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Old 05-04-05, 12:20 PM   #1
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1. Pop Lotty Vs. 56. ~High-Dro~

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Battles Go Up On Wednesday, Check Ins Are Due Friday Before 11:59 PM EST. Verses Are Due Sunday Before 11:59 PM EST.

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You May Go 10 Lines If You Would Like But 12 Is The Maximum


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Old 05-04-05, 05:34 PM   #2
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Old 05-04-05, 09:48 PM   #3
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checkin in...werd up Pop...good luck, homie
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Old 05-06-05, 05:14 PM   #4
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You got ya lil quotes in ya sig, but you aint doin shit on wax
When I drag you through the fuckin dirt is the only time you make tracks
We have some similarities, both Degrassi fans, but kid
But we don't have nothing in Common,
...cept for the fact you'll be the next herb on his dick
You rattin ass nigga, won't take shit for Gotta to hurt you
You be droppin more dimes than old Sprint commercials
Wack sigs, gay name, follow trends, that's something I know about u
So of course when he lose, he gon' say, "IT WAS THE VOTING COUNCIL!!!"
Ya not hot, ya vet status is nothing to boast
who the fuck still be explainin punches after 1,000 posts?
i gotta admit, this verse sucked, it needs some help
so if you can't beats, shut down your comp and kill yaself


goddamn this shit was was so wack.
 
Old 05-07-05, 02:46 PM   #5
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i don't want Sdizzle to vote...cuz i'm pretty sure he would hate

you came in expectin a win, but this underdog is about to spoil it
people gon' see your "lines are shitty", like "long waits for the toilet"
you won the first round but i didnt think rappin would suit ya
thas why you're gunna leave this "time" like Back to the Future
fuck the rankings, heres an upset cuz today the best will prevail
cuz those numbers will turn around like when you step on a scale
after only one look in "pop-eyes" i thought he was "chicken"
assumed i would no-show; "quick to skip" like droppin a discman
don't scratch tickets - you're battlin me, you ain't the luckiest
i know "pop aint sprayin", but look how "shook up" he is
when this shit's over, lotty will be mixed up in the E.R.
but fuck a lottERy, i'll make my money beatin this retard *


*take the "ER" part and put it in "lotty" and you get "lottery"
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Old 05-09-05, 03:48 PM   #6
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Old 05-09-05, 04:00 PM   #7
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POP

You got ya lil quotes in ya sig, but you aint doin shit on wax
When I drag you through the fuckin dirt is the only time you make tracks
WACK...AND PLAYED CONCEPT..2/10
We have some similarities, both Degrassi fans, but kid
But we don't have nothing in Common,
...cept for the fact you'll be the next herb on his dick
LOL..DECENT...5/10
You rattin ass nigga, won't take shit for Gotta to hurt you
You be droppin more dimes than old Sprint commercials
NAH...4/10
Wack sigs, gay name, follow trends, that's something I know about u
So of course when he lose, he gon' say, "IT WAS THE VOTING COUNCIL!!!"
WEAK...3/10
Ya not hot, ya vet status is nothing to boast
who the fuck still be explainin punches after 1,000 posts?
BLAH...4.5/10
i gotta admit, this verse sucked, it needs some help
so if you can't beats, shut down your comp and kill yaself
NO...3/10

DAMN NIGGA...WHERE WAS THE EFFORT??

OVERALL-21.5/60

HIGH-DRO

you came in expectin a win, but this underdog is about to spoil it
people gon' see your "lines are shitty", like "long waits for the toilet"
PLAYED CONCEPT...3/10
you won the first round but i didnt think rappin would suit ya
thas why you're gunna leave this "time" like Back to the Future
WEAK PUNCH...PLAYED META...3/10
fuck the rankings, heres an upset cuz today the best will prevail
cuz those numbers will turn around like when you step on a scale
NOT FEELIN THE PUNCH...2/10
after only one look in "pop-eyes" i thought he was "chicken"
assumed i would no-show; "quick to skip" like droppin a discman
BAR DON'T SOUND GOOD WHEN U USE DISCMAN..AND UR META'S ARE REALLY WACK...3/10
when this shit's over, lotty will be mixed up in the E.R.
but fuck a lottERy, i'll make my money beatin this retard *
EHHH...4/10

