Battle Rules:

5 bars = 10 lines (DONT EXCEED THE LIMIT)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-26-05 at 04:22 PM

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phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-26-05 03:53 PM.

Spite has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-26-05 03:53 PM.

im makin this fool happy cuz imma battle him, soon ya smile will wipe to a grim, call me fat boy slim, cuz imma funk show brotha about ta win,//
yo you cant be here to watch me ruin ya shit so ill write, my rapstyles tight, i say good night, cuz i laid ya out no de(spite)// yo kid you only wanted phive bars fo me ta spit, well imma give you full potential in this shit, imma leave ya hit, on the ground with a slit wrist//
you cant pick up cuz yur a fag, cant fight ya way out of a wet paper bag, im droppin niggas like im playin tag, break ya leg, so dont brag, cuz ya rap style i made// time fo a closer on this fool, ya uncool, im werkin you like a tool, im drownin you like a three year old in a pool//

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Phive Is standing Tall

check it.
I'll give you this loss cuz its not like im taking you of course,
rather bringing you close but what bother's me the most,
is how i ended your rap carreer with a POST!
Now your ghost, i'll toast as i watch this guy choke,
and i dont even need to pull a PHIVE JOKE
Arrive smoked on rap verse im a savage to step
cuz ur so wack, this win will damage my rep
Barrage a vet ur heat is a flare to the best,
i'll cum in ur lungs n watch the baby TEAR THROUGH UR CHEST
Dare you to test but i'll beat you anyday,
so take this loss in a friendly way
cuz hey its the INTERNET ANYWAYZ!

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'i lose battles on purpose just so rappers can dream more' - LL
Bored so im Rapping on the internet Just for Spite....
Rhyme dictionary rappers please battle me with your writerns

yo uppin fo some votes playasssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss sssssss

uppin fo some votes people s we can end this shit

Voted For: Spite

Phive's made absolutely no sense. Spite's verse was witty and hilarious. My fav line was the "this win will damage my rep." IT was so funny, i think this whole battle was pretty good. Good flow good punches and GREAT multies...
V/ Spite

return the favor
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152706

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Wow

ya right man i know i won this shit and yall should too if you think i lost you honestly dont know rap

Voted For: phive

Spite

I'll give you this loss cuz its not like im taking you of course,
rather bringing you close but what bother's me the most,
is how i ended your rap carreer with a POST!
^nice opener

Now your ghost, i'll toast as i watch this guy choke,
and i dont even need to pull a PHIVE JOKE
^decent bar

Arrive smoked on rap verse im a savage to step
cuz ur so wack, this win will damage my rep
^hmmm,okay

Barrage a vet ur heat is a flare to the best,
i'll cum in ur lungs n watch the baby TEAR THROUGH UR CHEST
^good good

Dare you to test but i'll beat you anyday,
so take this loss in a friendly way
cuz hey its the INTERNET ANYWAYZ!
^like closer

Overall you had solid drop in fact,your opener was best part, good internal rhyming and nice punches...was definately feeling your flow,structure might need some improvement but you dropped some good stuff.Vocab could be slightly better but nothing too bad...


phive

im makin this fool happy cuz imma battle him, soon ya smile will wipe to a grim, call me fat boy slim, cuz imma funk show brotha about ta win,//
^bit self-glorification...

yo you cant be here to watch me ruin ya shit so ill write, my rapstyles tight, i say good night, cuz i laid ya out no de(spite)//
^same as previous in fact...

yo kid you only wanted phive bars fo me ta spit, well imma give you full potential in this shit, imma leave ya hit, on the ground with a slit wrist//
^uhm,still no punch...

you cant pick up cuz yur a fag, cant fight ya way out of a wet paper bag, im droppin niggas like im playin tag, break ya leg, so dont brag, cuz ya rap style i made//
^decent i guess

time fo a closer on this fool, ya uncool, im werkin you like a tool, im drownin you like a three year old in a pool//
^good closer

You used a lot of self-glorification and some punches were sorta played,only one personal but most of your shit was better than Spite's...Flow was tight but you need to improve your structure to make it easier to read and maybe up your vocab a little to.Had some good wordplay here and there.

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lmao@ drama queen's vote, she explains mine to be better and votes for him. da fuck anyways uppin on this shit

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'i lose battles on purpose just so rappers can dream more' - LL
Bored so im Rapping on the internet Just for Spite....
Rhyme dictionary rappers please battle me with your writerns

yeah man you were just lucky to get a vote yo uppin this battleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

lol this battle for take more than 2 weeks to be voted on, yet there are like 200 people coming to this website everyday.

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'i lose battles on purpose just so rappers can dream more' - LL
Bored so im Rapping on the internet Just for Spite....
Rhyme dictionary rappers please battle me with your writerns

Voted For: Spite

V/Spite.......close battle but i give my vote to him cause he had punchs an they were used consistently wit good vocab an sum personals...phive....u had sum decenet lines but ur structure needs work an u need to be more creative wit ur punchs not so basic...no hate juss elavate.....
punchs=spite
structure=spite
vocab=spite
opener=spite
closer=spite
overall=Spite
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