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Old 12-24-04, 10:25 PM   #1
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04.Kingz .vs. 21.Mike Hawk

IP: AEBA 9CCC

Rules:

Battles open Friday Night At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 11:00 PM Eastern Time

14 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!

Designated Voters:
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Old 12-24-04, 11:21 PM   #2
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Old 12-26-04, 08:45 AM   #3
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Old 12-26-04, 02:34 PM   #4
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Since yall not gutta like me...I gotta explain this:
Latin Kingz is a gang that whose colors are yellow and green

It's like...
Kingz used to be ok, now he's one of the worst I heard
But it's tradition...in checkers Kingz is always goin backwards
Still a rook in the game, has anyone here ever told em
Only newb that can link punches nicely.......
................................along with bolding and quoting
Been here for the longest...shoulda just packed up and left
Your next set up for RV...should be for your fucking death
So dumb...surround your damn neck with a tight harness
Wanna be Royal-T,so ya lines should get throne in the garbage
Gotta nice soundclick?...so Kingz tryna bring his fans with em
Not! We all seen his singles, but that's cuz no bitch wanna be wit em
Seriously..1st round? Kingz shouldn't have made it any farther
I got someone 'OK' last round, isn't it supposed to be gettin harder?
Gay nigga, how can I be intimidated by a some UK fellow
Only Kingz that are almost scary, are fags that's rocking yellow
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Old 12-28-04, 04:57 PM   #5
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Your verses are played...their a waste of ‘ink’ like Irv Gotti
he mad at me cos his mum’s a slut………
…cos wen it comes to ‘pops’ this kids got ‘lotty’! (1)
fuckin southpaw, hitting with ya ‘left’...I knew this nigga ‘aint right’
claiming 2 soul clap niggas..but u cant decide if ur black or white (2)
I gottaasswhoopin4u…but u’d prolly have a hunger for more like Lloyd banks
if you dunno who the favourite is..jus compare mine and shabba’s ‘ranks’ (3)
you alias's are multiple…it’s a shame your rhymes aint
you could drop your verse before mine…and it wud still be TOO LATE (4)
why aint you into audio? U must be too tight…SYKE!!!
should have just named yourself HAWK…cos u cant afford a MIKE!!!! (5)
Your name is fucked up....jus like your mum cos I heard she is a harlot
ya name is true if u put an ‘I’ in front of it….and ur mum is called Charlotte! (6)
This battle is like ya avatar, because we have all been mislead!!!??
Cos I aint fighting, I’m jus beating some1 who is already dead! (7)

Explantions if you didnt get any of that:

1. INK and Murder INC blah. Pop's = fathers. Lotty = lots. Play on name
2. His avatar shows a man hitting someone with they're left hand = southpaw
and the colour scheme for his account is black and white (Name, sig, avy etc)
3. Gottaasswhoopin4u and Shabba Ranks are his alias's. Ranks = Seeds for tourney
4. Self explanatory
5. He doesnt do audio....maybe cos he cant afford a mic. One of his alias's is Mike Hawk
6. Harlot = Ho. Lotty is short for Charlotte. so "I pop Lotty"
7. If you look close at avatar it actually look like someone is punching a limp or dead body
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Old 12-29-04, 02:48 PM   #6
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Old 12-29-04, 03:42 PM   #7
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Old 12-29-04, 04:13 PM   #8
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no ones voting and since this was my tourney im gonna vote... schema put me on the voters list

mike hawk:
(btw latin kingz colors are gold and black.. i was a LK)

It's like...
Kingz used to be ok, now he's one of the worst I heard
But it's tradition...in checkers Kingz is always goin backwards
^^dope meta good punch 7/10
Still a rook in the game, has anyone here ever told em
Only newb that can link punches nicely.......
................................along with bolding and quoting
^^lol good personal decent punch 6/10
Been here for the longest...shoulda just packed up and left
Your next set up for RV...should be for your fucking death
^^decent 6/10
So dumb...surround your damn neck with a tight harness
Wanna be Royal-T,so ya lines should get throne in the garbage
^^good personal decent punch 7/10
Gotta nice soundclick?...so Kingz tryna bring his fans with em
Not! We all seen his singles, but that's cuz no bitch wanna be wit em
^^good bar 2nd line could been ended better 7/10
Seriously..1st round? Kingz shouldn't have made it any farther
I got someone 'OK' last round, isn't it supposed to be gettin harder?
^^damn dope bar probably your best in the battle 9/10
Gay nigga, how can I be intimidated by a some UK fellow
Only Kingz that are almost scary, are fags that's rocking yellow
^^dope meta decent punch 6/10

overall : 48/70 (69%)

