Battle Rules:

10 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Topic: You are a hostage in the US Embassy

Minimum posts to vote: 60

Check in by: 01-05-05 at 10:21 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Win by forfeit

50hater_killer has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 09:37 PM.

d-cËpt!0n has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-05-05 09:38 PM.

Opener//
The doors where painted with blood,
while the men fleed in the building like a flood.
I was force underneath my desk,
where I could smeel the stintch of death.

verse//
I lie underneath my desk, 1
as the smell of flesh ripped through my mind.2
I could hear the screams of men and women as they shot,3
but all I could do was watch as they took shots like pot.
The windows where painted with blood,4
while the bullets filled the room like water does ina flood.5
I tried to peer through my swollen eyes from the gas,
but all I saw was a vivid image of a throat being slashed, 6
I heard their vivid yells,
but as they shot out the window I heard the military bells. 7

They searched the office for their men and women,8
but when I dared not to move I was thrown like a toy of he-man.9
They lined us all up one by one as if we where gonna be bought,10
as I listened to their sorrow prairers I hear their last minute breath will they where shot. 11
I am stuck in a crisis, 12
where this will not be resolved due to some political biasis. 13
as they came face to face with their prize, 14
I was scared and I am not gonna tell no lie. 15
as my final hour came with the light, 16
I could only see as the gun shot into my eyes with a light yet so bright. 17
as I lay in my own pool with my killers,
I knew that this day would be the day that would be known as the terroist fillers.

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uppppppppppppppppppppppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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In a dark room, Im consumed by the absence of light
Little girls doom, startled by the precense of a knife
"Everyday we will take a life, until the payment comes
She was first in line, little girl's time was done
With a flick of the wrist, made a slit in her throat
Then completely beheaded , ripped like a sacrificial goat
Mother's face sprayed with the life liquid of her little girl
Tears me blood droplets as it mixed with each pearl
The face cast into a gaze dropped into her mothers lap
She kissed the fore head, looked up, started to laugh
My companion is a woman, lost her daughter and her head
At night the screams mix with dreams drenched in red
Been six days now all i smell is the stench of dead
I go back to see that woman her face still smiling lifelessly
Then Im met by eu

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Pressed post by accident but guess dere aint nothin I can do about it.

Voted For: d-cËpt!0n

Vote goes to D


cause .. 50 kept usin the same words again .. like Desk. and his flow was off .. and the vocan was 5th Grade Minded ..

D got this .. ferr shizzlin .. cause i like'd his flow .. n shiit .. and his shit was deep .. This shit was nice image shit thing ..

Nuff said

what da fuck ever ok where upppin still in her!!!!

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^^^^^^^^^^^uppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iinnnnnnnnnn^^^^^^^^^^^

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Voted For: d-cËpt!0n

iight im votin for deception reason bein he had a consistant way of makin you visualize how tragic such a thing could be...and reason why i aint vote for 50hater here..was cuz the opener was trash and yet you showed you aint have a good vocab rhymin wit flood in the opener and then once again in ya verse?..and the same for the word vivid as well..but yeah my vote goes to Deception 1ne..

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Audio Head of The Month "JUNE"

...Bronxs Finest NUCCA!!!..FaLL BaCk ...

thnx ho uppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn dis one.

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Upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin. Ill return the favor by votin honestly on your battle

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Upiin this thing for votes. cmon people................Il return votes honestly.

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