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black queen | 5 | 100.00% | |
Cheerios | 0 | 0% | |
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01-12-05, 04:43 PM | #1 | |
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black queen vs Cheerios
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01-12-05, 04:43 PM | #2 | |
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Cheerios has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-12-05 04:43 PM.
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01-12-05, 04:52 PM | #3 | |
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Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-12-05 04:52 PM.
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01-12-05, 05:07 PM | #4 | |
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Cheerios's verses are written with chicken shit, cuz he 'carves in fear'
Like airplanes full of gay skydivers, i'm about To 'drop this queer'! Men 'Rock' ya rear, makin ya feel hardcore With sword's stuck in you My verse is like pornstars with virgins, cuz I'm bored 'fuckin You'! He forces more "shit" on his drops than a fatman with constipation, his multis ''lose more purpose" than the times he faked a masterbation I'll give-em-heat when this battles done over, your sure to bitch-and-whine all your skills are like 'mexicans', always below 'border-line'! I'll make an example out of him, expose his "fake blackness" He's a good lesson to learn from, as the definition of rap whackness//
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01-12-05, 05:21 PM | #5 | |
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Yo i kno im pretty good the test yes i just passed shit
I Blow portions of ya 'booty' so ur verse .........u defenetly half assed it You got gats to blast off i'll light this task off and blow the track spot This bitch is trying to prove she aint a man when her .........breaths more furiocios than 'Shaqs' Cough You whack off its ok gurl a first loss is all you need indeed My rec's gettin Bigger cause its like its been 8 weeks .........after planting a sunflower seed my flows so hot so thats somthing im gonna have 2 teach yes ur structure lookin freaky and weird like seein ......... Missy elliot in bikini at the beach done hurry up and spit
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The Establishment Battle's Cheerios vs Lil Avenger Cheerios vs Armada Da 187 Cheerios vs *...Loyalty...* Cheerios vs Black Queen |
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01-12-05, 05:57 PM | #6 | |
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pretty good verse girl Nice Nice
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The Establishment Battle's Cheerios vs Lil Avenger Cheerios vs Armada Da 187 Cheerios vs *...Loyalty...* Cheerios vs Black Queen |
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01-12-05, 05:57 PM | #7 | ||
No Relation To Tina
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Voted For: Black Queen
nice battle here....but it was pretty easy to see who won......... Black queen......... 1st bar-nice opener...hit hard....nice wordplay....good bar 2nd-lol....another nice bar...hit hard...good wordplay 3rd-decent...hit decent...overall just a decent bar 4th-lol....nice shit.....hit nicely 5th-hmm ok...prolly your worst bar....it was nothin more than an ok bar Cheerios................ 1st-nicely worded....good wordplay...just dont use all the dots...it fucks the structure up.....good opener 2nd-hmm...decent.....wasnt really feelin it that well...didnt hit too hard 3rd-blah....self glory...no punch 4th-it was and ok closer....nothin more nothin less overall................. black queen gets this easily because her whole verse was full of nice wordplay and good punches.....her punches hit a lot harder......and overall she just had a better verse.....nice battle.....black queen....please return the favor with a vote on my tag team battle....me n buddha vs cbo and dex....link in sig....thanks |
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01-13-05, 02:54 PM | #8 | ||
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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Voted For: Black Queen
u took dis shit easy mah.....ya first 4 lines were betta than his whole verse lol true story...cheer fam ya lines r 2 long how can u flow dat shit... opener-black structure-black punchlines-black creativity-black multis-black wordplay-nun finisher-black..cheer u shouln't of spit dat line lol enjoyed-black......her verse was all around betta nuff said.. return it ya'll links in da sig
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01-13-05, 05:20 PM | #9 | ||
Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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Voted For: Black Queen
Cheerios Yo i kno im pretty good the test yes i just passed shit I Blow portions of ya 'booty' so ur verse .........u defenetly half assed it -Not bad opener, only really using an ok punch, nothing more in it. 5/10 You got gats to blast off i'll light this task off and blow the track spot This bitch is trying to prove she aint a man when her .........breaths more furiocios than 'Shaqs' Cough -Ok i suppose. Weak punch, using a metaphor but not really to great use. 4/10 You whack off its ok gurl a first loss is all you need indeed My rec's gettin Bigger cause its like its been 8 weeks .........after planting a sunflower seed -Weak punch, didnt land and i wasnt feelin it at all. Sorry. 3/10 my flows so hot so thats somthing im gonna have 2 teach yes ur structure lookin freaky and weird like seein ......... Missy elliot in bikini at the beach -That is much more like it. Damn good closer i thought. Hard punch and landed. If only more of the verse could have been this good. 7/10 Black Queen Cheerios's verses are written with chicken shit, cuz he 'carves in fear' Like airplanes full of gay skydivers, i'm about To 'drop this queer'! -Good opener. definately. Metaphor use with hard punch that landed. I was feeling this defo. 7/10 Men 'Rock' ya rear, makin ya feel hardcore With sword's stuck in you My verse is like pornstars with virgins, cuz I'm bored 'fuckin You'! -Quite cool. Ok filler, not-so-hard punch that definately landed but wasnt the best. 5/10 He forces more "shit" on his drops than a fatman with constipation, his multis ''lose more purpose" than the times he faked a masterbation -Ok i guess. Liked the set up but it was let down a little by the final punch. Seemed like a fake personal. 5/10 I'll give-em-heat when this battles done over, your sure to bitch-and-whine all your skills are like 'mexicans', always below 'border-line'! -Cool, liking this, quite a hard punch and it definately landed. 6/10 I'll make an example out of him, expose his "fake blackness" He's a good lesson to learn from, as the definition of rap whackness// -Heavy opener. You definately took this battle and using that closer just rubbed it in. 8/10 overall: Black Queen just came so heavier and much more clever. Right from the start there wasnt much of a contest. Good verse Black Queen
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01-13-05, 08:10 PM | #10 | ||
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Voted For: Black Queen
Aii This Is How I feel Black Queen Takes This Battle bcuz if You Compare Their Bars Like Their OpeningS youll see that Black Queen Came ALOT much harder ......... and Her Punchez Hit alot Much harder ..... Came Sort of Nice wit The vocab BuT I Can See That Black Queen Takes This battle |
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01-14-05, 12:09 AM | #11 | ||
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Voted For: Black Queen
Lmfao She Merked You Cus............
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