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Old 01-09-05, 11:00 AM   #1
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14.Socrates vs. 32.Hotshh

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Old 01-09-05, 06:00 PM   #2
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Old 01-09-05, 09:36 PM   #3
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Old 01-11-05, 03:50 AM   #4
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I dont know why hes here, see this cats played
So watch as I drop HS like kids with bad grades
You wanna win this shit? the fact is you never will
See you're coming in second....cuz i got time to kill
And now the win is mine, just ask the voting panel
Got chances so remote, ya shit could change channels
You can add all the !!!'s you want, ya shits still plain
Cuz even in toilets, hotshh's going down the drains
Bring the best you have, cuz aint much you got in ya
Shit i'm 8 times more gifted, and its not even hanukah
Before this tourney, we'd just look at you and laugh
So yeah ya hot son...too bad ya verse is the other half
Who knows why you got here, son its makin me sick
I got Cali on my side....you just got C.A.L.I. on ya dick
And yo,What kinda name is that? I just find it plain silly
Look I could stop hotshh! as easy as just not eating chilis
Think before you step man, ask around, im crazy, no lie
Cuz when I rip all ya organs, its my choice if you liver die

Goodluck playa
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Old 01-11-05, 09:41 PM   #5
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sorry late comp froze..


If U think U fit to be King..Im Here to switch Administrations
Your work of Art....Yeah....Ya personilties an Illustration
U aint a Boss You a corpse with a Brain..Scorching in Flames
So Hot'll leave Soc in the Cold... Like Orphans in Maine...
In July we both came..... made Final Four.....we played the Game
But since u took yours from a book dat proves you'll never make a Name
If defeat breeds Elevation Soc'll learn some Rare Tricks.......
Cuz the longest streak you'll ever have is when U dye ya Hair Dick
"Great men do great things".......but this fag?.... I doubt it
Its not an Issue..take dis loss and write the next Mag About it
So Killa Kali were he from? SocRates below the Sea Floor
Ya can Shit on my writtens i typed THIS on a Keyboard..
Thoughout the tourney u've been favored now u worried and it bother u
But if they crown me King....at least u'll be a prince cuz I Fathered You..
I would bury him... but he spits enuff dirt to fill Any Casket....
So Ill change his face more times than Schema Switched the Semi Matches
Make mockeries of your philosophies so properly lay low
history repeats itself.... cuz Im sonning Socrates like Platos....


*socrates was platos (play-tos) protege..
 
Old 01-11-05, 10:52 PM   #6
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Socrates:
I dont know why hes here, see this cats played
So watch as I drop HS like kids with bad grades
Nice opener, good wordplay in the 2nd line
You wanna win this shit? the fact is you never will
See you're coming in second....cuz i got time to kill
Decent punch
And now the win is mine, just ask the voting panel
Got chances so remote, ya shit could change channels
Setup was weak, but you made up for it with the 2nd line
You can add all the !!!'s you want, ya shits still plain
Cuz even in toilets, hotshh's going down the drains
Good personal play off his name
Bring the best you have, cuz aint much you got in ya
Shit i'm 8 times more gifted, and its not even hanukah
Self-gloried, but good meta here
Before this tourney, we'd just look at you and laugh
So yeah ya hot son...too bad ya verse is the other half
Another nice play off his name
Who knows why you got here, son its makin me sick
I got Cali on my side....you just got C.A.L.I. on ya dick
Lol
And yo,What kinda name is that? I just find it plain silly
Look I could stop hotshh! as easy as just not eating chilis
Seemed a little forced here, overall it's just aight
Think before you step man, ask around, im crazy, no lie
Cuz when I rip all ya organs, its my choice if you liver die
Good wordplay, punch was decent