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Your verses are played...their a waste of ‘ink’ like Irv Gotti
he mad at me cos his mum’s a slut………
…cos wen it comes to ‘pops’ this kids got ‘lotty’! (1)
^^dope personal good punch 7/10
fuckin southpaw, hitting with ya ‘left’...I knew this nigga ‘aint right’
claiming 2 soul clap niggas..but u cant decide if ur black or white (2)
^^ first line played as hell.. 2nd line was decent 4/10
I gottaasswhoopin4u…but u’d prolly have a hunger for more like Lloyd banks
if you dunno who the favourite is..jus compare mine and shabba’s ‘ranks’ (3)
^^dope bar probably your best 9/10
you alias's are multiple…it’s a shame your rhymes aint
you could drop your verse before mine…and it wud still be TOO LATE (4)
^^played concept 4/10
why aint you into audio? U must be too tight…SYKE!!!
should have just named yourself HAWK…cos u cant afford a MIKE!!!! (5)
^^good nameplay wack punch 5/10
Your name is fucked up....jus like your mum cos I heard she is a harlot
ya name is true if u put an ‘I’ in front of it….and ur mum is called Charlotte! (6)
^^decent bar 5/10
This battle is like ya avatar, because we have all been mislead!!!??
Cos I aint fighting, I’m jus beating some1 who is already dead! (7)
^^good personal dope closer 8/10

overall : 42/70 (60%)

vote: pop lotty.. kingz u should have came harder
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Old 12-29-04, 05:53 PM   #9
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Old 12-29-04, 06:02 PM   #10
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dont up ur tourney battle lol itll get voted on just chill
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Old 12-29-04, 09:06 PM   #11
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Pop Lotty

Kingz used to be ok, now he's one of the worst I heard
But it's tradition...in checkers Kingz is always goin backwards
Pretty good personal.. pretty witty.. 7/10
Still a rook in the game, has anyone here ever told em
Only newb that can link punches nicely.......
................................along with bolding and quoting
Attempted personal.. structure punches are gettin to be played though.. 4/10
Been here for the longest...shoulda just packed up and left
Your next set up for RV...should be for your fucking death
Alright punch.. 5/10
So dumb...surround your damn neck with a tight harness
Wanna be Royal-T,so ya lines should get throne in the garbage
This was pretty dope.. good personal.. good wordplay.. 8/10
Gotta nice soundclick?...so Kingz tryna bring his fans with em
Not! We all seen his singles, but that's cuz no bitch wanna be wit em
This is pretty creative.. good shit.. 7/10
Seriously..1st round? Kingz shouldn't have made it any farther
I got someone 'OK' last round, isn't it supposed to be gettin harder?
These punches are also getting to be played.. but, this was still decent.. 5/10
Gay nigga, how can I be intimidated by a some UK fellow
Only Kingz that are almost scary, are fags that's rocking yellow
Pretty good play off of his name.. Not ur best personal though.. 6/10

Overall - 42/70

Kingz

Your verses are played...their a waste of ‘ink’ like Irv Gotti
he mad at me cos his mum’s a slut………
…cos wen it comes to ‘pops’ this kids got ‘lotty’!
The first line had potential.. the second line u attempted a personal, but it was worded horribly and just came out wack.. 4/10
fuckin southpaw, hitting with ya ‘left’...I knew this nigga ‘aint right’
claiming 2 soul clap niggas..but u cant decide if ur black or white
Whyd you put '' around aint right?.. that doesnt make it wordplay dude.. but uhh.. the second line was retarded.. avatar punches are played to hell now.. and thats a fake personal.. im almost postive pop knows what race he is.. 3/10
I gottaasswhoopin4u…but u’d prolly have a hunger for more like Lloyd banks
if you dunno who the favourite is..jus compare mine and shabba’s ‘ranks’
TERRIBLE, TERRIBLE NAME PLAY.. thats not even a punch.. 2/10
you alias's are multiple…it’s a shame your rhymes aint
you could drop your verse before mine…and it wud still be TOO LATE
What the fuck?.. time has no relation to whether or not he posts before you.. this was wack.. 1/10
why aint you into audio? U must be too tight…SYKE!!!
should have just named yourself HAWK…cos u cant afford a MIKE!!!!
I dont see how Hawk relates to a mic.. attempted nameplay.. even though it came out total ass.. cause you dont even know if thats the reason he doesnt do audio.. 3/10
Your name is fucked up....jus like your mum cos I heard she is a harlot
ya name is true if u put an ‘I’ in front of it….and ur mum is called Charlotte!
Ive never heard of that being an abbreviation for Charolette, but ill believe you.. and this was still wack.. this is SOOOO forced.. wording was bad.. punch didnt connect.. 3/10
This battle is like ya avatar, because we have all been mislead!!!??
Cos I aint fighting, I’m jus beating some1 who is already dead!
Avatar punches are played as hell.. therefore making this played.. 3/10

Overall - 19/70

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Old 12-31-04, 05:44 PM   #12
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i coulda sworn i voted this battle already................ wow what happen to my post.. lol..

anywayz.. i felt Mike Hawk had more personals that were effective in this battle as well as punches.. Kingz verse started out well but then it started to fall downhill after the first 3 bars.. his best line was:
I gottaasswhoopin4u…but u’d prolly have a hunger for more like Lloyd banks
if you dunno who the favourite is..jus compare mine and shabba’s ‘ranks’ (3)

but Mike Hawk took a more creative approach.. this time around, Kingz was close but now i read it again i notice who took this one, Mike Hawk.. stay up, fam.

v/ Pop Lotty..
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Old 12-31-04, 07:43 PM   #13
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Right im closing this... Pop Lottery wins With K.O. 3 Votes to 0
Pop Lottery advances to the next round....
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