Battle Rules:

10-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-31-05 at 11:06 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Chameleon has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-05 03:27 PM.

New Meth0d has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-05 08:15 PM.

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Wicked One vs C-Bo

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Voted For: Chameleon


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FLOW-Chameleon all the way.He has a beautiful rhyme sheme consisting of mutlis.New method.....ditch that whole one syllable rhyme sheme.

PUNCHES-Chameleon....had some dope methaphors.Next time..try to add some multis and maybe some personals.New....you were just too basic..

"They call him chameleon cause he blends in w/ tha herbs"
I should change my name to 0,the way he's next to none"
^^c'mon....wat is this?This was newbish.

PERSONALS-This is one part that needs the most improvement by both of you.

MULTIS-Chameleon...new method had a basic rhyme sheme.

COMPLEXITY-Chameleon...i already explained in punches how basic New method was.

Vote-chameleon

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Damn good battle homie... Just checkin polls for fam

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Voted For: Chameleon

Flow - Chameleon, was structured better, which made it flow better

Punches - chameleon, some were played by both cats, but i felt that chameleon had more

Multies - Obviously chmeleon, by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. If your a newb take a close look and you'll see.

Vocab - Both were lacking on this, and need to elevate

Originality - Even, some of lines by both of you were played, but overall alright verses



but overall i think that my vote is to CHAMELEON

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The Element

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lol @ blatant herb voting, and newbness...........

Wicked One
My words are chock full of scorching letters Method you think YOU'RE better??...
I'm STILL the King round this bitch and you're one of the Court Jesters...
Self glrofication, no punch.
Who the fuck said you were dope?? It's a vicious rumor...
Try and shoot me i dodge bullets like Wyatt Earp with six shooters...
I line. No punch.
I'm forever-great finished in a flurry words typed quick-in-a-hurry this is checkmate...
This is what happens when a legend faces a bum who's less than second rate...
Attempt at a punch finally. Self glorification again.
U wanna discuss posts. ho, urs are jokes writings worthless as if ur mind capacity was zero...
Ur mouths shape like an O cause u sip bottle tops n poke holes thru guys like cheerios...
Lotta meaningless multis that makes it hard to understand this line. It isn't complex, just stupid.
I'ma call u whistle the way u blowoff MC's ur skills are pitiful n simple...
U bit the big pickle, ur best efforts are compared to nursery rhyme riddles...
Bit a big pickle? Wtf is this?
Psssh.. and to think this wasn't even close to the best I could write...
It's bed time kid I just put you to sleep for the rest of ur life...
Self glorification and I did line again

How you are getting votes, I don't know. This is a horrible verse in my opinion. Meaningless multis, no real wordplay, maybe 2 or 3 punch attempts. You have nothing in this verse but self glorification.

New Method
you aint street now go back to the burbs
they call him chameleon cause he blends in w/ tha herbs
Ok punch. Not that original, but ok nameplay.
you can pray to god that you hope to win
shit you fallin off more than baggy jeans on an eithopian
Nah, not feeling this. Filler and blah punch.
i've never heard of you kid, so get off of my cock
so when i say nobodys perefect im really givin you props
Lol, I liked this punch, but first line is a filler
he aint drop knowledge, im jus makin him my son
i should change my name to 0 the way he's next to none
Eh...daddy line. Ok wordplay.
you schemin to win, theres no way man
dats walkin on thin ice an ima help you fall through w/ya plans
Ok wordplay. Nothing amazing though.
id prank call this bitch but cell phone sucks
but ima get you on the horn...of a fuckin elephant tusk
I will line.

Lotta fillers man you gotta work on that. Least you threw one or two punches that hit, work on using every line for a good set up or a good personal/punch.

That's some REAL feedback.

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Voted For: Chameleon

New Meth0d

you aint street now go back to the burbs
they call him chameleon cause he blends in w/ tha herbs
^feelin last line, first one is filler

you can pray to god that you hope to win
shit you fallin off more than baggy jeans on an eithopian
^again feelin second one but not really first one

i've never heard of you kid, so get off of my cock
so when i say nobodys perefect im really givin you props
^haha lol @ the last line, made me laugh

he aint drop knowledge, im jus makin him my son
i should change my name to 0 the way he's next to none
^lolz coo wordplay

you schemin to win, theres no way man
dats walkin on thin ice an ima help you fall through w/ya plans
^decent bar right here

id prank call this bitch but cell phone sucks
but ima get you on the horn...of a fuckin elephant tusk
^lmao...rude one haha

Nice but could be more consistent with the punches, good creativity, vocab is coo, flow is aight and all, just a bit more consistent I suppose...

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Chameleon

My words are chock full of scorching letters Method you think YOU'RE better??...
I'm STILL the King round this bitch and you're one of the Court Jesters...
^uhm bit self-glorifiying but still turned into punch though so good

Who the fuck said you were dope?? It's a vicious rumor...
Try and shoot me i dodge bullets like Wyatt Earp with six shooters...
^coo wordplay, nice punch in first one

I'm forever-great finished in a flurry words typed quick-in-a-hurry this is checkmate...
This is what happens when a legend faces a bum who's less than second rate...
^haha second one made me laugh bro, nice wordings and ish, good bar

U wanna discuss posts. ho, urs are jokes writings worthless as if ur mind capacity was zero...
Ur mouths shape like an O cause u sip bottle tops n poke holes thru guys like cheerios...
^DAMNNNNN, killed him with this one, holy sh*it man...

I'ma call u whistle the way u blowoff MC's ur skills are pitiful n simple...
U bit the big pickle, ur best efforts are compared to nursery rhyme riddles
^hehe nice punch here too, u really pickin the pace up

Psssh.. and to think this wasn't even close to the best I could write...
It's bed time kid I just put you to sleep for the rest of ur life...
^no punch but good closer though

You really picked the pace up towards the second half of ya verse, nice punches especially that one bar, damn ya killed him with that one for real! Flow was dope, nice wordplay and ish, solid battle verse!

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Omg...look at this shit...seriously...i dont care if i win or lose...Seriously...If i win then i win and give you your first lost..Dont bitch seriously...

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Wicked One vs C-Bo

lmao @ your buddy list having som many kids from RV on it