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10-29-05, 04:19 PM | #1 | ||||
I Smacc Booty Emcee's
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Kontroverzy - I'm Too Hot [HEAD BANGA!!]
IP: FB44 C897
Alright this track is some serious sickness. The beat is off the chain. Getz at me. ill return the feed on ya'll shit...Got a whole team that helped me with this shit Kontroverzy - I'm Too Hot Organized by - Kontroverzy Vocals by: Kontroverzy Written by: Kontroverzy Intro and Special Thanks To - Apexx Of The Rush Ent Mastering by: J reyez Of Loud Mouf Productions Beat: C.F Productions http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3027992&q=lo http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=3027992&q=hi http://www.soundclick.com/kontroverzy Lyrics Verse One I get crunk like my niggaz in texas.. No license...but still roll in the lexus.. Switch my flow just to keep u guessin shoot cha head in...wit da sniff n wessin Went to africa just to get this necklace.. Im Bacon not like the wun for breakfast.. the wun that got u runnin out emergency exit.. Im hectic...just gimme my cheque bitch.. -Chorus- I'm Too Hot For Ya'll man (x4) Verse Two I'm So Hot When I Spit.. I have white boiz lookin like Patrick ewing from the Knicks.. you new to the game and you ratin my flow? Im like a bomb with no time..im just waitin to blow.. The Ice on my wrist, leave you covered in snow.. Even george bush sayin He Gutta fo sho.. I stack green...You tryna clap me.. Ill pop more holes in ya face then alica keys acny.. dont gots gun..but it aint hard to get one.. so make like the cartoon...and jet-son.. if i come back ill crack open ya head son.. and leave u in the same place u got cha meds from.. Im so Sick...wen it comes to this rap game.. i push so much weight i think i got majour back pain.. i get so much luv gurlz manz tryna attack me.. but i just put em in da back seat like taxayz!!.. :Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213012 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212455
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10-29-05, 04:28 PM | #2 | |||
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IP: 2029 97B3
the intro is cool. Doomsday sounds so mean. lol
oh snap. i hate these kinda beats. but thats still cool. first verse - i think your flow is too strict. like i think you should kinda relax more with the flow and let it flow. you are on the beat though. lyrics nah. but that dont matter cause people usually just listen to the beat. chorus - boring. nothing special second verse -flow same as first. alicia keys line? umm its okay. lyrics again werent too good. your prescence was there. matched the beat well. overall good club song. rtf in my sig on the song He Watches Me |
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10-29-05, 04:37 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: FB44 C897
lol yeah the crowd on this site likes the underground shit. but the fanbase in my area likes the head bangin. shit like this. so i'm goin back and forth between what kind of shit to do. imma be doin alot of underground tracks starting soon though fo sho
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10-29-05, 05:22 PM | #4 | |||||
The Paragraph President
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IP: 2372 BC06
dope ass intro mayn props to apexx aka dooms.
the beat is a fuckin banga like dayum, I like that, the ewing line is so dope....the lyrics are fa sho dope...overall dope track ima rock on my speakers for awhile. the quality is good as well. overall dope track keep it up 1
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10-30-05, 07:06 AM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 5110 D605
thanx famz...i appreciate the feedback..
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10-30-05, 10:37 AM | #6 | ||||
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im bout to go drop some feed on other tracks....do the same and drop feed on this..
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10-30-05, 01:04 PM | #7 | ||||
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Oh and big ups to everybody that helped me on this track
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10-30-05, 01:07 PM | #8 | |||||
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IP: 963B DD50
this track was coo.. hook was plain.. but it was a good club banga
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10-30-05, 01:12 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: 5110 D605
yeah i have the track without the hook. im going to add another hook. I just didn't have time to think of one.
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10-30-05, 01:41 PM | #10 | |||||
Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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IP: BA87 A0AC
godaamn @ this track...
first things first intro- loving how the dude apexx got on it it really gives it more of a protege type/up and coming star feel to it.. beat- pretty str8 someone wanted me to do a track wit em on this beat but i turned it down... however, im DEFINETLY liking you on this beat i think you fit it perfectly and word to how you get right into it i loooooove the start of your verse, i unno why i jus do killin them punches, shit sound like something you be spittin on the street to a group...and thats wassup ya first verse is almost perfect in my book, i aint findin nuttin i dont like in it...if i had to find one thing itd be quality, and even thats pretty damn decent. emotion is off the fucking chain, like i said i picture you spittin this to a group... the 2nd verse is pretty solid as well not as good as the first, mostly because your flow was a tad bit off in some parts lyrics is still pretty str8 overall i say the 1st verse outshined the 2nd though, but hey still nice... but the number one thing im not feeling in this track is the hook.. i know hooks can be a pain in the ass most of the time, but just sit down and think about it for awhile and youll eventually get one.. the whole point of a hook is to make it catchy, nah mean? i think it wouldve been crazy had you kept the whole concept of it now, but thrown in something right before it sorta like.. "i thought you knew? im tooo hot for yalllll man" ^^just an example but yea, hook could use some work, but thats really it. overall, i was most definetly feeling this track i listened to it a few times, out of pleasure.. most of the times ill jus peep a track once, maybe twice just to write up some feed for it..but this i actually bumped cause i liked it. so thats saying something 8/10 keep em coming fam and we should hit up a collab sometime
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10-30-05, 01:43 PM | #11 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 0E0E C63B
Damn the beat is kinda weird but im feelin ya flow the song isn't the best quality new style im feelin it man sounds like u just put the speakers to the mic and recorded hot rhymes man 8.5/10
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10-30-05, 01:52 PM | #12 | |||||
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Word much respect for the feedback. Jea im going to redo the hook once i have more time and i think of something interesting too say..i might even sample it with some rappers from other songs. I respect the honest feedback
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10-30-05, 02:07 PM | #13 | |||||
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ya flows a lil' strict, instead of lettin it come out naturally it seemed really structured, but uhm, the lyrics were nice *raspberry* I wasn't bout to read, I actually heard everything you said... Lyrics were pretty good, flow was good for the beat, intro- nice by Apexx, i was feeling both verses... your energy was pretty good on the track, stay up..
this wasn't bad, the only thing I wasn't feelin was the Chorus, It seem like you coulda added much more to it. But yeah, straight track....... 1
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10-30-05, 02:15 PM | #14 | |||||
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IP: 5110 D605
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thanx ma i appreciate the honest feedback. LOL yeah i know about the hook. and i dont think it was that structured but hey thats the shit i dont notice right? respect
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10-30-05, 02:30 PM | #15 | ||||
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thanx famz. i appreciate it.,
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