Check In By FRIDAY Or Topic Wont Be Given Poems Due By SUNDAY. Edit You Link With At Least 2 Other Poetry Battles In The League You Voted On Voting Ends At 12 Eastern TimeON WENSDAY NITE NEXT WEEK.no Line Length And Dont Write A Topical. This Is A Poetry League I Will Dq You If You Write A Fucking Topical I Hate That Shit Its Not Poetry!! Winners Recieve 100,000 R.v Sorry No Shows Dont Get Paied You Gotta Actually Win Good Luck To BotH
TOPIC=MY DAD

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checkin in thanks for the pm...................

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checkin in, thx for pm cali

wat iz our topic

yeah our poems are due today but havent even seen da topic

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lol, cali put up da topic

My Comp Was Being Gay Obviously My Mods Are No Help So Im Firiing Them Both Your Topic Is Up You Have Till Thursday To Drop Pardon The Slowness Of The Forum..............

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its aight, thx 4 puttin it up

lmao @ u firing me... lmao lick my ass..matta a fact im outta here give OS the win this week... fuck this league and fuck u

You raised me from diapers to boxers and briefs
you are there for me in times of joy and weep
i remember at night i used to creep into your bed
dont worry son everything will be ok, is what you said
Every weekend we go to workout or just play some ball
u watched me grow from 3 feet to being over 6 foot tall
Now I'm a teenager and you still by my side
Anytime i get into trouble, you always down to ride
My love towards you is lyrically unexplainable
The simple adjectives in English are just uncapable
Every morning, waking up to a delicious breakfast
Taking those scrambled eggs as i dash past
the door and into his car and get ready for the far journey to school
You are at all of my sports events
even if that means losing a few clients
Your advice is always wise and helps me find the right path
You are always there helping me unleash my wrath
with your love around, my heart can never be sad
and with that Im gona say thank you to my dad

iz dis a win for me?

yo ive been gone for awhile but can i still drop here

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she pampered me to lets talk about books
she loved me with all the facial doubt looks
mother giver of life teacher of morals fathers wife
mother fighter of life teacher of moral mentors strife
strong when all would cry fought when all said why
mental when all would die gentle when all sad die
deaths hand fell towards her spirit, while angel helped steer it
moms stand stood words amire it, while smile sweped sheer wit
lupus the disease of wolf, while attackin joints she stood
stroke the disease of old, whick attackin brain she could
still live for her son, look to the horizon and live to see her son
still strive not done, took the chance on and wived husbond
mother who bore as i son, mother who came upon as i stun
mother who tore ar i son, mother who fame down on her son
faith, hope, altra-physical diluted biology came from up north
date, dope, laxi-dasical Duluthed st.mary mayo made comfort
sitting in a bed of supported by family and a focus oh so steady
waiting in the room supported by family and a focus oh so ready
mother who gave me life, please come home tonight
mother who gave me life, please come home tonight


heres a entry thanks for reading this one was for my moms on the bounce back from saying "she had a month to live" lupus to fightin back sayin now "shes gonna make it" love ya moms see ya hope fully next week...thanx for readin peeps

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i think da battle ova though
nice verse though but u way way way late

ok hellfire had a deeper more complex drop mc iggy dope drop but you failed to bring the complexiety and better visual that hellfire did he killed it similar style but his uperior vocab really brought his poem out more good drop to both hellfire wins this is now closed

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