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hood_dawg 5 100.00%
Lil-Youngstah 0 0%
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Old 02-22-05, 05:49 PM   #1
Lil-Youngstah
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hood_dawg vs Lil-Youngstah

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Old 02-22-05, 05:50 PM   #2
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Old 02-22-05, 05:51 PM   #3
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aight homie may da best mc win G'Luck

Bitch be actin Silly like a Groupie he be da new Hood-Rat,
Check it i'm about to Whip him into shape with Bat-Man...
This foo be thinkin he Bruce almighty da "God"
U couldn't even Spit platnums spits in da 'olympic's Mic' Hood_dawg...
He be Zeus i Be Hercules Tryin to Save da Wack-Gal,
Though i Be rescuin this Mc from His Wack Mic battle rounds...

G'Luck homie
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Old 02-22-05, 10:46 PM   #4
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Old 02-22-05, 11:16 PM   #5
Mentor
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your profile says that your a southsider
should be more like fuckin' dickrider
my words hit ya like bullets of a sniper
i use my words against ya
damn rite your a lil youngsta
my words simply shock ya, they hit ya like a shotgun
look at your crew...oh that's right u ain't got none
bout ta hit the world Guiness
for bein able ta spin this in the least amount of minutes
but enough breggin bout myself
i'm not gonna even start with the mama jokes even though
she is a milf, and it don't matter if you're online or offline
cuz once you battle me boy, your ass is mine
so don't come to me cryin' bout how shit got out of line
cuz all u did on the last battle was whine
and nuthin could be the worse after i post this verse
i'll send out the lyrical curse so badly that you'll have ta
be treated by a nurse
and we all know how retarded and immature
you are with that gay ass signature
and ya'll see what i mean
after this homo posts his verse on the screen
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Old 02-22-05, 11:30 PM   #6
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Voted For: hood_dawg

I voted for hood cause he had nicer verse, nice structure and bad-ass rhymes and he's actuall dissing his opponent, lil needs to elevate man:

He be Zeus i Be Hercules Tryin to Save da Wack-Gal,
Though i Be rescuin this Mc from His Wack Mic battle rounds...

^^^what's that man?

Vote: Hood for better flow, nicer punches
 
Old 02-23-05, 10:21 AM   #7
SUPERVILLAIN
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From: Sindicate City, U.S.A.
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Voted For: hood_dawg

im sorry gentlemen.......but this battle was a letdown (no disrespect fellas). in my opinion, neither of you came too creative or funny in this. nothing at all was really memorable to me.

hood...
you improved since the last battle i peeped of yours....good job. your structure is way better than the last time i seen it .......and you even tried to incorporate some personals in this battle (thumbs up). try to step your vocab up and fix your flow.......it was off in points. also, some of your verse seemed like filler.......be careful with that in the future. i gave you this win because you simply dropped more disses. work on those though homie.........a few of them were pretty played.

young...
work on your punches, your rhyming, your personals and your vocabulary. if you want to spice your verse up some......try to drop some multies. when you have an unlimited amount of lines to work with.....be careful. (example) if you only drop 6 hot lines.....and your opponant drops 200 mediocre lines......your opponant will most likely win due to their overwhelming attempt. i dont want to sound like im hating on you playboy......but you need to do alot of elevating brutha. check out the cypher and open mic forums. take a look at some of the work there and peep how shit is generally done. it might help you some. continue to work hard and build up ya skills cutty. goodluck out there.

please return the favor battlecats...

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Old 02-23-05, 07:13 PM   #8
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This was feedback posted for Lil-Youngstah

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Fucker Don't Mention My Name Again, I'll Merk You...........
 
Old 02-23-05, 09:16 PM   #9
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Originally Posted by Zeus'
Fucker Don't Mention My Name Again, I'll Merk You...........


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Old 03-03-05, 12:36 AM   #10
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Old 03-03-05, 09:38 AM   #11
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This was feedback posted for hood_dawg

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Checkin the polls...
Nice drop fam

Peace......
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Old 03-03-05, 11:50 AM   #12
TheFlowIsSick
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Voted For: hood_dawg

well you both suck.. lets get that out in the open first.. i gotta say hood dawg wins this because most of his verse actually rhymed and yours didnt youngsta.. but you both came wack and should really go look at other dope people's battles and see what youre doing wrong cuz this was a pitiful attempt at a battle

anyways

Vote: Hood_Dawg
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Old 03-20-05, 10:06 PM   #13
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Voted For: hood_dawg

lol u had alot more lines thats the reason u got this..lil got da punches...personals neither.....structure..neither..flow...hood dawg.....this battle was aiight but really hood dawg had much more lines......
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Old 03-21-05, 10:53 AM   #14
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Voted For: hood_dawg

hood- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........

lil- your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10.......

V/hood
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Old 03-23-05, 09:08 AM   #15
Armada Da 187
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Voted For: hood_dawg

votin for Hood

Hood took this vote due to harder punches n a better flow

The battle itslef was a pretty good one
both had good punches but hood came much harder, everyline was a good punch
Both need to throw some personals n multies into their verse punches multies n personals make a hella verse n a hard one to beat.

LIl ya came out soft but got stronger but hood was strong the whol way threw

both ya structures need a lil elevatin but hell so does mine

Flow ima havta give it to hood it all jus fit together nice
Lil ya flow was a lil skiddish wit a few stretched lines
hood had a few stretched lines to so les try to chop em down

Overall
Punches- H
Flow- H
Structure- Tie
Personals- None
Multies- None

good battle fams rtf the favor in the link below my sig
if ya do make sure its well explained
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