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11-27-05, 08:40 PM | #1 | ||
A Life Of Chryme
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Flow Intelligent & Aimez vs. Blackmage & Diligence
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Battles up: Monday Check In: Wednesday Drop time: Friday Both members must check in. Only 1 member must drop the verses. Rules Topic: Physco vs. Sane 16-32 Lines per Member . . . . .
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11-27-05, 09:28 PM | #2 | ||
Light Weight
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check..check...
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11-28-05, 11:15 AM | #3 | ||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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Check.. Aimez.. Lets do 20-30 Each and just PM me ya verse when youre done and ill post em up
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11-28-05, 02:26 PM | #4 | ||
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checkmage.......
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My SpellBook Fuck being creative, you guys have certainly given up on it
GET DOPER Knowledge is Power, Stop being Weak The Legend of Blackmage Featuring such heads as...Tha Q, 9th degree, Enygma,The green team, Big J and probably you! SO DON'T SLEEP!Coming soon to a soundclick near you...
........Shit.....Nigga.......
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11-28-05, 05:46 PM | #5 | |
Please excuse My Sickness
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IP:
Checkin In and Ill will prolly PM u today with the Lines im bout to write anyway
goodluck
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11-28-05, 11:22 PM | #6 | ||
Is F'in Bored
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IP:
Any planning on this dill or what?
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My SpellBook Fuck being creative, you guys have certainly given up on it
GET DOPER Knowledge is Power, Stop being Weak The Legend of Blackmage Featuring such heads as...Tha Q, 9th degree, Enygma,The green team, Big J and probably you! SO DON'T SLEEP!Coming soon to a soundclick near you...
........Shit.....Nigga.......
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11-28-05, 11:50 PM | #7 | ||
Light Weight
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yea, i'll post up the verses, whenever your done just pm it to me
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12-02-05, 05:19 PM | #8 | ||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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A Topical Production Brought To You By Aimez & Flow Intelligent Sane Vs. Insane Blue: Sane Red: Insane 1st Part: Aimez 2nd Part: Flow I. Man im Goin Crazy and I dont Know what to do First of all you need to calm down who you talkin to? Im talkin to myself I told You im losing My mind Dont you know man its only a matter of time ...Before I Leave this Earth and Be forgotten My Soul Wondering forever and My Body Rottened Nawl Man its not as bad as you think it is See my problems unsolvable im tellin you kid You Think Yo Situations hard just try being me Raisin Three kids with no wife and a case of HIV A low budget job and a strung out mom see You actually Dont know What the fuck is wrong See you got it good but You just dont See That It doesnt Take The perfect life for me If i could have your nice problems id be fine but im soon to leave this earth in a matter of time so dont try and end yaself so early let life live alive Its betta to die fighting than to commit suicide Thanx man I see what you sayin It doesnt take the best to keep me praying you saved my life dog How can I repay You mayne? You Can Kill me Now and Save me the pain No.. Listen To My Story.... So many tears pouring, Im hating the rain The walls are closing in only blood in my vision Pain in my heart .... and my conscious is missing Im in constant remission, I need to take a life Inside your sternum, Is where i'll place my knife This insanity i feel keeps other emotions from showing And this power consumes my body, When ya soul im holding From the end to the beginning, My life's moving in reverse And every evil thought i have gets stored and reserved The comments i make are formed into something evil Plus my auras' different from others, no room for loving people Im sick of the pain, Sick of trying to cope with the stress Sick of laying in bed, Trying to hope for the best Insanity groping my chest, I feel it trying to break me I sense my last chance slip away, Now im close to crazy It's mostly hazy, The evil in my heart chose to take me My good sides broke and lazy, Its nothing to choke a baby People are prone to hate me, No chance of slowing the pain So lately ive been crazy, But you're just going insane
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12-02-05, 09:59 PM | #9 | ||
Light Weight
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Diligence
