Battle Rules:

4-6 barz or 8-12 lines (how ever u wanna call it)
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no dick riding
no hate votes
no unexplained votes
no bullshit votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-17-05 at 05:32 PM

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Call_it_Murder01 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-05 05:38 PM.

Cdusit has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-05 06:00 PM.

its like.......

beating me is as likley as throwing ice cubes at the sun
Fuck...you couldnt even match my opener..call it done?
but just so i dont get D'Q ill simply match line limits
battling you im seeing more pussy that a lesbians mind submits
ya names intials backwards is what ya far from picking up
I leave you falling solo like half the twin towers.. hit and struck
kid your a waste of my time like broken clocks in the garbage
your verse is a pure mess like youve simply split a ink cartridge
I spose it times for the curtain to close on another loss to you
maybe think about getting ya name changed Mr Call_it_murder02*

*last line name play= his names numbers currently equal his record 01.. after this it will be 02..

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To start out, ur dirty das why yo' knees sore.
I know I could punch u out asoon as I hit the keyboard//1
Cetch a crotch rocket wit no charge ur none profit.
Fuck poundin u my punchlines crack ya spine from my pocket//2
Your high strung, leave u stringy from five guns.
say goodbye to ur wife as she says hi to my tougue//3 (ouch)
She needs lovin', ull never be seen in the public.
If uve seen my whole town happy from oral t hen u no C does it//4*

*His name Cdusit

^^^^^uppin for votes if uve read this

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Voted For: Cdusit

Cdusit-some wordplay but i thought it could of improve and done alot better but overall it was an average verse, nothin bad, nothin too special but good i guess

call_it_murder-you also had an ok verse it wasnt nothin special none of it really catched my eye

kinda hard to vote on but i think this would go to Cdusit just for more wordplay

vote//cdusit

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Voted For: Cdusit

Well, this was obvious you won. Your verse is pretty good. Could definately elevate. Work on punches and set ups/fresh concepts. Good structure. Keep at it.

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Voted For: Cdusit

Cdusit:
beating me is as likley as throwing ice cubes at the sun
Fuck...you couldnt even match my opener..call it done?
Good Start - 5/10
but just so i dont get D'Q ill simply match line limits
battling you im seeing more pussy that a lesbians mind submits
NO - 2/10
ya names intials backwards is what ya far from picking up
I leave you falling solo like half the twin towers.. hit and struck
Didnt Like it - 3/10
kid your a waste of my time like broken clocks in the garbage
your verse is a pure mess like youve simply split a ink cartridge
Ok Punch - 4/10
I spose it times for the curtain to close on another loss to you
maybe think about getting ya name changed Mr Call_it_murder02*
iight Personal - 4.5/10
18.5/50

You had some good punches and personals, and the flow was pretty good.


Call_it_Murder01:
To start out, ur dirty das why yo' knees sore.
I know I could punch u out asoon as I hit the keyboard//1
MEH - 2/10
Cetch a crotch rocket wit no charge ur none profit.
Fuck poundin u my punchlines crack ya spine from my pocket//2
NO - 1/10
Your high strung, leave u stringy from five guns.
say goodbye to ur wife as she says hi to my tougue//3 (ouch)
Not Hittin' - 2/10
She needs lovin', ull never be seen in the public.
If uve seen my whole town happy from oral t hen u no C does it//4*
NO - 1/10
6/40

You need to work on your punchlines, all you can do is flow, you need to be more creative.

Vote - CD

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Voted For: Cdusit

She needs lovin', ull never be seen in the public.
If uve seen my whole town happy from oral t hen u no C does it//4*
VS.
I spose it times for the curtain to close on another loss to you
maybe think about getting ya name changed Mr Call_it_murder02*

there's a clear winner here, nothin spectacular from either but these are the best punches i saw and call it murder came pretty wack on this one.

V/Cdusit

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can i get one more vote on this to close it please.

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