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Nino Brown | 5 | 83.33% | |
Gangrene | 1 | 16.67% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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07-29-05, 11:56 PM | #1 |
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Gangrene vs Nino Brown
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07-29-05, 11:56 PM | #2 | |
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Gangrene has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-29-05 11:56 PM.
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07-30-05, 12:47 AM | #3 | |
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Nino Brown has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-30-05 12:47 AM.
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07-30-05, 01:03 AM | #4 | |
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*Thought i was a Newb 2..LOL..Yo Fault* Yo I seen ya Last Battle.....Gangs You's a Lame If i said u Was Sick ...I would only be Reffering 2 your User Name Heres a Pointer..Punches. what ya Rhyme Lacks Tapeing Presents..with 1 Hand Was the Last time u Had a Battle Under Wraps I kinda Guessin your a Fag.So skip ya Gay Rules Cuz im Over ya Head Like Babies In Wave Pools Your Booty Allready..So u dont need Wack off Flix But Saying u Won this Is Ludacris..Like Doctor Phill Givein Weight Loss Tips Dun Deal... [/I]
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07-30-05, 11:41 AM | #5 |
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The real Nino was a G, this nigga str8 ass B,
Nino sold crack, he only seen crack is when his lips is ashy, Another RV actor, he weak, and the facts jus be, That his raps just weak, like crackhead teeth, U from New Jack City, he jus like me, a newB, Callin himself Nino, naw this nigga more like Pookie. If u don't get it: -- Nino Brown was drug Kingpin in the movie New Jack City -- Pookie(poo- key) was a crackhead in the Movie New Jack City |
07-30-05, 01:02 PM | #6 |
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IP: B70C 3C51
Voted For: Gangrene
I seen ya Last Battle.....Gangs You's a Lame If i said u Was Sick ...I would only be Reffering 2 your User Name ----- nice------ 4/5 Heres a Pointer..Punches. what ya Rhyme Lacks Tapeing Presents..with 1 Hand Was the Last time u Had a Battle Under Wraps ----- OK . Not that tight----- 2/5 I kinda Guessin your a Fag.So skip ya Gay Rules Cuz im Over ya Head Like Babies In Wave Pools ----- Weak------- 1/5 Your Booty Allready..So u dont need Wack off Flix But Saying u Won this Is Ludacris..Like Doctor Phill Givein Weight Loss Tips ------ OK. Finish------ 3/5 OVERALL: 2.5/5 ---- Average. Took too long with the punchlines get to the point. -------------------------------------------------------------------------- The real Nino was a G, this nigga str8 ass B, Nino sold crack, he only seen crack is when his lips is ashy, ------- HOT .nice way to start------ 5/5 Another RV actor, he weak, and the facts jus be, That his raps just weak, like crackhead teeth, ------- Okay but I heard it before----- 2/5 U from New Jack City, he jus like me, a newB, Callin himself Nino, naw this nigga more like Pookie. ------- Lol. Nice closer.------- 4/5 OVERALL: 3.7/5. Good. Would have been better if you would've used an original punchline in the second bar. Conclusion: I felt Gangrene took this battle. He made disses towards Nino taking his name and hometown from the movie New Jack City. Nice Verse. Nino Brown didn't come with any punches that stood out. He went over the limit (I did not count that against him. I just vote on what I see). Vote: Gangrene
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07-30-05, 01:08 PM | #7 | |
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Voted For: Nino Brown
Flow - Nino, was structured better, but i didnt quite feel the flow...flow Punches - Gangrene, some were played by both cats, but i felt that Dino had more and the ones he did have hit a lot harder Personals - Nino, had alot more, and were alot better, Gang's were pretty lame and didn't form together to well.. Multies - Obviously Dino, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate Vote: Nino Brown
