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07-18-05, 09:08 AM | #1 | |||||||
Evolution
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E.C (2-3) Vs. Stanza (3-4)
IP: 0DD2 7DAA
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday
No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa. All Battlers must vote on 4 other battles and leave their voting links in their battle thread. Battles voted on may be from either poetry or topical battles. If vote threads aren't in your poetry battle thread by sunday you will suffer a loss by Disqualification. Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Acuity, Drama Queen & Elementality). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. If you dont ask for an extention, and drop whenever you feel like it you will be DISQUALIFIED. Do not abuse extentions, they are not to be used if you're just too lazy to drop within the confines of the circumstances. Leave reasonable explanation for your absense. If the League notices you are a slacker due to this nature you will be banned for being out-right slothfully callous. Every battler must nominate (not their own) one topical and poetry battle for pieces of the week, in the main forum . People with pieces of the week shall have their drops stickied and placed in the Pieces Of Inspiration sub forum Don't ho-show because you will be banned if you do it twice. We can understand you cannot drop due to certain circumstances but if this happens a second time, you're banned from the league for 2 weeks. If you signed up for both leagues and you no-show in one league twice, you will be banned in both leagues! Try to limit the freeposts, we will have a chat/beef thread for that. Also give fully explained votes, if not your votes won't count! New Rule: 3-0 KO Topic: The waters Reflection |
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07-18-05, 06:28 PM | #2 | |||||||
Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
check...........
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07-18-05, 06:34 PM | #3 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
Checkin In......
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07-21-05, 05:48 PM | #4 | |||||
Banned: Biting
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IP: 28AD 5545
The Waters Reflections In These Waters I Think I See Another Dead Nigga Lookin At me Maybe In These Waters I See A Life That Useless From Weed In These Waters Lies A Poor Reflection Of a Man Thats Tired of 5-0 Detections In These Waters Lies Just Another Face Of a Man Thats Lost In Life and in Place In The Waters Reflection My Troubles Rest or shall I say my Worries At There Best Worries of Dying from a Bullet To The Chest Livin Life In The Present Full Of Regrets In These Waters I Know That I Saw a Young Man Thats Runnin From The Law In These Waters Lie The pain And tears But In The Waters I Wish to See....A Young Man who Lives Who he Is Goodluck Man ! |
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07-21-05, 07:16 PM | #5 | |||||||
Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
as i stop and stare to look at at the features of the ocean,
i can almost see a face, covered in ripples from the motions, the trees glisen, like a mirror image there almost the same, i put a stick and pierce the calm water to write my name, so quiet, swifts of wind draft and the sounds of water rushing, it skims the sea with a gust of air like my finger tips touching, i splash............. and the water trickles down my damp face, so liveley yet motionless, there's no chance of being traced, my mind wonders to the horizon where i can stare at the sun, and my eyes screw up but i can see my journey has just begun, g'luck mate... |
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07-21-05, 07:45 PM | #6 | ||||
To The Ground...
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IP: 889B CC97
V. EC, the other dudes was longer, but it just didnt have the content i was hoping.. I think EC had a better plot / story like, although it was more of a take, not much of a story was developed too well in either of your verses, i mean, thats a stupid attempt to be abstract, and it doesnt work when you dont even tie that it all means together at the end, but my vote stands.
v. EC
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07-22-05, 01:19 PM | #7 | ||
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
kinda both short from the both of yall nah really showin alota stuff but its aight....Stanza..u did good had the ok vocab and structure was good really kinda simple in ur verse didnt show creativivty but u had a strucutre and an aight emotion in ur verse so made it an aight verse...E.C ur was short and really not that good u can do way better but u had the emotion and more strucuture and flow on it and showed more creativivty due to tha lines were more stretched out showin more vocab at the same time....v/ this is kinda tuff cuz both did an aight job yall can do better wit more lines but my v/ is gonna go to E.C cuz jus had a better structure and a better vocabulary though stanza had a better emotion on it e.c won cuz of the rest of it.....so good jb to the both of ya... and all did an aight job bu next time try to amke he lines longer it jus seems interestin that way....v/ E.C
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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07-22-05, 01:32 PM | #8 | ||||
To The Ground...
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IP: 889B CC97
ahh yes, i just read the rules.
heres my link- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200606
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07-25-05, 08:50 AM | #9 | |||||||
Evolution
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IP: 0DD2 7DAA
E.C wins 2-0
closed |
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