Blackmage Since my year of acquital, I lived my life penuriosly Grinding for money, struggling to pay my bills monthly Jobs came scarcely, never hired due to my heinous past Striving to start anew, but all thats' dwelled upon is my past I've succumbed, my walls is closing in, don't know what to do Mentally breaching, damn near in tears, how will I make it through Basically screwed, no way I can habituate these ordeals Devising while smoking my joint to abate the pain that I feel Cars lights suffused the room as they passed, then I spotted a glare And noticed the direction came from the dresser by the stairs Walked over and hoisted up the item that i've found in there to find my gun, ad my hand trembled with it as I stared The texture of chrome made me feel qualm, I looked in the mirror My effigy reminded me of my past malicious Demeanor Then It felt good, I took the gun and attempted to leave Approaching the door but halted by voices talking to me . . One whispered "Damn, what you stop for, keep on moving" Then Another said "James, think about what your doing" "If you continue on, your life will be completely ruined and it's back to the prison cell you were formely shut in." "Allow me to cut in, James fuck him, just follow our instincts play your cards strategecially, you wont step foot in a precient." "That's what you think, he's on his second strike, he can't risk it You don't wanna be a two time loser, just drop the biscuit." I'm going ballistic, can't purge the voices from my mind They just elongating and growing more clamorous inside I yelled "Get out of my head", as my mind grew with tension Both simutamiously say "James, make your decision." As the word was given, I clutched my gun, and my heart start pounding took a moment to breath then my mind started wandering . . Realized I was yielding to my problems, I didn't want to run no more So I hit the clip release and stood stagnant as it crashed on the floor Insane? My pen's the only way to stop them as they flutter in the breeze It's with me at all times i know that others can't see they're comin to get me, pure evil in it's mind lines and edges laughing, viciously clawwed an innocent man by the hedges it came with a war cry yelling "die" I'd just cleave as i pinned it to the table and carved at it till it screamed i scrape, cut and stab, that one was puttin up a fight It tried to run but my final puncture would rest it, goodnight that one was a fighter i kinda liked her in fact instead I sweeped up my hands peeping the streams of black...and red had it bit me, no I couldn't be touched i was the strong I sat at the park and people picked corpses all day long they told me it's such a waste to trash but beautifully did till i was kidnapped by their helpers, wrapped in white and lost my pen there's no hope for the world now, they i have overactive thought but i know in my heart it's real... ............whether it happened or not Sane? -I saw a man at the park today he seemed quite paranoid -but heard his writing was best h carried his pen like child and toy -he seemed so frantic that even my heart upped in pace -i was watching carefully till paper flew by and cut my face -he snatched it out of the airand began writing furiously -i turned to tend to my stinging wound, then i thought i heard a scream -must've been him, he wrote like it would flee, did i see it try? -he must've moved it with his hand he dropped his pen and let it fly -I grabbed and felt sadness then fear from what i would see -i couldn't believe it that he would write till he would bleed -it seemed to come from the paper but...no it's his -I told him "it's such a waste but it's beautifully did" -I read it, it was beautiful, went on about my day -nothing made me change my life like my crazy sister would say Evaluate this from an unbiased or alien thought from your perspective can you tell me who's crazy and who's not
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12-03-05, 10:24 AM | #10 | ||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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Technically they went over the line limit by 1 bar.. but whatever good piece, i wanted ours to go off each other so i had to wait for him to PM me his verse, but yours was good.
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12-03-05, 12:33 PM | #11 | ||
The Original Half Ass King
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V/Diligence & Blackmage...
I was feelin the storyline, vocab, and imagry. ...to be honest both were illin tho. Just theirs was better in my opinion... Ps. If that line limit thing comes into play, then F.I. and Aimez got this. Nice work yall. |
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12-03-05, 03:04 PM | #12 | |
Whys That?
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flows drop lacked alot of vocab. It seemed very empty and wasnt as solid as there opponents.
v/ blavkmagic dilliginace (my spellings dope) |
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12-03-05, 03:57 PM | #13 | ||
L.E
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A'ight everybody had good verses...
But I gotta agree with Blackmage and Ysdat. The storytelling in Blackmage and Diligence's story telling captured me. Imagery and vocab was good as well...everybody had solid verses, but Blackmage and Diligence just edged it. Vote- Blackmage and Diligence |
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12-03-05, 09:48 PM | #14 | ||
All these Dead Presidents
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IP:
great verses from both teams...
Like every1 else i was feeling diligence and blackmagic more... The imagery and emotion was much more in depth than other verses. Their lines were on point and only a couple lines i felt were stretched or forced. Otherwise good verses you two. Aimez and F.I. i felt you guys's pieces but.... the imagery and emotion just wasnt as appealing and fun to read as the other verses.. \v/ - Diligence and blackmagic
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12-04-05, 11:40 AM | #15 | ||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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yea i would vote for them myself i only had an hour online so it was off the dome.. good piece
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