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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Was a bit 2 l8 in finishin but i don it now.
Sorry bout the no show, I'm hopin this will cancel it out lol.

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-13-05 at 10:23 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Xenofly has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 10:23 PM.

DaCument has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 10:24 PM.

Its all there www.soundclick.com/wreklesss Called DaCument battle or somefin like that

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~Wrekless

You know the rappers these days that snap then breeze ways//
In the opposite direction of the gat that he says//
He'll cap, if you aint on in don't say you are//
before someone engraves a scar on your inflated arse//

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/dacument_music.htm

again, lets get this poppin, because he feels bamboozled out of a lose, but good luck contender....

oh its the one that say's xenofly

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DaCument

yo we uppin on this shit.......give the feed back

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DaCument

www.soundclick.com/wreklesss its called dacument battle

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~Wrekless

You know the rappers these days that snap then breeze ways//
In the opposite direction of the gat that he says//
He'll cap, if you aint on in don't say you are//
before someone engraves a scar on your inflated arse//

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Checking the polls....................Good drop To both

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Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
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ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
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cmon lets get som votes UPPIN^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^

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~Wrekless

You know the rappers these days that snap then breeze ways//
In the opposite direction of the gat that he says//
He'll cap, if you aint on in don't say you are//
before someone engraves a scar on your inflated arse//

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stop sleepin....we uppin fam

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DaCument

Voted For: Xenofly

Xenofly: Listening...beat is some old skool vibe...weerd English accent...quality is hmm...it's ok ya know...punches are hmm...ok could be improved...lol @ careless album taste...nice rhyming...hip hop flip flop lol...hmm could be better beat kinbda dragged you down it was too basic not much to really gain emotion on ya know...but it's not a bad piece...ok moving on...actually ima listen again...rhyming is aight...feelin the flow it's good too close to the mic hearin a lot of hissin ya need to be further from it...specially the H's...Jay-Z line again...kinda repetative...i learned not to keep on the same thing...it's aight but like i said beat held ya back IMO...NOW moving on...

DaCument:...1st the verse is longer...always an advantage using the time you have unless you KNOW you dropped a BOMB on ya opponent in minimal time...to the verse...lol @ the intro...singin Kanye style...vocals...flow is nice...1st 4 bars mostly self-glory...really hmm a few played bars...lol @ soccer i woulda said football whorin UK...and i am UK...this really isn't a diss track you got mostly self-g...then like 1 diss every 3rd bar...overall a good track...but not a good diss track...

V/xenofly...not expecting no RTF...or if so...then hit my song...Thoughts

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R.I.P OMB

To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

uppin...thanks for the feedback

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DaCument

uppin this^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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~Wrekless

You know the rappers these days that snap then breeze ways//
In the opposite direction of the gat that he says//
He'll cap, if you aint on in don't say you are//
before someone engraves a scar on your inflated arse//

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Wins:0
Losses:0

This battle was one-sided....DaC took this all da way

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