hotshh!:
If U think U fit to be King..Im Here to switch Administrations
Your work of Art....Yeah....Ya personilties an Illustration
Decent opener
U aint a Boss You a corpse with a Brain..Scorching in Flames
So Hot'll leave Soc in the Cold... Like Orphans in Maine...
Good rhyming here, was feeling 2nd line
In July we both came..... made Final Four.....we played the Game
But since u took yours from a book dat proves you'll never make a Name
Punch was lacking here
If defeat breeds Elevation Soc'll learn some Rare Tricks.......
Cuz the longest streak you'll ever have is when U dye ya Hair Dick
Decent
"Great men do great things".......but this fag?.... I doubt it
Its not an Issue..take dis loss and write the next Mag About it
Nice meta here, good personal too
So Killa Kali were he from? SocRates below the Sea Floor
Ya can Shit on my writtens i typed THIS on a Keyboard..
Dope bar, nice play off his name in 1st line, good play off his title and nice wordplay in the 2nd line
Thoughout the tourney u've been favored now u worried and it bother u
But if they crown me King....at least u'll be a prince cuz I Fathered You..
Blah, setup was rather weak, and punch didn't really deliver
I would bury him... but he spits enuff dirt to fill Any Casket....
So Ill change his face more times than Schema Switched the Semi Matches
Decent punch
Make mockeries of your philosophies so properly lay low
history repeats itself.... cuz Im sonning Socrates like Platos....
Nice closer

I gotta say, this has gotta be the closest match I've seen thus far in the tourney. Both of you came with good wordplay and punches, but hotshh! you had a few more weaker lines, and that brought your verse down. Other than that you had some good shit, but Soc barely edged it out here.

V// Socrates
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Old 01-12-05, 03:53 PM   #7
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I dont know why hes here, see this cats played
So watch as I drop HS like kids with bad grades
nothing special 7/10
You wanna win this shit? the fact is you never will
See you're coming in second....cuz i got time to kill
better tehn ur opener 8.5/10
And now the win is mine, just ask the voting panel
Got chances so remote, ya shit could change channels
2nd line was good 1st 1 could be reworded 8.5/10
You can add all the !!!'s you want, ya shits still plain
Cuz even in toilets, hotshh's going down the drains
a decent personal 8/10
Bring the best you have, cuz aint much you got in ya
Shit i'm 8 times more gifted, and its not even hanukah
good metaphore but no real punch 7.5/10
Before this tourney, we'd just look at you and laugh
So yeah ya hot son...too bad ya verse is the other half
decent 8/10
Who knows why you got here, son its makin me sick
I got Cali on my side....you just got C.A.L.I. on ya dick
lol 9/10
And yo,What kinda name is that? I just find it plain silly
Look I could stop hotshh! as easy as just not eating chilis
2/10 omg no cjilli lines wow
Think before you step man, ask around, im crazy, no lie
Cuz when I rip all ya organs, its my choice if you liver die
pretty good wordplay 8.5/10
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If U think U fit to be King..Im Here to switch Administrations
Your work of Art....Yeah....Ya personilties an Illustration
better then soc opener 8/10
U aint a Boss You a corpse with a Brain..Scorching in Flames
So Hot'll leave Soc in the Cold... Like Orphans in Maine...
nto feelin it 7/10
In July we both came..... made Final Four.....we played the Game
But since u took yours from a book dat proves you'll never make a Name
5/10 im nto sure what thsi was
If defeat breeds Elevation Soc'll learn some Rare Tricks.......
Cuz the longest streak you'll ever have is when U dye ya Hair Dick
7/10 not very good punch
"Great men do great things".......but this fag?.... I doubt it
Its not an Issue..take dis loss and write the next Mag About it
7/10
So Killa Kali were he from? SocRates below the Sea Floor
Ya can Shit on my writtens i typed THIS on a Keyboard..
good 9/10
Thoughout the tourney u've been favored now u worried and it bother u
But if they crown me King....at least u'll be a prince cuz I Fathered You..
6/10 fther lines ae blah
I would bury him... but he spits enuff dirt to fill Any Casket....
So Ill change his face more times than Schema Switched the Semi Matches
good puncs lol 9.5/10
Make mockeries of your philosophies so properly lay low
history repeats itself.... cuz Im sonning Socrates like Platos....
good cplose 8.5/10
61.5

both of u didnt come very good not very many perconals lot of played lines but my vote si for soc
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Old 01-12-05, 04:30 PM   #8
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thsi is ur warning dont freepost again

