya punches take karate lessons? cuz "none-chuck" decent In verses & real life u "stumb in da middle" ya prob lingers Dats why throught out this verse I'm giving you "da finger" pretty good RB prooved u a biter & I'm pose to believe a change in you? Fuck dat! I'm a be cautious.................. .......& erase all my cpu cookies cuz u might bite those too lol nice__________________ Triple N?? I wont even ask how you got this far in this.. But how's it possible to have an ego bigger than ya sig pretty good Wack fuck, he'll soon find out it's the win he's missin.. Kids breath is so bad, his audios come in mint condition wait is it just me or is this almost a complement it started out good than you said he had bad breathe but his audios come out in mint condition....mint-good smelling blahh I spread like a disease, so my fists'll spread on this bitch Dumb fuck thought an infestation played today's top hits lol nice I'll blow ya all apart, and leave nothin but steam and vapors Whats worse is... Ya verse has more quotes than my college English paper nice ^That's a predetermined punch...I aint seen ya shit yet And I aint talkin countries when your loss is easy Tibet nice, nice wordplay Master of punchlines? how can we respect your shit?? When his location isnt where he's from..it's what he is ehhh not really You fuckin drop garbage...and that's ya style bitch.. After I murder ya you'll feel at home... Cuz I'll leave Triple.....N the fucking dumps as it is ight.... aight this was a close battle.......tripple N came pretty good throughout his verse.......but led peotic had like three dope bars and then 3 aight bars......this was a really close battle.........but ima go with led poetic because he had some harder hittin punches. v/Led Poetic |
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01-01-05, 03:02 PM | #9 | |||||||||
InSaNe KiLlAh
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IP: 9CA0 C805
Before this thread was cleaned Led had PMed will a peer to take Lady Fiyah off the voting counsel of this before he dropped and I took her place to disarray confusion
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Triple_N's Overall Verse: 27/70 Comments: You had alot of personals that just werent used good at all...you said he hurt his finger, but you didnt put much use of that....you just had alot of personals that you didnt use good...and you used alot of forced wordplay....try using wit and drop the quotes... Quote:
Led Posaken's Overall Verse: 35/70 Comments: You had a pretty good verse for the most part....not much on personals, but better punches and better use of the personals you had... Vote - Led Poetic/Posaken
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01-01-05, 05:10 PM | #10 | ||||||
CHRYMESINDICATE
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IP: B4FF 1C13
Ok...... Led Poetic Wins by KO 3 Votes to 0
Led Poetic Advances to the next round (for future reference..... dont up your battle..... its considered <freeposting>
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