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Technique | 0 | 0% | |
Daubs | 5 | 100.00% | |
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12-23-05, 08:33 PM | #1 | ||||
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Technique vs Daubs
IP: AC2A 692A
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12-23-05, 08:45 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: AC2A 692A
Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-05 08:45 PM.
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12-23-05, 08:48 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: AC2A 692A
Who the f........
Keystyle for this herb. Your a joke, so you know what i'd do if i wanted a laugh? Id scroll my mouse to your name..and check ya battle stats!! Im fresh and ill, but your techniques best dead you even chill in a crew full of weak text heads so thats prolly why you cant elevate or come close to me i mean the last time you came within a foot..you got cold feet i can tell you arent a gangster mate, so fuck tests cause loggin into RV is the only time you touch techs but still, you aint got a bad name..but me, i murder dudes cause seriousely..none of RV has ever even heard of you now your losing too,hit you so you turn black and blue cause i hate ya technique.........and i hate YOU too your fakin dude, your a faggot if i ever saw one but ye skill faggets to show.. ..prolly why i never saw none I cant catch this man, look..we cant stop him now I'l make his ego will drop so far... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...its still dropping now!
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12-23-05, 08:50 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: AC2A 692A
you gonna accept eh...................................
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12-23-05, 08:51 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 8CDA 7A5F
Technique has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-23-05 08:51 PM.
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12-23-05, 09:02 PM | #6 | |||||||
dope
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IP: 8CDA 7A5F
I'm grilling daubs I'll stab ya rhymes like forks
You can't call urself a vet when your the biggest dork ya score don't mean shit cuz ur verses are all prewrite and your that into eminem you probably ride on his dick I hate it when u babble So I'ma destroy u in a battle I best finish u here and send this wannbe emcee packin You ain't going no where bitch why don't u consider actin bitch ur just gettin tired out when I wear u down like a saddle You talk out ur asshole so your mouth might aswell be one I hope you die on this earth soon it'll be better when ur gone You hated me from day one cuz your rided mad dogs nuts and I don't give a fuck bitch cuz the truth is u both suck I think you need to grow up and quit ur little fuckin dreams cuz i'll melt you up bitch and turn your ass into cream I wanna see u scream I'll chop you up into little peaces and throw them into the sea so no1 catches ur deseases |
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12-23-05, 09:07 PM | #7 | ||||
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IP: AC2A 692A
lol.
I ko'ed you .
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12-23-05, 09:12 PM | #8 | |||||||
dope
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IP: 8CDA 7A5F
lol sure you did I'm just letting people know that when i posted my verse up the words are all jumbled for some reason. When I posted it some of my lines were placed earlier in the verse. Don't ask why that happend.
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12-23-05, 09:15 PM | #9 | |||||||
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
IP: 1FFF C108
checkin pollz
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12-24-05, 08:33 AM | #10 | |||||||
dope
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IP: 8CDA 7A5F
upping for some votes here.............................................. ..
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12-27-05, 08:33 AM | #11 | |||||||
dope
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IP: 8CDA 7A5F
upping for some votes plz............................................... ..
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12-27-05, 11:32 PM | #12 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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IP: 0A09 2FF0
Voted For: Daubs
Daubs - You had a good flow, you used good punches lines, and wordplay. Best Line - Your a joke, so you know what i'd do if i wanted a laugh? Id scroll my mouse to your name..and check ya battle stats!! Worst Line - so thats prolly why you cant elevate or come close to me i mean the last time you came within a foot..you got cold feet Tech - Your verse was pretty weak, it flowed ok, but your punches where bad. Best Line - I wanna see u scream I'll chop you up into little peaces and throw them into the sea so no1 catches ur deseases Worst Line - ya score don't mean shit cuz ur verses are all prewrite and your that into eminem you probably ride on his dick OVERALL - This battle was one sided, Daubs gets the win. He had the better flow, his punches where hitten harder and overall just whored this kat. Tech your flow was ok but your punchlines where weak, and you didnt have any wordplay at all. Vote - Daubs RTF in SIG!
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12-27-05, 11:57 PM | #13 | ||||
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This was feedback posted for Daubs
IP: 6EB9 28C9
Me and Daubs are in the same crew.. so whatever.
I'll just check the polls.. |
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12-29-05, 12:05 PM | #14 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 8D50 76CC
Voted For: Daubs
Technique - You came to generic in this battle. Your basic rhyme scheme only works when you can deliver hard hitting and funny punches. You failed to do so, nothing stood out to me and a lot of the shit was newbish and some shit I've seen done so many times before. No real creativity involved and it just seems like a quick key with no effort. You need to increase the power of your personals and punches, work on wording them right and using the right concepts and shit. OVERALL: 4/10 Daubs - Really, I can tell this was a quick key but you still had a couple of nice lines. I liked the closer, it is similar to something I've done before. A few lines that were real childish like the "I hate ya technique, and i hate YOU too" .....that line was fucking corny as hell. Still, you had a few nice punches, most were just average but you did have a couple that were a bit better. Keep elevating, your concepts are cool, you just need to work on the wording of some and how and when to use the 3-line style because sometimes you tend to over do it. OVERALL: 5.5/10 Return the favour on my battle against some herb who likes to overly force his wordplay. The link is in my siggy!! |
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12-29-05, 02:56 PM | #15 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
Voted For: Daubs
so thats prolly why you cant elevate or come close to me i mean the last time you came within a foot..you got cold feet now your losing too,hit you so you turn black and blue cause i hate ya technique.........and i hate YOU too your fakin dude, your a faggot if i ever saw one but ye skill faggets to show.. ..prolly why i never saw none I'l make his ego will drop so far... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ...its still dropping now! vs battle doesn't rhyme with packing nice effort, but daubs got this easy....use personals and focus on realistic ideas; saying someone rides eminem's dick is not a diss v/daubs, rtf
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