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shi-1 | 5 | 100.00% | |
M.A.F.i.A | 0 | 0% | |
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01-28-05, 08:56 AM | #1 | |
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M.A.F.i.A vs shi-1
IP: 0825 899A
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6 barz No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-31-05 at 08:56 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
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01-28-05, 02:11 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
M.A.F.i.A has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-28-05 02:11 PM.
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01-28-05, 02:16 PM | #3 | |
New to RV
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
From the get go, i'ma let my quotables fool ya
cuz u aint got common sense, so ya odor's peculiar SHI-1, that aint a name u should try ta' defame u must be sittin in a opened Xbox, cuz yo behind in the game yeah i'm slept on, but thaz what annoyin people do plus i still got the capacity to let the soil sleep on u i dunno why u rap, who u think ya kiddin mate? the only way u'd have hard bars is if u was Shyne's prisonmate i'm shootin fo the top, n if i'm denied ma' spot, then shit'll git hairier than ya shadow at 5 o'clock
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M.A.F.i.A ......Tha MAFIA
"DO WHAT YOU SAY, MEAN WHAT YOU DO" M.A.F.i.A YOUR RHYMES ARE |
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01-30-05, 07:23 AM | #4 | |
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IP: FE61 1311
Shi-1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-30-05 07:23 AM.
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01-30-05, 07:26 AM | #5 | |
Flyweight
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IP: FE61 1311
As I slaughter you, nobody will bother to squeeze a tear drop
Hell, the MAFIA’s been dead since Little Ceez career flopped The sheer shock when this queer drops, no punches is all you saw M.A.F.I.A., you’re so pussy…. for short I’ll just call you Ma’ Somehow I just don’t believe it. You suburban kids are questionable. I’ve watched GodFather movies too, but its clear who was more impressionable But Shi knows you’re a Good Fella!! …….Yes your records researched by her. And the closest you’ve been 2 a mafia, is with the Sopranos…..in ur church choir Your works tired,… your 1-word rhyme scheme is rather sulky Hell, I use to write like that too! Now I understand the concept of multi’s And you obviously haven’t grasped that. So don’t ever think that ur testin me. Since you’re from Beantown. When I leave you Halfbaked, just call it ur destiny. * * * 6 bars…. And I’m done.
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Its the venomous feminist Viscious with verbal sentences.... *SHIESTY~ ONE* *HAPPY~HOLIDAYZ~BITCHEZ* *SHISTEY~ ONE* HELLO! well ummm CLICK TO HEAR MY SHORT ODE TO RAPVERSE " |
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01-30-05, 12:37 PM | #6 | |
New to RV
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IP: 0825 899A
^^^uppin for votes
return tha favor, i know u want to
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M.A.F.i.A ......Tha MAFIA
"DO WHAT YOU SAY, MEAN WHAT YOU DO" M.A.F.i.A YOUR RHYMES ARE |
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01-30-05, 02:22 PM | #7 | |
New to RV
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IP: 28AD 5545
^^^uppin for votes
return tha favor, i know u want to
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M.A.F.i.A ......Tha MAFIA
"DO WHAT YOU SAY, MEAN WHAT YOU DO" M.A.F.i.A YOUR RHYMES ARE |
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01-30-05, 04:46 PM | #8 | |
Lyrically Unchallenged
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IP: 64A0 EA20
Voted For: Shi-1
aight baby nice werk multis shi hits shi opener shi closer tie yo you need ta werk on makin your rhymes less spaced out and everything will go smoother yo mafia man your multies are shit dawg werk on ya structure too and your lines are too short anyway nice battle dawg but i gotta give it to tha miss this time playa
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02-01-05, 04:18 AM | #9 | |
Flyweight
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IP: FE61 1311
Thankz For Votin....uppin For More Votes!
.lets Go Yall.....where The Votes At? |
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02-01-05, 08:14 AM | #10 |
Light Weight
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IP: 1CF2 6A32
Voted For: Shi-1
*claps*good job to da both of you dats was hella hard but....well heres da breakdown stcture=MA' lol punches=shi,both had hella but i felt shi hit hardess personals=shi,i felt they were like continually creativity was used constsntly for both but i feel shi should take it so fasho, v/shi-1 rtf
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02-04-05, 03:52 PM | #11 | |
Back In Business
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IP: 1463 99C3
Voted For: Shi-1
too easy... shi's wordplay was definitele better than mafia's and i liked that lil cease line...lol....great way to open it up...2nd bar was kinda iffy...the other 4 bars were decent....had some humor to it... but the opener waas definitely the strongest mafia...ya need to work on ya ideas more...all ya lines were kinda simple...that shyne line was terrible....the slept on line made no sense.... the x-box line?... d it!...you got potential but ya still need work... expand on ya ideas more and try to flip 'em a lil different... try using multi's ...it's not needed but it makes for a more complex verse and might even flow better when used properly. giving it up to shi-1 this time for an obviously better verse |
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02-05-05, 12:11 AM | #12 | |
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This was feedback posted for Shi-1
IP: 34D2 D886
wow this was one-sided mos definately.. lol Shi-1 girl you had a few stretched bars but you had some consistent personals and nice punches, creative material.. but yo kno we in the same crew so i can't even vote for ya ma...................... but keep reppin, you doin good shit.. Stay Up girl..!
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02-17-05, 06:17 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Shi-1
Shi-1's Verse Somehow I just don’t believe it. You suburban kids are questionable. I’ve watched GodFather movies too, but its clear who was more impressionable And you obviously haven’t grasped that. So don’t ever think that ur testin me. Since you’re from Beantown. When I leave you Halfbaked, just call it ur destiny. Vs. Nothing Overall this was a 1-sided battle… Mafia ur drop, I wasn’t much feelin it here, punches were weak Had a good flow + structure, and that’s it, work on them punches More…but overall elevate on ur whole thing though Shi-1 you had an aight drop, punches were much harder than Mafia’s Ur structure was too-stretched here, and the flow to it was getting choppy @ the end though, but u did good no hate
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02-17-05, 06:22 PM | #14 | |
Banned: Cheating
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This was feedback posted for M.A.F.i.A
IP: 105D 2055
Well imma vote for um....... shi-1 cuz um ur stuff was way better..... mafia the line about opened xbox was the dumbest thing I think i have ever heard!!!!
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02-18-05, 08:12 AM | #15 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 1F09 F0A0
yo is this battle over yet?
How and when do battles end here? thanks for voting thus far tho people
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Its the venomous feminist Viscious with verbal sentences.... *SHIESTY~ ONE* *HAPPY~HOLIDAYZ~BITCHEZ* *SHISTEY~ ONE* HELLO! well ummm CLICK TO HEAR MY SHORT ODE TO RAPVERSE " |
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