Battle Rules:

10 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-18-05 at 07:46 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-15-05 11:24 PM.

Its time ta shut you up, and yo crew of bitches,
and enuf of tha phive alive disses,
my punches are like you man, neva seen no misses(mrs's),
fuck aliases, imma sho you who da bitch is,
yeah so what my name rhymes wit D jive,
doesnt mean i wont strive,
so come on gimme a high phive,
on better though dont touch me, low life,
fuckin cheating bitch, only votin for ya herbs,
dickridin wit crew votes, fuck this kids werds,
i just show smashed you, wit pronouns and adverbs,

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Phive Is standing Tall

metaman has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-16-05 03:41 AM.

imma slay-this-dude Phive for he done played-the-fool
get ill is the way-i-do Prescribe eight-more-noobs
to Battle first before you go steppin-ta-me
only Handle dicks fag i been checkin-yo-streak
five is how many battles you lost at one Time
four da number of wack lines in yo two bar Rhymes
three are the noobs that done faced ya ta get their Shine*
two are the slugs you gon catch when you face my Nine
one is the L you'll get when homeys see these Lines
no one here respects you dog you ain't see dem Signs
u got merked dude if kiss saw this he ain't ask Why

explanation:

*three battles are against rooq, xkwizit, and da ufc who have 51, 61, and 31 posts each

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Voted For: metaman

metaman
IP:


imma slay-this-dude Phive for he done played-the-fool
get ill is the way-i-do Prescribe eight-more-noobs
to Battle first before you go steppin-ta-me
only Handle dicks fag i been checkin-yo-streak
five is how many battles you lost at one Time
four da number of wack lines in yo two bar Rhymes
three are the noobs that done faced ya ta get their Shine*
two are the slugs you gon catch when you face my Nine
one is the L you'll get when homeys see these Lines
no one here respects you dog you ain't see dem Signs
u got merked dude if kiss saw this he ain't ask Why

NICE, NICE, NICE
like all da punches u got on ur opponent
good structure, nice elevation, hard rhymes

Phive
cudda been betta
more elevation
better structure
try more punchs at opponent

my v/metaman

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Voted For: metaman

wow phive.. u had one horrible attempt at wordplay.. with the mrs's/misses line.. it really made no sense.. and Metaman you just had weak multi's the whole way thru ur verse.. soo hmm... i think i gotta give this one to metaman simply because he didnt come AS played as Phive.. and he didnt have as much weak shit in his verse.. both came horrible.. and both need mad elevation.. but Metaman wins this verse.... even tho he had no meta's like his name..

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Voted For: metaman

metaman gets my vote cuz he had better punches, phive didnt even have any punches. u both had good structure. n i like how metaman had that five, four, three, two, one, thang. and metaman had better multies, and phive didnt have any multies. yo phive, no hate, just elevate. aight battle. peace

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^^the sign speaks the truth!

yal dumb niggaz votin against me now imma return the favour fuck all ya

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Phive Is standing Tall

Voted For: metaman

Aii This IS what It is

imma slay-this-dude Phive for he done played-the-fool
get ill is the way-i-do Prescribe eight-more-noobs
Nice opener
to Battle first before you go steppin-ta-me
only Handle dicks fag i been checkin-yo-streak
LOL Handle dicks LOL WTF does dat mean
five is how many battles you lost at one Time
four da number of wack lines in yo two bar Rhymes
Countin Down !!! LOL
three are the noobs that done faced ya ta get their Shine*
two are the slugs you gon catch when you face my Nine
Gettin Closer to that Last Number LOL
one is the L you'll get when homeys see these Lines
no one here respects you dog you ain't see dem Signs
Damn Its over somebody please call the police

Aii

Phive

IP:


Its time ta shut you up, and yo crew of bitches,
and enuf of tha phive alive disses,
Not good .....Wheres Ya openin punch?
my punches are like you man, neva seen no misses(mrs's),
fuck aliases, imma sho you who da bitch is,
What Do aliases have to do with Bitchez ?.....
yeah so what my name rhymes wit D jive,
doesnt mean i wont strive,
Sounds like youre bout to cry mayne tuffen up !
so come on gimme a high phive,
on better though dont touch me, low life,
Phive.//Low life .....DOnt Ryme
fuckin cheating bitch, only votin for ya herbs,
dickridin wit crew votes, fuck this kids werds,
Wheres the Punch.....Stick n Move Stick n MovE!!!
i just show smashed you, wit pronouns and adverbs,

NOPE ^ You didnt

So It all comes down to this

MEtamen Is the winner Phive Needs to elevate Plain and simple

Bitch I wish You Would Try To vot e against Me bcuz You aint Winnin No battles

Jus try it ......And watch How your Career Goes down The drain