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Old 02-11-05, 05:38 PM   #1
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Daz vs Troop vs Premanition

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Battles Go Up Monday (Only Friday this time, starting after this week will be Mondays)
Check In Due Wednesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time
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Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines

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Topic : Sacrifice for Success
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Old 02-11-05, 05:40 PM   #2
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Old 02-11-05, 06:08 PM   #3
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Check Mate Bitch

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Old 02-13-05, 07:41 PM   #4
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Yeah.. Ive never done topical before..

So im probably going to no show..

Just sign me out or whatever..

I dont know why i signed in
 
Old 02-13-05, 07:49 PM   #5
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lol...

aight then its just troop vs prem

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Old 02-13-05, 07:52 PM   #6
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wow...mem jus try the shit
Cant pussy out

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Old 02-14-05, 12:04 PM   #7
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*cough* pussy *cough*
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Old 02-14-05, 02:27 PM   #8
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k, koo, this is my checkin now then.....
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n troop ....i consider you more a goldfish then a guppy..
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get ya lines up boyzz
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 02-14-05, 02:47 PM   #9
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Changed, Daz is replacing Mimesis

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Old 02-14-05, 03:19 PM   #10
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Feelings flooding intellect, brain suddenly in direct
Thus collect the jigsaw pieces that my life dissect
Wrecked but yet a hope prevails in a certain distance
This one girls existence encourages a stern resistance
For instance an addiction, true story turned fiction
Anatomy plagued by drugs now involved in eviction
Friction of relationship, thoughts position station wit
Ovation sits as mind considers that her patience slips
Educational opportunity, a chance that confuses me
Key to a future, a commanding choice that abuses me
Materialistic life with power to challenge the above
Or struggle & strife, shared with a girl that you love
Result to a dice, fate before my pride asks for advice
Success comes at a price, importance of this sacrifice
A painful decision, tears of joy? an emotional collision
Vision an empty life of waste, heart caged in prison
As I stand with mail, crooked shoulders tells a tale
Mental exhaustion, looking frail, application to unveil
Hearts ratio, pace greater, deposit letter in waste paper
A sacrifice for success? yes, to see that face later
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Old 02-17-05, 08:34 PM   #11
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My father told me son," it's OK to have ideals",
but beliefs against your government still won't pay your bills.
You can raise your fists and publicly resist
but in the end corruption still exists.
And no protest song will ever change the world.
Everybody does exactly as they are told.
In the end every man works for what is his.
You can fight the world, but that's just the way it is.
You're words are not meaningless to me,
I feel their honesty but it's my life I gotta figure out for me.
It's what I've always done not what I have become
and I know the consequences that will come.
And if I never reach the world or speak to people's souls
it's a passion that will not die as I grow old.
I stayed inschool, but this is what I choose to do
it may not work for you but to myself I know I must be true.
I am not afraid to stand right where I've stood.
My beliefs they are unchanged because I believe they should.
And I'll measure my success one word at a time.
If the truth is spoken will I stand the test of time???
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lmao, werd i forgot bout this....i didnt take much time..im to busy..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 02-18-05, 04:49 AM   #12
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The Burning Crosses sizzle Out them Chants start to Fade
But the Halusenations.. of this Past Nation are still Played
Upon my Exhausted Thinking Patterns focusing on Poverty
That Transforms our Empty Pockets into Actions of Robbery
The fight includes scratching and thriveing still not Surviving
Realization Minority Placeings,Fame comes from Sur-Rhyming
Inner Addictions for Perfection reside in my mind in Portions
Selfish Reflections present the Oppurtunity to get Abortions
Pride starts to Unify my Mind,until i Vow to deal with Satan
Popularity is my Clarity,But refuse to accept it as Fate Then
Refuseing to Miss my Circle of Success so i chose to Protest
Against the Odds of God non - Foolishness Steadily ProJects
Dealt with Bounced Checks,....Pawned those Silverish Chains
In Order 2 Conceal a Mic,2 Reveal, Sequels for Glitterish Fame
My stomach Growls,.Due to my cup being Heavely OverRunith
Fantisized with Paying Studio Costs,In order to make Hundreths
My Triumpth is just Enough,..to Cause me to Ban my very Own
Please do not have Disgust in my Trust until i have finally Grown
Into the Commercial Status of otha Rappers with the same Fate
That Shared the Same Plate and Finished the Very ..same Page
Of Eternity that Martin Luther the King eventually Experienced
Attractions of Rec Deals...cannot be Bought at Ex Clearances
Takes Pain and Gain to see through the Bluffings in order 2 Wins
Smog of Popularity haults me as if i was a Dolphin without Fins
My Pride starts to be Unified and Battle Crys scream out i Recond
Similar trates of the Greats,Are shown in each and every Legend
through every feelin of Brilliance that is Showcased in my Face
In the End i still Lose...Maybe because that was jus my Race
That i had to play Second Best under the Rest,Its not Finished
But my Soul is now Tarnished...and my Last Breath is Diminished
because Firey Flames , Ingulp my Veins and the the Rest
Minor Setbacks yet i still thrive to Win and eventually Sub Stress
But my Soul is allready Sold...And i still did not Experience Success
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Old 02-18-05, 11:27 AM   #13
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wow, im am shocked, i hate troop and he did really good.. daz, yours was alright because i liked the vocabulary but that was about it, it had no rhythm at all and just i thought that you would do better, and premanition, you just tried to pack to much vocab in like the first 4 lines, it was just terrible, you tried to make it all complex but it made it look stupid, so work on that, but i think troop did really good in this one..

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Old 02-18-05, 12:02 PM   #14
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yep wow..all 3 of these topicals sucked ass......
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what the fuck, was you high..?
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then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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Old 02-18-05, 12:04 PM   #15
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No actually jus yours

Good Shit Prem

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