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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-04-05 at 08:04 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

LOoNY TOoN has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-04-05 07:38 PM.

Big City has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-04-05 07:40 PM.

Dog, you not even the main event, you just a sideshow dude
after this battle, ya career is "cut off:" like Mrs Schivo's food
Im ready to slam, spray bars at u, like a semi that jammed
How in the hell, ima lose to the rap version of Yosemite Sam
im deadlier fam, i part ya features when i spark the heater
Loony toon get his face "changed" like a parking meter
Time for ya departure, from rapverse go head n order ya ticket
Back to the block u can be wit Common on the Corner n kick it
When im flarin the brass, Toon you appearin in last
You arrogant ass, ya flow wack, its apparent its trash
im clearin a path, duke..u confused, ya purpose is screwed
treat Loony like a window,, cuz its "curtain's for you"
ya flow just sucks,... either that or its boring
Toon is already played out, he come on every saturday morning
So you can't come fresh, why don't you consider leaving instead
cuz City don't mean hair scrunchies when i "squeeze on ya head".......dog its nothin

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uppin, u better hurry up and drop ya verse, before the time limit runs out dog

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Yo….lets see if I still got it…

Kid tryin to step up! like smoking before ya *piss in a cup* ya *screwed up*
Left ya *heart at home*, theres *no beat* behind ya flows, just an internet thug
Just a Big *weenie*, get *roasted at comedian club meetings*, keep on reading
Taking a lyrical beating, gets *kicked* around like *Rockers with Bag Beenies*
I see no meaning in your verse, you can die *before ya mama*, be *first in the herse*
What’s worse, thought you were *driving to victory*, but you were *stuck in reverse*
*You steady*? Fuck that ill knock ya *off stance*, you thinking losing is an advance
*Stand above you*, raise ya IQ just by my presence, walk away and ya lose ya essence
*Christ’s second coming*, but even then you have no hope after *receiving his blessins*
Death is *religion*, *get blessed with bliss*, im higher than you like the oceans crests
Big City’s obsessed, fuck ya writtens and bittens,*get pissed on like pregnancy tests*

didnt really think about it...just logged on and saw i had a battle open...sorry i forgot...haha

lol i can see that, half of that verse didn't make much sense, but it all good uppin for votes

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Voted For: LOoNY TOoN

My vote is to toon, breakdown:

Big City-
Dog, you not even the main event, you just a sideshow dude
after this battle, ya career is "cut off:" like Mrs Schivo's food
^^not really feelin it, line seems played
Im ready to slam, spray bars at u, like a semi that jammed
How in the hell, ima lose to the rap version of Yosemite Sam
^^Koo punch feelin this 1
im deadlier fam, i part ya features when i spark the heater
Loony toon get his face "changed" like a parking meter
^^weak bar...elevate
Time for ya departure, from rapverse go head n order ya ticket
Back to the block u can be wit Common on the Corner n kick it
^^dont reely get your direction on this 1, common's song is tight
When im flarin the brass, Toon you appearin in last
You arrogant ass, ya flow wack, its apparent its trash
^^weak, not hard hitten
im clearin a path, duke..u confused, ya purpose is screwed
treat Loony like a window,, cuz its "curtain's for you"
^^ok punch, lacked a lil creativity
ya flow just sucks,... either that or its boring
Toon is already played out, he come on every saturday morning
^^^better attempt...
So you can't come fresh, why don't you consider leaving instead
cuz City don't mean hair scrunchies when i "squeeze on ya head".......dog its nothin
^^yea u get nuthin for this 1

Overall: 5.5/ 10

Toon-
Kid tryin to step up! like smoking before ya *piss in a cup* ya *screwed up*
Left ya *heart at home*, theres *no beat* behind ya flows, just an internet thug
^^funny as hell, nice word play
Just a Big *weenie*, get *roasted at comedian club meetings*, keep on reading
Taking a lyrical beating, gets *kicked* around like *Rockers with Bag Beenies*
^^good creativity...keep me readin
I see no meaning in your verse, you can die *before ya mama*, be *first in the herse*
What’s worse, thought you were *driving to victory*, but you were *stuck in reverse*
^^ok, see u was tryin wit somethin...lil played
*You steady*? Fuck that ill knock ya *off stance*, you thinking losing is an advance
*Stand above you*, raise ya IQ just by my presence, walk away and ya lose ya essence
^^good word play, multis were good too
*Christ’s second coming*, but even then you have no hope after *receiving his blessins*
Death is *religion*, *get blessed with bliss*, im higher than you like the oceans crests
Big City’s obsessed, fuck ya writtens and bittens,*get pissed on like pregnancy tests*
^^ these last three lines were good, the pregnacy test lined killed it though...nice creativity

Overall: 8/10

In the end Toon got this, pretty one sided, multi and creativity were un matched, punches go to Toon, lines were stretched but a good verse

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Removed.. suspicious vote

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