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Old 01-28-05, 01:57 PM   #1
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Troop vs Deception vs Hells Fire

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3 Way Match Due to Odd Number of People...

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Battles Go Up Friday
Check In Due Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Verses Due Tuesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time

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Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines

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Topic: The Apocolypse
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Old 01-28-05, 02:33 PM   #2
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checkin in...this is gonna be a sick battle, triple threat goin down...big ups to the kats on the other side of this
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Old 01-30-05, 08:01 PM   #3
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Czeck ot my melodie.
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Old 01-30-05, 10:47 PM   #4
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It iz what it iz ..............Nuff Said*
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Old 02-01-05, 08:31 PM   #5
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See the steel giants that hold my soul clients
My corrupted and evil operatives, spread my defiance
Creating earth's slayers, draining mother nature
Implaing great stakes, in prepare of the devils prayer
Rituals siph-ons black blood from it sacrifice
Demons survive as they fill their appetites
I am the devil that can escape the foundry of time
I am the devil that defies the boundry of lines
I am the devil that comes unexpectedly
I am the devil thats present eternaly

Justice is your cause to pause chaos
But this causes more chaos, you seem lost
Seperation is an illusion I use to spread confusion
Lost souls run wild to find a solution
Chaos insues, but justice brewed for some order
But again seperation insues disorder
I am the devil that can escape the foundry of time
I am the devil that defies the boundry of lines
I am the devil that comes unexpectedly
I am the devil thats present eternaly

Cities of stone, Pompei come to mind?
Desecration of populations, Black Plague midevil times.
Opressive Tyrants, Stalin's social crimes
Vlad the Impaler was a student of mine
Children of a demon, hmmm maybe Columbine
Water Demons, the tsunami during Christmas time
Flames in the sky? Eleventh day of the ninth
I am the devil that can escape the foundry of time
I am the devil that defies the boundry of lines
I am the devil that comes unexpectedly
I am the devil thats present eternaly
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Old 02-01-05, 08:56 PM   #6
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As the Sun Rises and Sets over the Jerusalem Horizen
The Ressurection of Jesus Has Been Issued No Denyin
Christians and Muslims Intensions Start to --Re-Burn
As the Rumors of The Lords Son will---- Finally Return
Sinners.Homosexuals and Such will Fall Under Wrath
For not Believing in the Lords ..Return or After Math
Pierre Jurieu, Declared 1689 as the JudgeMent Days
Monarchys stayed Reblious against LovedMens Ways
Extremist Theocratics Mathematics finally Calculated
The Prophecie in Which Nostradomus was Infatuated
numerous astrologers such as ..Harvey Sat.an.Learn
As the Progress Decreased Between Jupiter and Saturn
Anabaptist prophet Melchior Hoffman Slowly Predicted
That the Second Coming could No longer be Restricted
The Apocalypse which Still to this day remains Unfinished
With UnNutrioned Anti Christs continue 2 be UnPlenished
With the Facts and Prophecies with the Turn of Millenium
Brung upon Digital Mentals Produceing Millz in Pentiums
Fantisized with an Imagenary similiar 2 Where Toons Play
Upon our Mental Capacity which Frightens us of Dooms Day
Debateing on Whether Heaven even really Exists in the Mist
Disguted with those Delivered to Hell would Maybe be Myth?
That any Individual Against His very own Word would Burn
As the Entire Universe Slowly still waits For..His..........Return
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Old 02-01-05, 09:41 PM   #7
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Apocolypse

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Intro
Earth is quiet, beauty is silent, matter of man violent
army is defiant, osama is tyrant, batter of man giant
usa went to war sounds of bombs filled terrorism sore
Bush commended then riddiculed for performance war
Korea blew up chemical attack by terrorist who blew up
thought it was us n enemies shot up fallout who glow up