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Old 01-12-05, 04:35 PM   #9
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this is ur warning do not freepost again
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Old 01-12-05, 05:22 PM   #10
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I dont know why hes here, see this cats played
So watch as I drop HS like kids with bad grades
You wanna win this shit? the fact is you never will
See you're coming in second....cuz i got time to kill
And now the win is mine, just ask the voting panel
Got chances so remote, ya shit could change channels
Bring the best you have, cuz aint much you got in ya
Shit i'm 8 times more gifted, and its not even hanukah
Think before you step man, ask around, im crazy, no lie
Cuz when I rip all ya organs, its my choice if you liver die

vs


How did you make it this far? I mean seriously.. all of your punches were worded horribly.. not fresh concepts.. non hitting wordplay.. blah

V/ Socrates for actually having some decent punches.. he wins with 5 bars to none
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Old 01-12-05, 05:42 PM   #11
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I dont know why hes here, see this cats played
So watch as I drop HS like kids with bad grades
good
You wanna win this shit? the fact is you never will
See you're coming in second....cuz i got time to kill
aight
And now the win is mine, just ask the voting panel
Got chances so remote, ya shit could change channels
good
You can add all the !!!'s you want, ya shits still plain
Cuz even in toilets, hotshh's going down the drains
lol good
Bring the best you have, cuz aint much you got in ya
Shit i'm 8 times more gifted, and its not even hanukah
sg.........
Before this tourney, we'd just look at you and laugh
So yeah ya hot son...too bad ya verse is the other half
nice
Who knows why you got here, son its makin me sick
I got Cali on my side....you just got C.A.L.I. on ya dick
lol
And yo,What kinda name is that? I just find it plain silly
Look I could stop hotshh! as easy as just not eating chilis
ight...ehh
Think before you step man, ask around, im crazy, no lie
Cuz when I rip all ya organs, its my choice if you liver die
wordplay...punch was soft though

If U think U fit to be King..Im Here to switch Administrations
Your work of Art....Yeah....Ya personilties an Illustration
ight
U aint a Boss You a corpse with a Brain..Scorching in Flames
So Hot'll leave Soc in the Cold... Like Orphans in Maine...
decent....multies i guees
In July we both came..... made Final Four.....we played the Game
But since u took yours from a book dat proves you'll never make a Name
no
If defeat breeds Elevation Soc'll learn some Rare Tricks.......
Cuz the longest streak you'll ever have is when U dye ya Hair Dick
could ahve been wroded better,
"Great men do great things".......but this fag?.... I doubt it
Its not an Issue..take dis loss and write the next Mag About it
good lol
So Killa Kali were he from? SocRates below the Sea Floor
Ya can Shit on my writtens i typed THIS on a Keyboard..
lol
Thoughout the tourney u've been favored now u worried and it bother u
But if they crown me King....at least u'll be a prince cuz I Fathered You..
ehh....
I would bury him... but he spits enuff dirt to fill Any Casket....
So Ill change his face more times than Schema Switched the Semi Matches
aight
Make mockeries of your philosophies so properly lay low
history repeats itself.... cuz Im sonning Socrates like Platos....
decently good

basically soc had better concepts and harder and more consistant punches.....hotshh had some aight personals dont get me wrong, but soc's verse also had good personals and puncehs most of all he was consistant and wittier

v/soc
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Old 01-12-05, 11:42 PM   #12
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I win....by KO

Close this already.
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Old 01-13-05, 09:58 AM   #13
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I predicted that ^
 
Old 01-13-05, 01:10 PM   #14
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In July we both came..... made Final Four.....we played the Game
But since u took yours from a book dat proves you'll never make a Name
^^^nobody got this line... it was good, just needed better wording... he's sayin that since this was already a name, he took it, and can't make a name for himself. thats a solid personal
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Old 01-13-05, 01:18 PM   #15
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Soc wins by KO

advances to the final
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