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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-28-05 at 08:30 PM

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sabre has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-25-05 09:43 PM.

your a comic dude, and im bringig' carnage, your left to hurt
shit, not even the avy's enough for peeps to marvel your work
your record shows already, dont you get enough pounds?
cause im bashing tech so hard, his computer shut down
i'll hoof you in the head, and my words leave ya trampled
you don't have a chance in hell...and i hear satan's likes to gamble
'tis the season though, you'll hear bells ringing, surely
i'm rolling-back so many punches, you're gettin' boxing day early
i am a giving person though, so lets put this on pause
have a gift on me...........i present you a loss
he hounded santa this year for skill, but dawg, keep opting
cause all he recieved was a court order for his stalking

keeeeeeeeeeyed

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Technique has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-26-05 06:35 AM.

Sabre's being put on this death bed from gunshot wounds out my sick head
I hate everything about you dick head cuz Ur flow seems pretty dead
U shitty mess You should feel bad about yourself cuz i'm glad i ain't sabre
Your everyones nightmare in rv everyones scared of this fag male raper
You shouldn't make rhymes cuz they don't really wanna be busted by you
Cuz you ain't got shit decent 2 say so they'll be disgusted by you
Ya styles more rusted then Antieks You ain't nobody from the street
I'll make your verse uncomplete cuz i don't feel it it's dying in my sleep
I'll break ya face up and make ur aperience look like homer simpson
shit i'll break stuff like limp bizkit done so you might aswell fuckin run
Cuz im murdering you for fun even though nobody knows you
Your standing on ur last leg cuz I almost got this bitch choked through

upping this..........................................

upping for some votes.............................................

upping for votes..................................

Voted For: sabre

your record shows already, dont you get enough pounds?
cause im bashing tech so hard, his computer shut down
i'll hoof you in the head, and my words leave ya trampled
you don't have a chance in hell...and i hear satan's likes to gamble
'tis the season though, you'll hear bells ringing, surely
i'm rolling-back so many punches, you're gettin' boxing day early

vs

no punches, all rhyming.

kokokkookoko = KO

ez vote.

rtf

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vote is appreciated, drop a link and i'll hit it up...1-0

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Voted For: sabre

this shit was good.....better punches and CREATIVTY aka METAFO'S that connected with PUNCHES..........

'tis the season though, you'll hear bells ringing, surely
i'm rolling-back so many punches, you're gettin' boxing day early
^^was a good line


i am a giving person though, so lets put this on pause
have a gift on me...........i present you a loss
he hounded santa this year for skill, but dawg, keep opting
cause all he recieved was a court order for his stalking
^^ nice closer homes......


VS.

NOTHING

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Oh you mad cus im stylin' on you?!

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Voted For: sabre

sabre got this one......

tech you need to start tryin to get in some personals, metaphors and some punches as well. Try looking at your opponents verse and check out there structure. look at his avy line, that's a personal. look at his boxing day punch and try to fit some of those in your verses and you'll get better

thanks alot technique meh........................................