Apocolypse
Buttons were pressed, millions were lost, mushroom cloud dust
Korea was stressed, shot missle as test, hit china billion bust
russia next messed, neighbor acid blest, india's turn nuke game o chess
nation left crest, of missiles in terror vest, anthrax dropped shame n mess
my legs are shaken, people are beacon, deaths toll not done taken
cancer lives taken, pyro hemisphere waken, air is biological quaken
cant shuffle thoughts, ace of spade thoughts, skin off like rust
cant muffle coughs, priest gave funeral blocks, survival a must
devils no love no lust, plagued dueteral flocks, revival set bust
My tears enrich soil, deep i depress n boil, cancer blest to toil
start was over oil, black gold killed homo, life set back in koil
why heaven let it go down, why wasnt peace and bliss found
why grim reap sis to ground, why devil kleave and shit round
end of earth, crust pealed showin poisoned fruit and all in dirt
judgement day came and went no shelter except government
starvation, vibration, malnutrition, no vision earth cries radiation
magnation, plaguenation, oni set tone cover bodies sedimentation
blood and land flow in cement, death grips souls traped in torment
emotion desolate non content, poetry spits end to happy lambnent
i have two contractions of lung left and no easy way out wit meth
i held the frozen baby as he smiled to death and i fell over context
epidermal flexed and acid rain cleaned my chest, blood n poison mixt
no more pain, no more suffer, i feel last strain n think of my lover
she died tame, before canibal buffer and innocent sent styx water
cough, cough, i bleed seein life before my eyes
cough, cough, i wish someone silence the crys
*heart contracts, lungs cave, eyes roll, luckey no one disturbed this mans grave*
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Old 02-02-05, 12:43 AM   #8
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yo heres da one link
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Old 02-02-05, 12:47 AM   #9
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who the fuck is hell fire kid is dope as fuck he aint no noob whos alais is he?wtf!anyways this was dope this was basically between troop and hell cuz even though deception had a decent drop he aint come on the level.troop good drop flow aint go to well here though imagery was ok emotion was good and vocab for you is always good but let me tell you why hell got this he had a dope ass flow vocab and imagery was crazy like a walk through the plot histroy and all shit was dope as fuck like i was watching shit unfold it played on my mental field like a movie screen purely dope and that got him my vote here
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Old 02-02-05, 12:58 AM   #10
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Deception- Man, i gotta hand it to you... 63 posts and your already pretty fucking good... You had more originality than the other two... I think when you get more experience, you will be fucking dope... You have the potential to be great, no joke kid... It's not really that your verse was really lacking anything, it's more of a need for more experience... You will be at least a lightweight championship winner in this league within a month, props dog.

Troop- Definetly knew what you were talking about here, made sure you had your facts straight... The only thing i think this verse was lacking was emotion... Shit was pretty nice with the imagery, vocab etc... Flow was choppy in some places but for the most part was good... Another good verse...

Hells Fire- Shit was off the fuckin hook dog... Props for this one...

Earth is quiet, beauty is silent, matter of man violent
army is defiant, osama is tyrant, batter of man giant

Nice way to start it off... Verse was basically flawless, i did find it strange how some lines rhymed so perfectly, like the one i posted, and some rhymes more like...

no more pain, no more suffer, i feel last strain n think of my lover
she died tame, before canibal buffer and innocent sent styx water

Basically the only thing wrong i saw, some forced rhymes in there, but good job man, you got this one...

Best topical battle i have read in my life...

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Old 02-02-05, 01:02 AM   #11
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thank you kids i been ellivatin i love writtin and if ya ever wanna do a collabo holla...my allias was B.WallakaILLNESS i guess i needed to find what i was good at and just kept workin got alot of bad rep...thanx ill post on open mic
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Yea 4 sho
propz 2 u for that Drop tho kid
i Jus started diz topical shit

Propz were propz are due
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Old 02-02-05, 07:07 AM   #13
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yeah Propz fo sho. Fire verse Hell. Lol Needaa get my link. Glad im elevating. Onli been taking this topical shit serious fo like 2 months. Yo Troop a gud word of advice, join as mani fukin topical leagues as u can. I wont tell u where 2 advertsie, but trust me it helps. Pros see u have talent and help u out. And do be afraid 2 ask help urself. ANywyayz thats what i learned.
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Old 02-02-05, 11:15 AM   #14
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yeah this was my 2nd or 3rd month tryin out da topical thing its fun as hell
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