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09-12-05, 01:01 PM | #1 | |||
Skadoosh!
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Shodown vs. X-tortion
IP: 9DB1 64D6
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09-14-05, 10:30 AM | #2 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 3240 794D
checkin in now...I'll have my verse
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09-14-05, 11:49 PM | #3 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 9DB1 64D6
Shodown asked Payn to check in for him, but he doesn't seem to have done it so I am checking in on behalf of Shodown. - King Solo
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09-16-05, 04:22 AM | #4 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 0825 899A
Why can't I start aging?...haven't got a chance..my heart pacing
Enough hate in me..waitin to form revolution..tear apart nations Older than most jazz musicians..yet look young as adolescents I wanna mature in a life..prayin tonight..to stack my blessings I ask Him questions like..'Why decide to go & give me this curse' To see me get hurt?..Main reason my wrists make fifths jerk Look scraggly as I feel...cold shiverin from these..tattered clothes Could go pass the modes..I rob citizens to say..Pass the Dough! But like crimes & time...both will age to degrees they'll evolve Back then, we openly talked..now no profanities can revolve It's getting old now...reliving the same exact day in cold towns Traces of clouds..smokin eight spliffs in style..during smokeout Can this be sorcery?..What I can't seem to understand clearer That chrowds scoot away...afraid of...invisible man in mirror Dropped my weight...in the room from being..shocked & amazed Escape out wheezin..heavy breathin like I'll cough for days What the hell it be..pains so excrusiating..I just fell on knees Ravenous hunger surged thru my veins..like heroin fiends And stare on..a calm bystander slowly pushing a stroller Conscience told me to kill..I will if only this bullshit over To being finished..proceed the instant..unleashed like a menace Lift my head & she's dead..blood leaks out her neck blemish Baffled how tough it is..it seems a vampire product this shit Soon as I realize who it is..grasp my knife...cut my wrists Felt faint followed by revived..regeneratin like a worm's body I been alive..watchin war & famine..piles of burned bodies Never haunt me..your girls cater me to her ass perculating Inside bars near tequila & vodka..I still think time's my rapist Why replace this..cause I'm ageless without rising facelifts |
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09-17-05, 12:11 AM | #5 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 9DB1 64D6
X-tortion wins by no-show.
This Battle Is Now Closed At 12:11am. |
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