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Whyte-Out 0 0%
J DOT 5 100.00%
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Old 03-12-05, 06:28 PM   #1
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J DOT vs Whyte-Out

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Old 03-12-05, 06:31 PM   #2
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Old 03-12-05, 06:39 PM   #3
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Jus sit back yall an watch me NOK out dis bitch J-Dot,
Rejected me from NOK knowin i could merk him on da spot
By da way where da fuck is dis kats location? Mackamento,
Dumbass dont even know where hes from its "Sacromento"
Bout to rip ur punk ass apart jus like i was a lyrical shredder,
Dis fool was comin into dis battle thinkin his wack ass was better
Im bout to shut u down like a virus infected Personal Computer,
After dis damn battle turns out we will fins out whos da real loser

weak verse here but fuck it.......Pz
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Old 03-12-05, 06:40 PM   #4
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Old 03-12-05, 06:50 PM   #5
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NOK NOK MUFUCKA


Produce violence as my rhymes spit, admit yo styles my shit
If a text ‘head’ is sacred, Then yo ass is ‘mind’less
Don’t fake it, I rip timeless, shoot ‘clipse’ if ya ‘grindin’
Think ya better than JDOT..ha! bitch get ya mind stitched
Whyte Out’s a fuck up….been it his whole life
…failed at tryin suicide….he just bended tha knife
Cats duckin Young Blaze, I think he jealous of skill
I’ll ‘box’ Whyte like ‘Foreman’, then I’m steaming the ‘Grill’
…Real recognize real, you don’t look familiar B
Aint u that cat we declined from tha crew, cause ya rhymes elementary
…kid, elevate yourself or get thrown off deck
Ur apart of nuthin, the ‘dynasty’s fake like a rich girls chest
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Old 03-12-05, 06:56 PM   #6
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Yo to get dis clear J-DOT i aint got beef wit u......Good verse.....it should be a good battle........Pz goodluck
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Old 03-12-05, 07:00 PM   #7
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Voted For: J DOT

I think jdot took this one with harder punches, and better personals. jdot-yo verse merked him i think. u didnt really have too many hard punche,s but this was a easy battle. i liked yo intro, and tha multies and shit, but then u stopped after that, and switched yo style up, and it stil flowed well. thats skill. i like that. some of yo lines was kinda stretched near tha end tho. elevate on that homie. but i still think u got this
whyte out-yo verse was coo. i think u came ight, and ur elevating, but i think u should work on thinkin up some harder punches. and yo rhymes were a lil too simple. if u worked on ur rhyming, and comin w/ harder punches, i think u can be dope, and u wouldve took this one.
overall-jd ott took tihs one by far to me. i think he had tha better verse, and he came out stronger in this one. NO Hate, yall just keep elevating
 
Old 03-12-05, 07:03 PM   #8
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iight dats cool thinks 4 da vote but my verse only took 8 minutes....so u know.....Pz uppin
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Old 03-13-05, 04:34 AM   #9
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Voted For: J DOT

damn yo you killed that kid

j dot, this was decent you win becuase that kid said lryically, LOL played ass word, plus his fucking verse was wack as hell, you both need to elevate with the keystyle, that is the best and only way you should battle

jdot you alsso had alot of personals, good battle, but you need to lay off the self glorifcation. vote is for j dot
 
Old 03-16-05, 01:07 AM   #10
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ok i liked whyte outs it was coool...j-dot ya did ya thing..but i cant vote cuz Whyte Outs in my crew
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Old 03-16-05, 01:09 AM   #11
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Polls.....Sorry This Guy Is No Longer With us, He Started His Own Crew, Which Got Nothing So Far
 
Old 03-16-05, 10:28 AM   #12
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Voted For: J DOT

this verse had the better flow i was feeling it alot more
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Old 03-16-05, 09:15 PM   #13
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^fuck you hoe. learn how to explain shit....damn...i hate herbs
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Old 03-16-05, 09:20 PM   #14
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Yea dumbass explain ur votes..............Pz UPPIN DIS SHIT
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Old 03-17-05, 10:36 AM   #15
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Voted For: J DOT

dayum this shit was pretty hot fam..i was feelin the grindin line..your structure is pretty dope..and your flow was dope and good multi's good wordplay.....this shit was pretty hot i was feelin it...very good personals. 7.5/10

whyte: your shit was wayyy too basic....punches was the only thing you sorta had goin for u..ur structure was ok..flow was ok..punches was blah;...personals...not many..overall this shit was aiight.i gave you a 6/10

j dot took this with better structure..flow..punches..personals
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