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View Poll Results: Mr. Lyricist vs pictureperfect2 | |||
pictureperfect2 | 5 | 83.33% | |
Mr. Lyricist | 1 | 16.67% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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07-26-05, 07:21 PM | #1 |
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Mr. Lyricist vs pictureperfect2
IP: B25F 477A
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6 - Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate No Dickriding. Minimum posts to vote: 400 Check in by: 07-26-05 at 07:51 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
07-26-05, 07:28 PM | #2 | |
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IP: B25F 477A
Mr. Lyricist has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-05 07:28 PM.
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07-26-05, 07:30 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-26-05 07:30 PM.
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07-26-05, 08:00 PM | #4 |
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IP: B25F 477A
You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.*
& if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side. You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame. Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name. Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery . So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury. Explanations for the dicktards - * whore-eyes-n' = horizon should add up from the beginning. If you don't get anything else, don't vote. |
07-26-05, 08:16 PM | #5 | ||
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
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this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender cuz if your mr. lyricist.......... ........... u dissed all of rap and my gender avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar and ya heard he said he was rusty........... ............................................ even outside of his car if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose cuz i read his verse............ .............and saw he doesn't put brains to use
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07-27-05, 07:00 AM | #6 |
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IP: 9A74 ABE3
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07-27-05, 08:49 AM | #7 |
Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
Voted For: pictureperfect2
ok this is an aight battle but really it was one sided here PP2 got this fo sure u had more punches and that were hittin as well.....a betta flow a better verse totally though u didnt have anywordplay or not enuff of personals but its ok u got the punches and thats what got u my vote......but ML u need to work on ya delivery so punches can hit harder aight man and flow as well need to have that flow down try to use mulit's as well......but my v/ goes to Picture Perfect2.......... . . . . . . PLZ RTF WIT A HONEST VOTE IN MY BATTLES IN MY SIG.....THNX U VERY MUCH IN ADVANCE.......or vote gets removed......
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07-27-05, 03:31 PM | #8 | |
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
uppin.............................................
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07-27-05, 04:13 PM | #9 | |
aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE!
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: pictureperfect2
6 line battles r gay.....but hey pp2: this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender cuz if your mr. lyricist.......... ........... u dissed all of rap and my gender ^^GOOD OPENER...I WAS FEELIND ANAME PLAY BUT WHUTSZ UP WITH ALL DA PERIODS avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar and ya heard he said he was rusty........... ............................................ even outside of his car ^^^DECENT...U FLIP'D WHUT HE SAID IN DAT QUOTE if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose cuz i read his verse............ .............and saw he doesn't put brains to use ^^^NAH....2 BASIC PP2...I DIDN'T SEE MUCH CREATIVITY BUT I GUESS DATZ UR STYLE U GET RITE 2 DA POINT BUT OVERALL U HAD A SOLID VERSE mr.lyricist: You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.* & if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side. ^^^LOL...SIGHT & SIDE DONT RYHME FAM..DAT WAS FORCED You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame. Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name. ^^LMAOOO...ILL DAT WAS MADD WACK Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery . So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury. ^^^BEST LINE OF YA VERSE AND IT WAS WEAK MR....IN A 6 LINE BATTLIN U DIDN'T HAVE 1 HOTT LINE 4REAL NO HATIN OR NOTHIN...... V/PP2....VERY EASILY
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07-28-05, 12:09 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
uppin.................... and mr. L what was your name when u used to battle here?
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08-03-05, 12:06 AM | #11 | |
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 80EF 45DD
upppin.....................................,,,,,,, ,,,,
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08-04-05, 11:37 PM | #12 | |
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This was feedback posted for Mr. Lyricist
IP: F9A3 F671
If i could.. id vote for lyricist..
- good punchlines.. good flow.. the only thing im not feeling is "whore-eyes'n'" If u were to just rap this and not write it.. it would make no sense to whoever is listening.. Im no great, but think about that next time u wanna break up words to different words that sound good
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08-07-05, 09:35 PM | #13 | |
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 3EC9 2F38
upppin............................................ .
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08-16-05, 01:11 AM | #14 |
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IP: E408 E17F
Voted For: pictureperfect2
You'll get sonned, & I'll whore-eyes-n' put an end to your sight.* & if you think you MAY win, bitch I got 11 more months on my side. ^^good...Like the wordplay in set-up..4/10 You won't be perfect, after I rip picture out of the frame. Cuz' he was born with an L - like Sam Jacksons' government name. ^^played here....3/10 Even w/ a hot chick PP can't get/be hard, it's a mystery . So I'll dish 2 swipes to open your chest, & add in-salt to injury. ^^not much of a punch....1/10 OK..flow/structure was good throughout the whole verse.1st bar was your best.Nice wordplay and all.And that 2nd bar...I know I've heard sumtin similar to it somewhere before.Get more creative.3rd bar wasn't a punch as it was more of gangsta talk. this kid is the shit at rapping.... yo i surrender cuz if your mr. lyricist.......... ........... u dissed all of rap and my gender ^^OK....but seemed sloppy wit the rhymin words..3/10 avy a pimp? yet ya skill w/ a girl is the same as a bar and ya heard he said he was rusty........... ............................................ even outside of his car ^^good play of the qoute...7/10 if this kid was offered head i know what he'd choose cuz i read his verse............ .............and saw he doesn't put brains to use ^^Ok...but basic...4/10 OK...an ite verse.1st bar was ite..good concept..but didn't like the way it was put together.The 2nd bar was the best in the whole battle.A good personal play of qoute.The 3rd bar was a lil Basic.I think if Mr.Lyrisist put a good punch for the last bar...he woulda had it vote-PicturePerfect2 |
08-17-05, 03:17 PM | #15 | |
10:23 till i'm 86
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IP: 1A54 AB86
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