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10 Lines.

No Recycling.
No Biting.
No Feeding.

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^Fucking HELL you're ugly.

My qualities a dope, improvements? No need to try it
But I ever did wanna be well rounded... I'd just have to follow your diet
You'd eat the fridge, it's a suprise you're even allowed a home
And fuck an audience... your STOMACH could fill a crowd alone
Yeah theres the secret service, the CIA can be fucking grim
But if they're in need of a new mole... they could recruit the one on your chin
Lmao at your christian rap, your audios are nonsense
Cause Jesus died 2000 years ago... just like your concepts
No need to battle you, starving u would defeat you quickest
You're so fat when you go to the cinema... they give you a family admisison ticket
To even THINK you had a chance here, you'd fuckin have to pretend hard
Cause even if you did run away with the votes...
...your fatass'd collapse after 10 yards

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Just in case you bother trying to delete the picture.

nice verse in general. I werent feeling the one in bold^, aside from that, fukkin solid verse.

PT. Honest & tried your best which is cool.

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lol nah i didn't try my best it was a 3 min drop

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Past Tense
This dude see's a dick you know he gonna be quick too hop on it
after all the dudes flaming for it why u think his msn is "kyrophonix"
Eh. Not that great of a concept or personal.
If you Appocoplyptik at text,well then,I'm the easter bunny
Cant get off too chicks,he had too read masterbatin for dummies
Fake personal.
See again might I add I aint really into battling its not my steez
But Then again,It'll be done quick,becuase i'll win this battle wit eaze
Self glorification.
I'm like rv's mystery killer,and u know what,you bout to be the next victim
Its funny you never battled,or said anything good,u kinda like RVs battlin system*
Poor wording and bad concept.
Dude runs his mouth yet he gotta wait till the final day too drop 10 lines
well its a diff story,when me an my crew roll through,n drop 10 n ya spines
No.

I was expecting a lot more from you Past. I remember when you were Infector Mindz and had some decent wordplay, now you just suck. One punch, and it was played and didn't hit hard at all.

Appoc:
My qualities a dope, improvements? No need to try it
But I ever did wanna be well rounded... I'd just have to follow your diet
Hahahahaha. Owned.
You'd eat the fridge, it's a suprise you're even allowed a home
And fuck an audience... your STOMACH could fill a crowd alone
Eh, wording is iffy.
Yeah theres the secret service, the CIA can be fucking grim
But if they're in need of a new mole... they could recruit the one on your chin
Blah. Not the greatest set up line or punch.
Lmao at your christian rap, your audios are nonsense
Cause Jesus died 2000 years ago... just like your concepts
Haha, nice punch. Boo at dissing Jesus though.
No need to battle you, starving u would defeat you quickest
You're so fat when you go to the cinema... they give you a family admisison ticket
Hahaha...Fake personal, but the punch connected.
To even THINK you had a chance here, you'd fuckin have to pretend hard
Cause even if you did run away with the votes your fatass'd collapse after 10 yards
Mwahahaha. Perfect closer.

Haha, nice personals and punches. Just work on some set up lines to be relevant cuz they can be kinda random so they rhyme.

v- Appoc

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This dude see's a dick you know he gonna be quick too hop on it
after all the dudes flaming for it why u think his msn is "kyrophonix"
If you Appocoplyptik at text,well then,I'm the easter bunny
Cant get off too chicks,he had too read masterbatin for dummies
See again might I add I aint really into battling its not my steez
But Then again,It'll be done quick,becuase i'll win this battle wit eaze
I'm like rv's mystery killer,and u know what,you bout to be the next victim
Its funny you never battled,or said anything good,u kinda like RVs battlin system*
Dude runs his mouth yet he gotta wait till the final day too drop 10 lines
well its a diff story,when me an my crew roll through,n drop 10 n ya spines


yeah i aint anything special just thought i'd drop for fun

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ooo yeah that * meant if you look up his name in statistics it says hes battled no one and he has a 0-1 record kinda like the system u know??

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owned.....word.

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My qualities a dope, improvements? No need to try it
But I ever did wanna be well rounded... I'd just have to follow your diet
To even THINK you had a chance here, you'd fuckin have to pretend hard
Cause even if you did run away with the votes...
...your fatass'd collapse after 10 yards

V/apo.

Came alright, but like past said, he dont battle.

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hahha nice drop fam.....you really got some talent doing text battles

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Thank you, I've been texting for a while so no hard feelings if you lose.

word if i do text its only topical.....i was not built too battle i was built too make songs and change people ya heard

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