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10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 02-27-05 at 11:58 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 11:51 PM.

Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-27-05 11:56 PM.

Homey you done, everyone’s level’s beyond you son
That’s why we have to look backwards to see where your from
Kesse can’t ever do audio… it’s the trueth but never hurts
Cuz nothings beatin, I just hear boo’s accompany his verse
Keep your lines they aint worth biting so, I never rob’em
Not seein light at the end of your tunnel isn’t just a minor problem
U fat fuck don’t fight me like im a fuckin riot
This chubby bitch needs to learn im rapper and not a diet
Ya you sad bitch, looking back only time I’d check your status
You’ve showed ya crew lets in faggets, ya that’s the only thing established

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i look at this guy's name and wonder, whats so "perfect"
shit, with that many losses, all i can "picture" is a reject
you couldnt make a dope verse, if you were smoking pure gold
been here over a year.....winning, still dont have a secure hold
been in 45 matches, and you have more losses than your age
if i wrote down how many times you be KO'D...voters be clickin 'next page'
i'll rip this guy apart, literally leave him picking up his bones
and i dont need to worry, his rhymes more stoneage than the flinstones
so let me give you some adive, just stop, quit while your ahead
cause if your record gets any worse, this name should be but to bed

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^ should be a 'd' at the end there, pretty self-explanatory....wird

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Voted For: Kesse

eh alright battle thought that keese came harder with his punches.... alright multis and metas noth'n to special//PP2 alright drop not the greatest...

keese took...
opener
closer
punches
personals
metas
structure
vocab

PP2 took
structure

overall my vote goes to keese on this one he jus came harder

vote.//keese

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^wird, yeah, quick spit, didnt have much time, so, whatever, uppppin

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Voted For: pictureperfect2

ok you win, just my opinion ...

KESS. shit was dope but since ive been here for a while so all of your personalas that played off the name where played...lol
structre was better than pictures but it doent make up for all that non sense you posted...but very good for anewb...you just need to elevate on your punches.....other than that this shit was close but just that the name shit was played

perfect.. good shit...for someo reason i really enjoyed reading your verse, shit flowed pretty good. your personals where also punches which was good. you had a lot less fillers than the other guy, your structure is what almost lost you this battle fix that and everything will be fine

vote= picture

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return the favor on this battle...........

uuuuuping for some honest, explained feedback....fuck.....

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ya, uppin........

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