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Evolution | 2 | 28.57% | |
Non Capisco | 5 | 71.43% | |
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03-13-05, 01:43 AM | #1 | |
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Non Capisco vs Evolution
IP: CF4E 8780
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-13-05 at 02:13 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
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03-13-05, 01:44 AM | #2 | |
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IP: CF4E 8780
Non Capisco has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 01:44 AM.
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03-13-05, 01:47 AM | #3 | |
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IP: 258C A279
Evolution has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-13-05 01:47 AM.
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03-13-05, 01:57 AM | #4 | |
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IP: CF4E 8780
quick spit ...drop a link and i'll RTF
hate 2 b honest, but my rhymes is like "Scissors" ur shits like "Paper" ....listen, you beat'n me is like a midget jump'n over a skyscraper .......i'm like a lyrical "chainsaw" ........i'll cut your verse in half ......your style is like the "Dice"........its not even worth a laugh Your "Punches" is like a "Bitch Slap"no "Pain" jus a "Quiet Smack" ..."Evolution" the only thing you evolving from is lame.to str8 wack Rock Paper Scissors... scissors cuts paper... the dice was some lame comedian back in the day who was funny but got retarded.
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03-13-05, 02:04 AM | #5 | ||
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IP: 258C A279
This kid’s a newb, cuz it seems that you lack of a damn location You on my level? You’re not even close to the steps of elevation He’s just another damn bitch…who practically likes to face newbies Your still unknown kid...cuz all of RV...is saying “wait who is he?†I’ll fake-hit this bitch hea, and then jab his ass with my right I mean, you can only make your punches hot if they were this bright Look kid, your not going to take this battle, this is for real, no hate Mayn all your other battles are wack, well, all I can say is Quote:
Key'd I said put 6 Lines MAX and the bitch gonna try and be slick & put 6 UNLIMITED Lines... nice try fag...
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03-13-05, 07:00 PM | #6 | |
Blow Me
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IP: 258C A279
uppin this battle
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03-14-05, 07:10 PM | #7 |
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IP: 390A 5F59
Voted For: Evolution
Evolution: This kid’s a newb, cuz it seems that you lack of a damn location You on my level? You’re not even close to the steps of elevation aint feelin it man.....4/10 He’s just another damn bitch…who practically likes to face newbies Your still unknown kid...cuz all of RV...is saying “wait who is he?†that was decent....5/10 I’ll fake-hit this bitch hea, and then jab his ass with my right I mean, you can only make your punches hot if they were this bright not that good of a punch....4/10 Look kid, your not going to take this battle, this is for real, no hate Mayn all your other battles are wack, well, all I can say is Quote: Originally Posted by Non Capisco ...jus elevate wouldve been better if you quoted him sayin somethin about HIMSELF...5/10 non whateva: hate 2 b honest, but my rhymes is like "Scissors" ur shits like "Paper" ....listen, you beat'n me is like a midget jump'n over a skyscraper played to fuck...1/10 .......i'm like a lyrical "chainsaw" ........i'll cut your verse in half ......your style is like the "Dice"........its not even worth a laugh aint feelin it too much...1/10 Your "Punches" is like a "Bitch Slap"no "Pain" jus a "Quiet Smack" ..."Evolution" the only thing you evolving from is lame.to str8 wack naw...not too good..2/10 both sides need to elevate
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03-14-05, 09:18 PM | #8 |
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This was feedback posted for Evolution
IP: E1D7 D0FC
ahh just checkin polls evolution got this easy....
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03-14-05, 09:41 PM | #9 | ||
Blow Me
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IP: 258C A279
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i have no potential? shut, up, i alrdy beat you anywayz
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03-15-05, 12:54 AM | #10 | |
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IP: 9E0A BAC8
Voted For: Non Capisco
Non - you had some nice personals in there...good punches and flow...i liked ur closer the best...i guess whut u would work on would be vocab i guess...some good metas u had too... good spit Evolution - ur shit was pretty dope too, good flow...some punches and personals but nuthin really stuck out to me...make ur punches hit harder...keep spittin V/ Non Capisco Return The Favor...Link In My Sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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03-15-05, 10:12 AM | #11 | |
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IP: 8AB2 5BB6
uppppity up up........drop a link if u want.........
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03-15-05, 10:41 AM | #12 | |
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IP: 58E6 C588
Voted For: Non Capisco
V/Hugh Jass....this was a good battle hugh came wit creative an hard hittin punchs wit good structure an personals....Evolution u had a good verse also but i felt u didnt come as hard wit ur punchs it seemed like u came to lightly i seen better from u ....No Hate.....RETURN THE FAVOR opner=H closer=Tie Punchs=H structure=Tie personals=h vocab=tie Overall=Hugh Jass Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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03-15-05, 02:21 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 8AB2 5BB6
Thx for the vote....... upp'n. this shit ..................
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03-15-05, 02:43 PM | #14 | |
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IP: 0E9A 0A10
Voted For: Non Capisco
hugh gets this just basically i didnt think this was a great battle evo - ur verse was weak ya punches were hella basic here and very boring and predictable, you can do beta so try harder next time hugh - again not great but you had some imagination to ur punches which is gud, vergin on bein slightly played with the first line but the way you worded it made it a gud ish punch....not bad but you can also do beta overall - hugh took this quite easily peace hugh you wanna battle dawg? quik 6 lines while ur online? pm me or just set it up
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03-15-05, 02:59 PM | #15 | |
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
Voted For: Evolution
lets see non.....thought you had some nice stuff in there, your getting better man, but overall, your opener killed you, pretty played and weak, your closer was good, but evolution had better stuff....your structure, okay, i dunno about all those dots your using, kinda looks stupid, but your flow was good, no problem there, up your vocab a little, it was kinda low, wordplay was decent.....you didnt really have any personals in there, so try and get those in next time evolution, pretty solid verse man, thought every bar hit pretty hard....this was a creative verse, not too complex, but it was effective, flow and structure were bang on....nothing special with vocab....wordplay was decent, so overall, you had harder punches, you had personals in your verse, and thats why your getting my vote...... v/evolution
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