Battle Rules:

ALL EXPLAINED VOTES WILL BE RETURNED BY ME AND TECHNICAL

^^so you know you not wasting your time
8-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
NO Hate
NO d/r
NO Bullshit
3-0 KO



Minimum posts to vote: 20

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Win by 3-0 KO

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 01:08 AM.

Technical has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-05 01:51 AM.

he's taste'n the sweep,n base'n on heat,it's like he surrounds the winter
n his location is "the ring" because he's wrapped around my finger
so call this abuse,cuz wat took u a voyage to move,I did in it one 'trip-pull'(triple)
but least ur name's correct,cause ya 'techs'(text) ain't worth one 'nical'(nikel)
he's dying for ranking,n call him a blanket,cuz he's in this for heating
and he don't get pussy,naw, n he knows it too,his interest is beating
I'm tired of all these fans,he's callin me fam,his brain's messed up,like I spinned it
cuz,Technical's seeing 'real-asian'(relation) to me,like I had my eyes squinted
tech's feelin fan's bridge,cuz his flows been stopped by a sealed bandage
n he thought veyetal would no-show,so he spit in his real language
open mic's acting,his tactic's to lie,i got his bitch strapped to be mine
his 1st post in a month,why?,well take out the techs,'n flip it back,to realize**

**technical...take out tech...nical...flip it backwards...lacin...

lacing means to get sprayed.


understand both verses or don't vote...good luck technical

where you at homie?.....don't forget you gotta post tonight man......

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Voted For: Natural killa

Structure-Natural killa, i got him becuz....his structure was more intact than tech's tech u were all over da place, try cleanin that up a bit....some say structure wins battles

Personals-Natural killa go more personals links are prooof so they are good at that...tech, ur personals were played and didnt were basic rhyme scheme, make them more creative

Punches-Both had ok punches but NK was more fresh and hard hitting......tech had some good punches too but not all of them were hard hitting. up on that yo.

Multis-NK had better multis in fact tech bairly had multis at all so it was hands down nk.....nice job man

Originality-Both Pretty original so cant really give it to anyone.....so this catergorie is a tie yo.......

V/NATURAL KILLA

please rtf on my sig link

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A LIFE OF CHRYME

wtf..why'd you put it at 20 posts?..shoulda put it at 200, these newbies are gonna raid thsi thread..

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^^yea....yo...get that vote removed...even I have to admit that vote was conspicously a d/r....I shoulda put 200...sorry man..

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Voted For: Natural killa

he's taste'n the sweep,n base'n on heat,it's like he surrounds the winter
n his location is "the ring" because he's wrapped around my finger
^^^kinda decent, with the wittiness and shit, but not too hard of a punch
so call this abuse,cuz wat took u a voyage to move,I did in it one 'trip-pull'(triple)
but least ur name's correct,cause ya 'techs'(text) ain't worth one 'nical'(nikel)
^^^really forced, didn't hit hard.
I'm tired of all these fans,he's callin me fam,his brain's messed up,like I spinned it
cuz,Technical's seeing 'real-asian'(relation) to me,like I had my eyes squinted
^^
not a punch, its a personal or whatever, but its not dissin him at all.
^^
all and all i think u had quite a bit forced wordplay... u need to read more good battles and learn how to word your punches better.

tech-

you're support is more useless than wooden chairs!
^^
real played concept

guy'll find his limbs distorted, cuz this God spittin dat fire that'll cost ya sins
joust n corpse this bitch, fact is, u get 'less feed' than 'disobediant foster kids'!!!
I'll let this dick die n vanish, shut down ya port yo(puerto), I'll maim hispanics
this kid's lame and average, truth is, you have no NATURAL skill or talent!!
^^
not worded good for a good witty punch.
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also u had some forced lines

both- aint really get how to word punches to hit real hard, but i think natural had wittier lines that if worded better woulda hit well. votes goin to him cuz his verse had potential
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return the vote link in my sig!!!!

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yay.....*runs to return favor*....................

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