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01-01-05, 12:46 AM
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Personify vs final
IP: D5FE 7245
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30 Lines Max No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting This is a topical battle...Topic is:Freedom at a distance If you dont understand something in either persons verse...please dont vote Good luck peace Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 01-02-05 at 12:46 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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01-01-05, 12:47 AM
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final has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 12:47 AM.
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01-01-05, 12:47 AM
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Personify has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-01-05 12:47 AM.
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01-02-05, 01:14 AM
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IP: D5FE 7245
a glimpse of the outside influences the right minds to huddle and overide the boundary called time theres a bundle of thoughts not yet expressed at this perspective to end this obstacle causing death and fatal infections a scene forms into my sight, the view shows an oasis recognizing that i am part of hells misplacement dealt with too much we lost our spirit and good health at that place angels flock with grace and flooded in wealth escaping the laws and rules of imagination staring at this glistened palace, maybe a new nation appointed as a crazy, degrading individual the view is mystifying and looks empty of criminals from this hellbound life, its encaged and tarnished here and the effect of situations almost always comes tears geared into a new light with no pulse or rapid fright no 6th sense sensing peoples fudes about to ignite like a slight prick gettin attention, no more differences or a mind full of more then horrific images time to get lose and break through those freedom blocking gates and maybe soon we'll venture to that far but friendly place
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01-03-05, 11:33 PM
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'Member Those Golden Days
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IP: 9057 CF41
They strip us and tell us how we should look a European bully
They speak in a foreign tongue so we do not understand fully Life within this room is all of my thoughts I ponder on the pain and pleasure that it has brought These chains depress me and keep my personality shadowed I am not the leader of this trend and yet I am still followed Emotion repressed by people's unneeded fears, It cannot be stopped because of their shedding of tears. My feelings and body are exposed as I am whipped like a slave As my mind wanders I remember all of the sins I once forgave My friends and family give in and let their soul be deprived They say nothings worse than death; I do not even feel alive. Air is my food, or a roach that runs across my floor Why must I suffer because of other people's war? Separated my male and female, how are we to live? They keep telling us to unleash more, yet we have nothing to give! Religion is our union; it is the only way we can relate, Because we even argue over who has the worst fate. The conditions make us vomit, and diseases are plentiful We are considered outcasts because our religion makes us horrible I despise my life; these people make me feel worthless If I just live how they say then my pain is supposed to hurt less? They send me to a chamber, but inside I wonder why? As they close the door, they ask, “Are you ready to die?" The women cry, and the begin their final prayers, The people listen and laugh because they do not care. It is not fair; while we suffer, everyone else takes life for granted, You can see your home while now I am blinded. This is the last place I will see, the last place I will remember, No this is not a Nazi camp, this is Society's Chamber. I knew I would leave this to the last minute. Ok case you did not catch it, I was metaphors. It seems like I was talking about a Nazi prison camp, where they were told to dress, had almost no food, conditions were deplorable, etc... However, the twist is that it is all metaphors for real life. I dont have time to use them all, but think about it. Starvation of food-- starving of individuality. gas chamber- suffocated by peer pressure and giving in separated by sex- sexism, how people should dress List goes on and on, but you really need to think about it. There is a lot of symbolism, and if you dont get it then you will not get my poem. By the way, the topic: freedom from a distance, my freedom is to be a individual, so having the freedom to be different in a society that frowns upon it. Vote Honest or Not At All. px |
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01-03-05, 11:42 PM
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'Member Those Golden Days
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Sorry it took so long to drop final, I kept putting it off. Nice drop. gl
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01-04-05, 03:07 PM
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IP: D5FE 7245
werd...i bet on everythin u got this lol i shouldve put more work oh well good battle anyway peace
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01-04-05, 07:33 PM
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IP: D5FE 7245
uppin............................................. .
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01-05-05, 02:49 PM
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IP: D5FE 7245
uppin............................................. .
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01-05-05, 03:37 PM
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Dang no votes? Not even a feedback. uppin^^^^^^^^^
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01-05-05, 05:19 PM
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IP: D5FE 7245
uppin............................................. .
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01-05-05, 09:36 PM
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IP: D5FE 7245
uppin............................................. .
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01-06-05, 02:51 PM
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IP: D5FE 7245
uppin............................................. .
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01-06-05, 05:58 PM
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IP: D5FE 7245
uppin............................................. .
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01-07-05, 04:16 PM
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uppin............................................. .
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