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Young Blaze | 5 | 71.43% | |
Predator | 2 | 28.57% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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07-22-05, 07:16 PM | #1 |
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Young Blaze vs Predator
IP: B70C 3C51
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8 - Lines 4 bars No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-23-05 at 07:16 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
07-22-05, 07:17 PM | #2 | |
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IP: B70C 3C51
Predator has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-22-05 07:17 PM.
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07-22-05, 08:13 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 231D FEDA
Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-22-05 08:13 PM.
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07-22-05, 08:33 PM | #4 | |
the real man of steel
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IP: 231D FEDA
Ight.....
a fast one........ Painin Gays,Straight Insane When Im Stainin Ya Frame Wit Treys No Master u jus p,u''ll get da Tank To Ya Chest Like Its Chainin Day Dis Chicken Devoured,Spittin N Rippin he stay Trippin n Lippin Hours Ya Shits Old G Cussing Me ya Crew Shot At They Scatter I Basically Stay Controlling "P" Like A Motherfukin Bladder My punchs''ll leave "P Drained Out` like " Pissin In Showers 1 Look At P Face N He Wonna Shine Like Me,Got This Pyscho-Phazed But He Couldn't 'Cop My Spark' Puttin "Robocop In Da Microwave" Ain't Got No Thuaghts Restraing My Drops Slaying Got Hot Shots To Put 'P On Da Floor' Like Potty Training The Tek ill Splatter Intestines, Matics Gon Shatter Ya Chest In popin magz Leavin P In A Bag like a Mothafuckin Bladder Infection thats it......
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07-23-05, 02:43 AM | #5 |
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IP: B70C 3C51
Blaze you weak and u can't compete wit me,
I'm Lance Armstrong, u cancer, u ain't defeatin' me, U can't beat me what the fuck, is u crazy? B, u can't see me like both of ya eyes was LAZ-E, (lazy)*, Face it Young Blaze you ain't got no skills, And ya pockets like prepaid phones, u ain't got a bill, U shitty and yo style jus bug me, I'ma end this battle like u look ......... very ugly. EASY *In the 4th line I broke up his name BLAZE as u can see. It's ya boy Predator, I took a lil time, but now I'm back like I never left. GET AT ME
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07-23-05, 02:46 AM | #6 |
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IP: B70C 3C51
The battle was only 8 lines. It's good though. Don't hold that against him I know how y'all do
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07-23-05, 11:27 AM | #7 | |
the real man of steel
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IP: 231D FEDA
UUUppppinnnn.....my bad i thought it was 8 -.....................
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07-23-05, 01:14 PM | #8 |
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IP: B70C 3C51
uppin............................................. ........................
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07-26-05, 07:25 PM | #9 |
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IP: B70C 3C51
uppin............................................. ...........
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07-26-05, 07:27 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 625D 635A
Voted For: Predator
Predator.....Blaze went ova line limit............... |
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07-26-05, 07:27 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 625D 635A
^^^But Blaze had a far better verse than Predator....I mean...Predator...that was weak!!!!
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07-26-05, 10:22 PM | #12 |
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uppin.............................................
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07-27-05, 08:49 PM | #13 |
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uppin.............................................
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07-27-05, 10:32 PM | #14 |
Poet's Daughter.
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IP: 06A3 EFB1
Voted For: Young Blaze
Blaze you weak and u can't compete wit me, I'm Lance Armstrong, u cancer, u ain't defeatin' me, -The set up Line was basic. The 2nd line w/ a punch was weak, word it better. U can't beat me what the fuck, is u crazy? B, u can't see me like both of ya eyes was LAZ-E, (lazy)*, -The set up line..Is weak. The 2nd Line with the Punch is weak also, word your Lines better. Face it Young Blaze you ain't got no skills, And ya pockets like prepaid phones, u ain't got a bill, U shitty and yo style jus bug me, I'ma end this battle like u look ......... very ugly. - Ok the 1st bar was Ok. Had a wordplay, but still it was a weak Punch The 2nd bar (The closer) Was Played out...Weak Punch... Overall-This was a weak verse you dropped "Predator", cause everything seem so basic. Next time come with better Concepts in your Lines, and be more creative with your wordpalys..Bad Drop "Predator" Painin Gays,Straight Insane When Im Stainin Ya Frame Wit Treys No Master u jus p,u''ll get da Tank To Ya Chest Like Its Chainin Day - Meh Not feeling the opener, nice multi'z but the Punch was Ok. Dis Chicken Devoured,Spittin N Rippin he stay Trippin n Lippin Hours Ya Shits Old G Cussing Me ya Crew Shot At They Scatter -Dont even Rhyme. But It was an Ok Punch, mostly Like an thread than a punch. weak. I Basically Stay Controlling "P" Like A Motherfukin Bladder My punchs''ll leave "P Drained Out` like " Pissin In Showers - Decent Wordplay here, Good Punch I liked it. 1 Look At P Face N He Wonna Shine Like Me,Got This Pyscho-Phazed But He Couldn't 'Cop My Spark' Puttin "Robocop In Da Microwave" - Ok Punch. Good Concept Though. Ain't Got No Thuaghts Restraing My Drops Slaying Got Hot Shots To Put 'P On Da Floor' Like Potty Training - Nice Multi'z. The 2nd line (The Punch) Was good. The Tek ill Splatter Intestines, Matics Gon Shatter Ya Chest In popin magz Leavin P In A Bag like a Mothafuckin Bladder Infection - Did you already talked about this Bladder?...Uh Ok this was an Ok closer. Overall=This was an Ok verse. Nice multi'z, The Punches were ok for a quick one. You kept talking about "Guns" and "Threats", to me they aint Punches nor insulting what so ever. But Ok verse. Keep Dropping. Conclusion- This was an One-Sided battle. My vote goes to Young Blaze, he had an ok verse but he had Punches and they were alot harder. Predator, I say elevate on punches and wording your Lines Better, you've got the right concept down just not Enough though. V/young blaze for better Punches. Chea Return a favor in my battle with Black~Magic.
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07-28-05, 12:54 AM | #15 |
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IP: CF4E 8780
Voted For: Young Blaze
one sided the whole way.. overall youngblaze took this shit in the first 4 lines.. it wasnt the dopest verse but still decent non the less... the vocab was more complex on young blazes side i think pred needs to work on alot of stuff before he battles again both of you need elevating but the battle was one sided... Vote...YB RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=201689
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