a devil in the making, i wouldn't have guessed now that i see ya
the devils architecht?..
... prolly the same dude who designed the leaning tower of pisa

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lol ooops

i said "the devils architect" when i meant "hells architect".. blah same difference

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for that ur vote dont count

A) u wont get the punch if u dont even know how to fucking pronounce the god damn name

pisa (pee- zuh)
SEE ya (see yuh)

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I gotta go with dizz on this one.

Golden Dayz, your vote can still count for Kin if you come back and explain why he won, however "pisa" is pronounced "pee-zuh," therefore making both of the lines rhyme. And, being that the only explanation for why you thought Kin won was because sdizzle's didnt rhyme, I have to DQ your vote for now.

However, if you would like to come back and further explain your vote will count again.

0-0.

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And Question .. I Thought Your Only Allowed To Have Two Lines? And Lol@Ur Rhyme Scheme SMH

FLOW:
PUNCH:
META:
MULTIS:
COMPLEXITY:
ENJOYMENT:
YOUR VOTE:

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thats 1 of the 2 most used punch formats

*smh @ swaying*

*asks for this post and the post i quoted to be deleted*

*has no problem with the flow vote, im not goin to bitch if sum1 dont voe for me,cuz thats gay...*

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im going with Kin on this one... Sdizzle had a good punch and had a decent personal but i wasnt feeling it much... Kin ethic had a good multie and a pretty good metaphor in his punch and it just stood out more to me.. I would suggest putting your punch into 2 lines next time because some people might take points away from you because of your structure.

V/ Kin

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Thanks For Voting...

1-0 Kin*Ethic

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Well i Would Edit It Out But Theres No Edit Feature On This Site But Whatever ..

1-0 Me

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kin easily....sdizzle yours made didnt really get it...aint really rhyme eitha...no real meta eitha...or punch

Thnx For Voting

2-0 Me

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