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01-05-05, 11:15 PM | #1 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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C.A.L.I vs acuity
IP: 28AD 5545
Check Ins Must Be In By Friday Or Your Topic Wont Be Given...
If Check Ins Are In Then You Will Be Given A topic To Write About... Poems Then Must Be In By Sunday And Voting Will Be Over On Tuesday... Topic: Fame and Fortune
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01-06-05, 01:05 AM | #2 | |||||||
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
check check check check check hahaha this will be dope
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01-06-05, 10:52 AM | #3 | |||||
Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: B836 D1FC
check mic 1,2 check check ..........yo Valor make sure we get a dope topic...G'luck man
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01-07-05, 01:24 AM | #4 | |||||||
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
Like ink in clear water i can see the disease of dark clouds
As hatred builds all around......and my enemys..... who were friends of me begin to unshroud My possesions build like a kingly estate my gaments of silken cloth Waxen candles burn the shadows on the walls reflecting my thoughts I stand alone a rich man who can not buy campanionship Who can trust none so is left as one in abondonment Personal banishment....... those i dont know love me more then themselves But its not love of me...... but for who i am.......and love is not returned by my cold wealth My name is known on the tongues of strangers But i live in constant danger so i stand in dark rooms with my anger Who loves me and who loves who i am? Who loves the man i am and who just loves THE MAN that i am? Diamonds and pearls reflect the loss of light in my irises As i sucumb to sickness and viruses of mental silences Soon i see things as they are but not as they are And i trap myself in a mental prison hanging from bars THEY DONT LOVE ME THEY WANT WHAT I HAVE AND THEY CANT HAVE IT!! So i stay inside as my skin pales my eyes becoming rabid I curse my fans who tell me to stop cuz im gifted But the drugs help to calm me............... im not addicted! They are my medicine to help me cure this inflicted sickness! Theres nothing left to do im dieing inside so i pray But who can hear me if im GOD? Thats what i belive and most of my fans say
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01-10-05, 05:01 AM | #5 | |||||||
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
i win on no show its 5 am monday morning i win
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01-10-05, 10:49 AM | #6 | |||||
Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: D0F4 97AB
Many strive for the very things to many men have journey'ed for
The very thing that have led men to the graves and to start wars Who was it that said money makes the world go round? Its wierd something so simple but many fail to realise how its so profound Stradom, fame, celebrity all things that can bring them to touch their dreams So one day they can can sit back, relax and just stare at how their gold gleams I'll do whatever it takes,they so often say, so that riches I attain No pain no gain, its horryfying the things people quote about those who maintain Fame and forune can be sub-divided into divisions and explored universally Because everywhere around the world, men fight for fortune personally From murderers, to assains to drugs, to the tragic story of a fallen street thug Many fail to realise the stem, the core that holds it and acts as a plug It causes eys eo shine, eyebrows to raise, shame it cant cause sadness to fade So many have reached that plateau and realised that the dream is a facade The American Dream, the land of oppurtunity, work for ourself and you succeed Please, people have been victorius, but few have found what they need The African civilisations of old, survived for millenias with out currency As history states, the Europeans came, and brang with them the sin of greed Fame and fortune, what a cacthy phrase, but watch your friends Cos behind you there smiles and looks will turn to an envious, evil gaze I sit here and reflect about the theme's connations as if all negative What can I say in the modern world of wars and lies its hard to be positive But I must confess, through much stress, and with God's eternal bless Many have progressed, worked through the world mess to success Through blood sweat and tears, and the shedding of their own blood Many have risen form the ashen heaps to the promised heights above Fame and fortune, an idea that in our dimension keeps many alive Gives them the hopes, aspirations to stay pure and survive Pushes people to educate their minds and expand their conscious So one day they may sit back and give the seeds of tommorow promise Give the world's evoluion respect and as I sit back and reflect on fame and fortune I expose its pitfalls and advantages as my mind spins in the eye of the storm Because I write my poetry with God's spiirit in my being Because Fame and Fortune is a concept and idea, worth seeing Peace
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01-10-05, 10:52 AM | #7 | |||||
Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: D0F4 97AB
Dear Valor and CALI (lol),
My post is l8 because: internet went down yday and so i wasnt even on Rv after 12 because of this, and that aint bullshit cos im always on until about 2.00 when i watch pimp my ride....if u wanna jus DQ me u can, but i put time into this and i thinkit'd b harsh,and his drop is dope and b interestin 2 c who u think won, as for sayin is hould have dropped earlier, you can check all my poetry i always sit and do it and submit it on the sunday....im submitting this from school and you can check the IP address, hopefully when i get home ill have my connection back cos i told mum to sort it out. Peace
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01-10-05, 11:40 AM | #8 | |||||||
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
no dq and i will explain why ..........i thought my net was going off on the fifth as alot of people know and i still dont know whats going on it was suppose to be dqed anyday now so once i accepted i keystyled my verse to make sure i didnt get a no show just in case if my comp had went off i wouldve went to the libary and dropped from there but i wouldnt have no showed you waited to the last minute reason why i dont know your not as busy as me i work and do a track everyday audio and still text battle plus drop this your a cool dude but no you have no excuse for this so i will say next time you shouldnt wait till the last minute valor dq him and give me george next round that is all.
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01-10-05, 12:12 PM | #9 | |||
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IP: DF57 53EE
not to freepost. but, first off.
use a fuckin' period once in a while. second, just because he merked you, don't be a bitch and have him dq'ed. let people vote. if you believe you won, then you have nothing to worry about. |
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01-10-05, 12:34 PM | #10 | ||||||
Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: DD6F C012
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yo homie...im not as busy as u? lol ma life dont revolve around RV and the poetry league, im more worried about getting into university,work, my family situations n shit, helpin ma grandma out...jus cos i aint tryin to get into rap game and droppin audio 24/7 dnt mean i aint got a busy life..so check that........if you want me dq'ed fine b like dat but i thought ud understand man and wud be betta than that....ur tha 1 who was hypin dis battle and now u dont want it voted on??? .........but fine i aint bothered......do as u will..... Peace
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01-10-05, 05:48 PM | #11 | ||||||||
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
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IP: 5671 DBDD
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yes i want the dq i think you shouldve dropped sooner its your own fault for waiting till the last minute i do audio everyday battle text go to work chill with wifey help my grandmother and im moving yet i find time to not only drop but have plenty of time left so i find your excuse invalid
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01-10-05, 06:29 PM | #12 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
Welll I Was Gonna vote But Now That i Look Over The Post I see that its bout To be Dq'ed So
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01-10-05, 11:08 PM | #13 | |||||
A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
acuity looses to late drop.....im sorry rules are rules man.....nice drop by both..peace
C.A.L.I wins
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