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^^..^^ | 1 | 16.67% | |
BLACK~MAGIK | 5 | 83.33% | |
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06-20-05, 11:30 PM | #1 | ||||
Sam Dope
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^^..^^ vs BLACK~MAGIK
IP: 1CA5 73AB
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Topical Battle 20-30 lines No crew votes No hate votes No D/R All Votes Must Be Explained Topic=Lost Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 06-21-05 at 11:30 PM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
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06-20-05, 11:31 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
BLACK~MAGIK has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 11:31 PM.
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06-20-05, 11:31 PM | #3 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
Good Luck Homie
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06-21-05, 01:25 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 3240 794D
^^..^^ has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-05 01:25 AM.
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06-21-05, 12:17 PM | #5 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
"Lost" if it took laughs to save me, id resite what i knows lost as i lye on my closed plot, watchin myself die in my own thoughts with u, why am i so soft, a man but as a savage he wept lost in a hole, from my soul, as big as a galaxies depth from all tha extra baggage he kept, he knows not of tha inner beast nor tha joys of a succesful life, or the love being a winner brings i bet they wont remember me, when my tombs put on its site all i seen was black, the day my heart cracked, n darkness took on this light so much put on his mind, how could he handle tha strain love dismantled tha flame, a mere candle in rain if handled it breaks, i caught this cancer in june the question, wasnt deprression, so how could i find the answers in you she wouldnt expand her views, so how could she see tha hurt promised a ride, to tha skys, but steadily put me beneath tha dirt always nsync with burns, the way she mixed gasoline wit words its like i was dreamin first, until u look up n see tha clouds move then in a second, u see tha heavans, fall n crush everything around you need ta run but dont think your allowed to, u scream but everything is soundproof uve just been beat without clues, of why any of this shit happened anyhow its like your stuck, inside of love, as u beg god "ill do anything if u get me out" i know your thinkin with me now, even though your thoughts is bruised i'll never get my head straight, i'll face everyday, in mental solitude |
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06-22-05, 12:14 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
His arms tattered with ink stains of gang affilation
Mind battered with substance abuse heart racing No patience from a fatherless home the streets raised him Its a cold cold world but many times his heat saved him Bang for his Blood not his family........ im speaking of colors Brother love overrides opression?so why bang on your brother? Selling drugs dont tell on a thug he got a code of couduct Pimping and gansta living he has no time to ponder upon stuff So hes lost as a product of impoverised enviroments To bang for his cause which is no cause till the truth silences Graphettied up walls of fallen soldiers in a war he forsakes A buliding of hate till a slug twists up his shape But he needed to feel safe in a place where death is common Where children have no structure and seek a sense of bonding Where the closest thing to ice is broken bottles on ball courts And where one black boy is considered a small loss So of course he falls into a dark hole of despair Cuz where will a boy end up when he can go now where? So scared but fails to care the evil he commits with his hands And after a while the scared little boy grows into a man And with a clan of followers his heart grows in size But deep inside hes the scared boy and his life is a lie Mother cries just another brother that died for his flag Bandanna colors means nothing we all rest in a black bag
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^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit? herb I OWN RB YOUR NAME GOES HERE SOCRATES
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06-22-05, 03:08 AM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
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^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit? herb I OWN RB YOUR NAME GOES HERE SOCRATES
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06-22-05, 09:43 AM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 28AD 5545
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^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit? herb I OWN RB YOUR NAME GOES HERE SOCRATES
EFUSIVE PAIR-A-DYCE LYRIC
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06-22-05, 10:30 AM | #9 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
uppin for some votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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06-22-05, 01:34 PM | #10 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
Uppin Thru The Fucking Roof...
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06-22-05, 04:45 PM | #11 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
Uppin for some goddamn votes you fucking queers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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06-22-05, 05:13 PM | #12 | ||||
Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK
Damn B.M.... I didnd't know you were so skilled in topicals... but that was rather dope... imagery was good as fuck too man... so much put on his mind, how could he handle tha strain love dismantled tha flame, a mere candle in rain ^loved that line with u, why am i so soft, a man but as a savage he wept lost in a hole, from my soul, as big as a galaxies depth ^loved that line as well Nice story... nothing to creative but still good... could have been a little more creative but i liked the way you told the story and what not... and how you broke it down Cali your verse was alright... the thing that gives my vote to black magik is the fact that yours didn't want me to keep reading, nothing kept me interested... overall it was good though, nice story telling aswell just not as interesting as B.M.'s... Rather basic... Vote- Black Magik |
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06-22-05, 07:36 PM | #13 | |||||||
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: E3D5 FE0F
Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK
Cali: Aight, I Was Feeling Your Piece...I Was Liking The Whole Hood Mentality Thing and Relating To Growing Up In The Hood. Your Piece Was Touching, but It Doesn't Follow Topic. The Topic Is "Lost" and I Don't Feel Yours Really Followed That. Your Piece Would Fall Under More of Mis-Guidance or Something Close To That. Best Lines: "To bang for his cause which is no cause till the truth silences Graphettied up walls of fallen soldiers in a war he forsakes" "Mother cries just another brother that died for his flag Bandanna colors means nothing we all rest in a black bag" Black-Magic: Aight, Your Piece Went Into A Complelty Diffrent Direction and Here I Felt The Topic Was Followed Nicely. You Had Some Good Imagery and Emotion Put Through This Piece and The Word Usuage In This Was Decent. You Need To Work On Vocabulary and More Creativity Though. Best Lines: "so much put on his mind, how could he handle tha strain love dismantled tha flame, a mere candle in rain" "its like i was dreamin first, until u look up n see tha clouds move then in a second, u see tha heavans, fall n crush everything around you" Vote - Black Magic Return Favor on My Battle With Pen'N Paper ~R~ |
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06-22-05, 08:04 PM | #14 | ||||
Sam Dope
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IP: 1CA5 73AB
Iight thanx uppin this shit...
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06-23-05, 12:12 AM | #15 | ||||||
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IP: 0825 899A
i really think black dropped dope i keystyled my verse its gonna come down to the voters and what type of topical they like
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^^in other words your scared running from a battle on a site made for battling and your mod so you dont have to battle you just duck and pop shit? herb I OWN RB YOUR NAME GOES HERE SOCRATES
EFUSIVE PAIR-A-DYCE LYRIC
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OAKLEY SDIZZLE
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