OVERALL-15/60

BOTH VERSES WERE WEAK...AND HIGH~DRO...U NEED TO STEP UR META'S UP

V/POP LOTTY
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Old 05-09-05, 04:12 PM   #8
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Quote:
Originally Posted by gottaasswhoopin4u
We have some similarities, both Degrassi fans, but kid
But we don't have nothing in Common,
...cept for the fact you'll be the next herb on his dick


that was the bar that was the best rated for either of us? we BOTH had better shit than that....he "but" twice
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Old 05-09-05, 05:02 PM   #9
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^^murcinal missed a whole bar, the best one in the battle
in my opinion to:::
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don't scratch tickets - you're battlin me, you ain't the luckiest
i know "pop aint sprayin", but look how "shook up" he is
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 05-09-05, 05:22 PM   #10
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You got ya lil quotes in ya sig, but you aint doin shit on wax
When I drag you through the fuckin dirt is the only time you make tracks
^^wasnt feelin this at all...3/10
We have some similarities, both Degrassi fans, but kid
But we don't have nothing in Common,
...cept for the fact you'll be the next herb on his dick
^^decent....stretched to hell n back thou.........4.5/10
You rattin ass nigga, won't take shit for Gotta to hurt you
You be droppin more dimes than old Sprint commercials
^^punch was weak,.............................3/10
Wack sigs, gay name, follow trends, that's something I know about u
So of course when he lose, he gon' say, "IT WAS THE VOTING COUNCIL!!!"
^^meh, ok, but wheres the creativity in this??......3/10
Ya not hot, ya vet status is nothing to boast
who the fuck still be explainin punches after 1,000 posts?
^^decent, good to considerin you posted first..
wasnt feeding...so it makes it even better......5/10

i gotta admit, this verse sucked, it needs some help
so if you can't beats, shut down your comp and kill yaself
^^nah, weak ass closer pop..................1/10
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pop, i was really dissapointed in this verse..
your creativity was shallow, punches were boarderline wack
structure was everywhere......wish you put in more effort
.19.5/60


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you came in expectin a win, but this underdog is about to spoil it
people gon' see your "lines are shitty", like "long waits for the toilet"
^^meh, ok.....played concept thou..............3/10
you won the first round but i didnt think rappin would suit ya
thas why you're gunna leave this "time" like Back to the Future
^^lol,.nope......com'on you can do better then that.....2/10
fuck the rankings, heres an upset cuz today the best will prevail
cuz those numbers will turn around like when you step on a scale
^^eh, ok,.....but personal"???", i dont kno..............2/10
after only one look in "pop-eyes" i thought he was "chicken"
assumed i would no-show; "quick to skip" like droppin a discman
^^decent.....couldve been better...4.5/10
don't scratch tickets - you're battlin me, you ain't the luckiest
i know "pop aint sprayin", but look how "shook up" he is
^^personally i liked this concept.....7/10
when this shit's over, lotty will be mixed up in the E.R.
but fuck a lottERy, i'll make my money beatin this retard *
^^eh, this wasnt good, but better then pops closer...2/10
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consistency was eh, was expecting more from ya verse too..
perdy dissapointed in this battle, you had one bar n concept that was
up n above the rest, close battle, i wanna see more effort in the next round
from who ever moves on.................20.5/60
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 05-09-05, 05:29 PM   #11
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finally..............
 
Old 05-09-05, 05:50 PM   #12
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didnt even notice that he forgot that whole bar...he'll have to give that a score
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Old 05-09-05, 06:28 PM   #13
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gotaasswhoopin4u
You got ya lil quotes in ya sig, but you aint doin shit on wax
When I drag you through the fuckin dirt is the only time you make tracks
good finish, original.
We have some similarities, both Degrassi fans, but kid
But we don't have nothing in Common,
...cept for the fact you'll be the next herb on his dick
this made no sense.
You rattin ass nigga, won't take shit for Gotta to hurt you
You be droppin more dimes than old Sprint commercials
again, nothing dope.
Wack sigs, gay name, follow trends, that's something I know about u
So of course when he lose, he gon' say, "IT WAS THE VOTING COUNCIL!!!"
good idea, but stretched.
Ya not hot, ya vet status is nothing to boast
who the fuck still be explainin punches after 1,000 posts?
good idea, almost good.
i gotta admit, this verse sucked, it needs some help
so if you can't beats, shut down your comp and kill yaself
your best line. ILL.

* your last bar, basically could be
my feedback for the verse. it was horrible.
but you had a few highlights. but overrall,
you needed some harder punches.

[b]high dro

you came in expectin a win, but this underdog is about to spoil it
people gon' see your "lines are shitty", like "long waits for the toilet"
ok, ill accept.
you won the first round but i didnt think rappin would suit ya
thas why you're gunna leave this "time" like Back to the Future
haha, ok.
fuck the rankings, heres an upset cuz today the best will prevail
cuz those numbers will turn around like when you step on a scale
what?
after only one look in "pop-eyes" i thought he was "chicken"
assumed i would no-show; "quick to skip" like droppin a discman
hot bar, but drop the quotations.
don't scratch tickets - you're battlin me, you ain't the luckiest
i know "pop aint sprayin", but look how "shook up" he is
good, but not hot.
when this shit's over, lotty will be mixed up in the E.R.
but fuck a lottERy, i'll make my money beatin this retard
uhh not so hot kid.