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07-30-05, 01:08 PM | #8 | |
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Voted For: Nino Brown
The real Nino was a G, this nigga str8 ass B, Nino sold crack, he only seen crack is when his lips is ashy, ^^This was whack...sorry Another RV actor, he weak, and the facts jus be, That his raps just weak, like crackhead teeth, ^^Weak as fuck............ U from New Jack City, he jus like me, a newB, Callin himself Nino, naw this nigga more like Pookie ^^^NO........ You miss one dope punch.YA can't just state bullshit and except to get the win.It's all about wordplay and metas.Not everybody is Predator.LoL I seen ya Last Battle.....Gangs You's a Lame If i said u Was Sick ...I would only be Reffering 2 your User Name ^^You complementing his name dawg Heres a Pointer..Punches. what ya Rhyme Lacks Tapeing Presents..with 1 Hand Was the Last time u Had a Battle Under Wraps ^^take that tapeing part out..... I kinda Guessin your a Fag.So skip ya Gay Rules Cuz im Over ya Head Like Babies In Wave Pools ^^OK......... Your Booty Allready..So u dont need Wack off Flix But Saying u Won this Is Ludacris..Like Doctor Phill Givein Weight Loss Tips ^^OK..... Welll......ther only punches I saw was the last the bars in this shit.Ya got this easily due to the fact you actually had one punch...while Gangrele had none. |
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07-30-05, 01:37 PM | #9 |
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07-30-05, 04:13 PM | #10 | |
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07-30-05, 04:31 PM | #11 |
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Voted For: Nino Brown
The real Nino was a G, this nigga str8 ass B, Nino sold crack, he only seen crack is when his lips is ashy, not a very goodline flow was god but wasnt feeling the personal but it was origianl so props 6/10 Another RV actor, he weak, and the facts jus be, That his raps just weak, like crackhead teeth, played line bad vocab not a good punch no wordplay reall 5/10 U from New Jack City, he jus like me, a newB, Callin himself Nino, naw this nigga more like Pookie. good peronal first line was wack though 7/10 YOUR OPENERS AND CLOSERS WERE DECENT HOWEVER HALEF THE BARS WERE WACK YOU USE ALOT OF FILLERS UR FLOW ISNT THAT BAD THOUGH UR VOCAB NEEDS ELEVATION ALSO TRY AND USE MORE PERSONALS U HAD 2 THAT CAN BE MENTIONED YOUR WODPLAY WASNT THERE ALOT OF CATS WILL VOTE FOR U JUST BECAUSE U HAVE WORDPLAY BUT OVERALL PRETTY GOOD VERSE FOR A NEW B JUST ELEVATE WITH TIME I seen ya Last Battle.....Gangs You's a Lame If i said u Was Sick ...I would only be Reffering 2 your User Name PERSONAL BUT ITS A PLAYED CONCEPT NOT ORIGINAL AND WORK ON UR STRUCTURE 6/10 Heres a Pointer..Punches. what ya Rhyme Lacks Tapeing Presents..with 1 Hand Was the Last time u Had a Battle Under Wraps NOT A GREAT PUNCH BUT IT WAS ORIGINAL 7/10 I kinda Guessin your a Fag.So skip ya Gay Rules Cuz im Over ya Head Like Babies In Wave Pools NOT A GOOD PUNNCH BUT ITS PRETTY ORIGINAL 6/10 Your Booty Allready..So u dont need Wack off Flix But Saying u Won this Is Ludacris..Like Doctor Phill Givein Weight Loss Tips KINDA PLAED BUT HILARIOUS THAT FAT BITCH GIVEN WEIGHT LOSS TIPS LOL HE NEEDS TO START USIN HIS OWN ADVICE BEST LIN OTU OF BOTH VERSES I THINK U NEED TO WOK ON VOCAB BUT MOST OF RV DOES TRY AND USE MORE PERSONAS GOOD BATTLE TO BOOTH RETURN THE FAVOR WILL A PEER VS LOYALTY
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07-30-05, 08:51 PM | #12 |
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07-30-05, 10:22 PM | #13 | |
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07-31-05, 10:56 PM | #14 |
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08-01-05, 12:42 AM | #15 | |
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