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MarvJay1009 | 5 | 62.50% | |
Orion. | 3 | 37.50% | |
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll |
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03-22-05, 01:39 PM | #1 |
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MarvJay1009 vs Orion.
IP: 29DB 69F4
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 30 min check 30 min drop Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 03-22-05 at 02:09 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
03-22-05, 01:48 PM | #2 | |
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 0825 899A
lol timeout u have 34 post...and u made da minimum post:200???....check in tho im dropppin 10 lines datz it
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03-22-05, 01:51 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 29DB 69F4
Orion. has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-22-05 01:51 PM.
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03-22-05, 01:56 PM | #4 |
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IP: 29DB 69F4
sooooooo whats wrong with that???.................
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03-22-05, 01:59 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-22-05 01:59 PM.
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03-22-05, 02:10 PM | #6 | |
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 0825 899A
look....
ya'll think dis kids a crook? naw..cant keystyle gotta get ya book awww ya lines is "candy" ppl dont reply cuzz u suck they dont "MiSS Da GOOD BaR" i hope u gota crew fam go get wun of ya boys da come try me i dont mean da "leaf" if orion live i'll go 2 da hospital & "poison" his "iV" i aint with games young im grown..ya moms i dont luvin da bone so now when i call her its "4-HEaD" like da "front of ya dome" ya bars they weaka..trust me i got thugs dat a pome they heata's clap at ya legs & leave ya "CaVS" in ya "lebron james sneaker's" ur a net mc...u'll be on here by da time im earnin millions... ya cd hott? no u couldn't "PUT OUT FiRE" runnin up in a "burnin buildin" i rushed it...
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03-22-05, 02:19 PM | #7 |
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IP: 29DB 69F4
Check.
Opener: You have no presence... but you're in awe of my charisma… I'll dispose of every Key you have and treat you like a prisoner… This shit's a synch I don't flinch, specially in front of this fagget-ass-bitch… Eh Put ya Money where ya Mouth is, so me-n-my bat can 'Strike Rich'… Coming up in NYC? Looking For Rep? might as well call me ur idol… 'Fag', 'Slut', 'Bitch', 'Cunt'.... u have the RIGHT to all Those Titles... tha loser’s circle’s the tool shed, so im putting this hoe in his place… no skills to embrace, this fag’s a disgrace to the established race…* I strike like a Nazi blitzkrieg, bark rhymes in German while dissectin' this feeble Jew But I refuse to make fun of his spelling - cuz evinn disslecksikxs arr teople poo *Establishment is his crew Dont vote based on Him being here and known to everybody, vote based on the lyrics...
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03-22-05, 02:29 PM | #8 | |
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 0825 899A
okay....upppin 4 some fukkin votes
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03-22-05, 02:49 PM | #9 |
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IP: 29DB 69F4
uppin.......................................cmon dont sleep on this...
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03-22-05, 02:50 PM | #10 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: C024 E429
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
mj- Verse was nice...so was your punches....Had some nice sick azz personals also....Structure was decent...easy to read n all...but overall your won this with a better overall verse and punches...8.6/10........ o - your verse was nice a little, but your punches really didnt seem to connect hard enough...your structure was layed out nice...but you went weak on punches thats all...5.9/10....... V/ mj make sure 2 return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=183063 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=182879 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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03-22-05, 02:53 PM | #11 |
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IP: 29DB 69F4
nah fuck you...you say the same fuckin shit in everybattle you vote in....same numbers and fuckin everything...im lettin strobe know...
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03-22-05, 02:56 PM | #12 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: C024 E429
so................................................ .................................................. ............eat shit thats the way i vote
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03-22-05, 03:21 PM | #13 | ||||
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This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
IP: D0B1 D2B1
Both verses were hot. BUt it is obvious who won this battle. I mean Marv had sum really clever shit. He won the punches, personals, metas, and wordplay in this battle. ALSO THE ENJOYMENT. I Was LMAO when I read this shit. so I'm givin' mah vote to MarvJay1009. Stay up fam. ~Ghost~
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03-22-05, 03:52 PM | #14 | |
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IP: CD09 4AB6
Voted For: Orion.
Marv- yea u did rush it...i was feelin it in tha beginning then u lost me...ur best lines was ya first 4 then everything went down a notch, but an overall nice verse, koo punches and tha Good Bar line was sick O- opener was klean, and ya lines that came after didnt fall off neither, nice hittin punches, lovin the seconed bar and ya explained line was koo too. ELEVATION IS THA KEY!! overall- Orion has my vote kause his shit connected tha most, Marv u can come harder than that, hes new no hate Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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03-22-05, 04:36 PM | #15 |
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IP: 29DB 69F4
aiight thanks for the HONEST VOTE!!!!..............
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