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Notorious Verses | 5 | 100.00% | |
J.R. Freeze | 0 | 0% | |
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01-13-05, 07:29 PM | #1 |
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Notorious Verses vs J.R. Freeze
IP: 58E6 C588
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4-10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting chekin 30 min due 40min Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-13-05 at 07:59 PM Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in. |
01-13-05, 07:39 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 58E6 C588
J.R. Freeze has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-05 07:39 PM.
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01-13-05, 07:58 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-13-05 07:58 PM.
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01-13-05, 08:16 PM | #4 |
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IP: 58E6 C588
|Get hit-wit-“Nines” like Toy R Us at Christmas-time | Gettin’ “Hacked” in a “Wizard Jersey” is da only time you “Rip-a-Mike”!!
|You as bitch as tits-an-clits-combined | Have ya “ass” sticked-wit-crucifixes-of-Christ to get ya “Shit”-Devine|(dammmnnnn) rippppinnin...... GASSIN FLAME til u CATCH ABLAZE / ur gone in tha wind i’m jus scattering ur ASHES AN UR LAST REMAINZ /// rippin ur visions is my *tradition* bitch i CUSTOM*EYEZ / Verse wud love to hold mah dick so he can say he CLUTCHED A NINE // FUCC YA RHYMEZ / people wudn’t come to see what u got *in store* if u posted an *OPEN SIGN*!! / an Freez giving u a ‘L’ like playing *chess* when u *JUMP WIT A KNIGHT*! //// murda..... can't TEST THA SMARTZ *infra REDZ* WILL SPARK, i'll have u *curled over tha "dot"* like a *QUESTION MARK*! // dese quotes corrode Verses as i DISECT EM APART / i'll throw ur *organz* in the *atlantic* so u can *flow* wit *DEPTH* AN *HEART*! //// |
01-13-05, 08:37 PM | #5 | |
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 0825 899A
Dude's Nervous, Stripped His "ROD" Like Curtains Man, Freeze Ur Worthless?...
Prolly, Cuz I Spur Through This "Ice Man" Like His Name Was George Gervin* Lol...Check His Sig...Dukes Says He Titer Dan My Baby Sis, Well Guess What? She's Loose Dis Guy's Been Used ....Ill Scream At Him Harder But I Found Out He Cant Take "Verbal Abuse"* Flow From Far, Steamin Like Mars, Havent U Heard Im Known To Own "Flamin Barz"* Dat'll Melt Yo Ice In Ya Sig, U Braggin At A Star Cuz U Ten And Four?...lol Ya Cant Hol Me, Ya Name Alone Signifies That U Dont Spit Fire Ur Game? It Expired...Time to Perspire.... Come Back Wen Ur Rank Is Higher |
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01-13-05, 08:41 PM | #6 | |
23-7, 16 Knockouts
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IP: 0825 899A
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San Antonio had a great legend named George "The IceMan" Gervin Verbal Abuse KO'd dis dude I Beat Flamin Barz |
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01-13-05, 08:54 PM | #7 | |
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IP: 9D36 8781
Voted For: Notorious Verses
JR freeze Nasty ass verse but it will be better when ur structure is good u kno how to fix that u need a trip to the tutorials any ways u had all tight ass lines i liked reading it from head 2 toe but what messed u up was like when u was sayin DAMNNNN and shit like that threw u off task work on ya struc Notorious Verses u had that 1 line that blew his fuckin lid off that george Gervin line was to ill lol so ur structure wasn't as bad but it was bad and sum of ur punches didint hit as hard but u get this 1 by far from me
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01-13-05, 09:17 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 6832 066D
Voted For: Notorious Verses
Wow Nv Had Some Decent Shit I Liked His Better......... Openor=Nv Jr Didnt Rhyme Punches=Nv,Some Hard Hittin Punches Personals=Nv,Some Decent Punches Not Tha Best.. Strukture=Nv,Jr's Wass Hard Ta Read At Some Parts Vokab=None Yall Need Ta Up Ya Vokab Closer=Nv,His Wass Ok,Ok Punch Good Shit........ Nv Came Harder With Tha Punches,Personals And His Strukture Wass Easy To Read................. /V NotoriousVerse...........
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01-13-05, 09:27 PM | #9 | |
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IP: A0DC A88A
Voted For: Notorious Verses
N V you had several multies to go along and make this nice verse flow good you used pretty strong punches pretty strong personals you used good vocab also Flow From Far, Steamin Like Mars, Havent U Heard Im Known To Own "Flamin Barz"* Dat'll Melt Yo Ice In Ya Sig, U Braggin At A Star Cuz U Ten And Four?...lol ^^^^^^^^your whole verse was great except for this bar^^^^^ you kinda fell apart there but for the most part ur verse was nice 7/10 jr freeze not being mean but ur verse was kinda wack...your structure was terrible and you used weak personals and weak punchlines work on structure and flow multies and punchlines/personals ur verse was a 3/10 worste ive seen in a while sorry my vote..............obvious
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01-13-05, 09:29 PM | #10 |
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Notorious Verses
I VOTED FOR U ONLY CUZ I COULDNT UNDERSTAND JR I UNDERSTOOD WHEERE NV CAME FROM
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01-13-05, 09:56 PM | #11 | |
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IP: B251 5588
Voted For: Notorious Verses
my vote--- Notorious Bascialy structure and word play was what won this battle. Flow was iight for the both of you and vocb wasn't to great but it wasn't that bad. I give notorious a 8.9/10 and J.R. a 8.9/10.
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