*ya opening lines were fire. had
some hot punches in there, and ya
had great flow. actually the flow was
hot throughout the entire verse, but the
punches began to die down. the intensity
of the lines in the verse got weaker.
but overrall, it was good.


vote: high dro

good verses yall, good luck to both.

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Old 05-09-05, 07:30 PM   #14
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Quote:
Originally Posted by gotaasswhoopin4u
You got ya lil quotes in ya sig, but you aint doin shit on wax
When I drag you through the fuckin dirt is the only time you make tracks
Not bad....4/10
We have some similarities, both Degrassi fans, but kid
But we don't have nothing in Common,
...cept for the fact you'll be the next herb on his dick
Nah....3/10
You rattin ass nigga, won't take shit for Gotta to hurt you
You be droppin more dimes than old Sprint commercials
Meh....4/10
Wack sigs, gay name, follow trends, that's something I know about u
So of course when he lose, he gon' say, "IT WAS THE VOTING COUNCIL!!!"
Pretty funny....7/10
Ya not hot, ya vet status is nothing to boast
who the fuck still be explainin punches after 1,000 posts?
Weerd....6/10
i gotta admit, this verse sucked, it needs some help
so if you can't beats, shut down your comp and kill yaself
Hahaha, made me laugh...5/10

Overall: 29/60

goddamn this shit was was so wack.


Quote:
Originally Posted by ~High-Dro~
i don't want Sdizzle to vote...cuz i'm pretty sure he would hate

you came in expectin a win, but this underdog is about to spoil it
people gon' see your "lines are shitty", like "long waits for the toilet"
Nice....6/10
you won the first round but i didnt think rappin would suit ya
thas why you're gunna leave this "time" like Back to the Future
Not bad...5/10
fuck the rankings, heres an upset cuz today the best will prevail
cuz those numbers will turn around like when you step on a scale
Nah....3/10
after only one look in "pop-eyes" i thought he was "chicken"
assumed i would no-show; "quick to skip" like droppin a discman
Good meta....6/10
don't scratch tickets - you're battlin me, you ain't the luckiest
i know "pop aint sprayin", but look how "shook up" he is
Meh...not bad wordplay...5/0
when this shit's over, lotty will be mixed up in the E.R.
but fuck a lottERy, i'll make my money beatin this retard *
Word....6/10

Overall: 31/60

*take the "ER" part and put it in "lotty" and you get "lottery"


Just came hard enough to edge out Lotty...
Vote: ~High-Dro~
 
Old 05-09-05, 09:00 PM   #15
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POP

You got ya lil quotes in ya sig, but you aint doin shit on wax
When I drag you through the fuckin dirt is the only time you make tracks
WACK...AND PLAYED CONCEPT..2/10
We have some similarities, both Degrassi fans, but kid
But we don't have nothing in Common,
...cept for the fact you'll be the next herb on his dick
LOL..DECENT...5/10
You rattin ass nigga, won't take shit for Gotta to hurt you
You be droppin more dimes than old Sprint commercials
NAH...4/10
Wack sigs, gay name, follow trends, that's something I know about u
So of course when he lose, he gon' say, "IT WAS THE VOTING COUNCIL!!!"
WEAK...3/10
Ya not hot, ya vet status is nothing to boast
who the fuck still be explainin punches after 1,000 posts?
BLAH...4.5/10
i gotta admit, this verse sucked, it needs some help
so if you can't beats, shut down your comp and kill yaself
NO...3/10

DAMN NIGGA...WHERE WAS THE EFFORT??

OVERALL-21.5/60

HIGH-DRO

you came in expectin a win, but this underdog is about to spoil it
people gon' see your "lines are shitty", like "long waits for the toilet"
PLAYED CONCEPT...3/10
you won the first round but i didnt think rappin would suit ya
thas why you're gunna leave this "time" like Back to the Future
WEAK PUNCH...PLAYED META...3/10
fuck the rankings, heres an upset cuz today the best will prevail
cuz those numbers will turn around like when you step on a scale
NOT FEELIN THE PUNCH...2/10
after only one look in "pop-eyes" i thought he was "chicken"
assumed i would no-show; "quick to skip" like droppin a discman
BAR DON'T SOUND GOOD WHEN U USE DISCMAN..AND UR META'S ARE REALLY WACK...3/10
when this shit's over, lotty will be mixed up in the E.R.
but fuck a lottERy, i'll make my money beatin this retard *
EHHH...4/10

OVERALL-15/60

BOTH VERSES WERE WEAK...AND HIGH~DRO...U NEED TO STEP UR META'S UP

V/POP LOTTY


my bad...forgot bout this bar...

don't scratch tickets - you're battlin me, you ain't the luckiest
i know "pop aint sprayin", but look how "shook up" he is
THAT WAS NICE...BEST META USED IN UR VERSE...GOOD CONCEPT...7/10

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