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carmelo 5 71.43%
Premanition 2 28.57%
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Old 03-04-06, 02:22 PM   #1
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carmelo vs Premanition

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Old 03-04-06, 02:42 PM   #2
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Carmelo has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-04-06 02:42 PM.
 
Old 03-04-06, 02:51 PM   #3
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Premanition has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-04-06 02:51 PM.
 
Old 03-04-06, 03:03 PM   #4
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prems the type to cause hype and immitate Vets Style.
Next he'll be ''knittin yarn'' for a better Text-style (textile)
Not that your a biter, I'm sure deep down theres a Fighter..
But Your Mind must be like ''Dim Authors''..
..................................I think you need a Brighter writer.
Ignite your pen with a lighter, Shit call on the Brigade!!...
Or you could resort to plan B...
...........................And tell everyone you have aids
Atleast nobody gon fuck wit ya, hold your head up high
Cause if I was you & I started rhymin
.........................................even i'd be askin...WHY?
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Old 03-04-06, 03:24 PM   #5
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The chance of melo hurtin me is like a daylight burglary
Its minimal u learn from me with scriptures causin surgery
can’t compare me to you, no debate, god damn bitch elevate
you far from great, carmelo only poetical when he masterbate
five thousand posts, no life and still you learning the basics
this fake kid neva get the picture, so I grab a pen and trace it
face it you excavate in life, as a personality you not distinct
not good with words but ur record indicates ur hot with links
carmelo? Yeh but Anthony can reply when the orders tall
whereas you can’t ‘hit’ anything, you must have swollen balls *
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*swollen balls – himself & swollen ball not goin through hoop
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Old 03-04-06, 03:45 PM   #6
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Good shit....

Lets get some voters on this...

Bump.
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Old 03-04-06, 07:12 PM   #7
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Old 03-05-06, 08:06 AM   #8
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Old 03-05-06, 10:15 AM   #9
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Old 03-05-06, 02:58 PM   #10
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c'mon lets get some damn votes on this
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Old 03-05-06, 05:28 PM   #11
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Old 03-05-06, 10:10 PM   #12
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Voted For: Premanition

Premanition:
The chance of melo hurtin me is like a daylight burglary
Its minimal u learn from me with scriptures causin surgery
5/10 - Good Opener.
can’t compare me to you, no debate, god damn bitch elevate
you far from great, carmelo only poetical when he masterbate
5/10 - Good Punch.
five thousand posts, no life and still you learning the basics
this fake kid neva get the picture, so I grab a pen and trace it
7/10 - Niice.
face it you excavate in life, as a personality you not distinct
not good with words but ur record indicates ur hot with links
5/10 - Good Punch.
carmelo? Yeh but Anthony can reply when the orders tall
whereas you can’t ‘hit’ anything, you must have swollen balls *
3/10 - Weak Closer.
25/50

You used a good verse here, your punches where hitten hard good personals and wordplay. I liked your flow it was a overall tight battle verse.


Im Carmelo Yall:
prems the type to cause hype and immitate Vets Style.
Next he'll be ''knittin yarn'' for a better Text-style (textile)
2/10 - Weak Opener.
Not that your a biter, I'm sure deep down theres a Fighter..
But Your Mind must be like ''Dim Authors''..
..................................I think you need a Brighter writer.
6/10 - Good Wordplay.
Ignite your pen with a lighter, Shit call on the Brigade!!...
Or you could resort to plan B...
...........................And tell everyone you have aids
5/10 - Good Punch.
Atleast nobody gon fuck wit ya, hold your head up high
Cause if I was you & I started rhymin
.........................................even i'd be askin...WHY?
4/10 - OK Closer.
17/40

You had a pretty good verse, you used some decent punches and good wordplay, it flowed good as well.


OVERALL - This was a good battle right here. But Prem gets the vote becuz he used funnier punches and good wordplay, his also flowed better. His vocab was better and it rhymed niice. Carmelo you had a good verse as well, your vocab just wasnt as good, and you didnt use as many punches.


Vote - Prem

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Old 03-06-06, 09:25 AM   #13
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Old 03-06-06, 09:31 AM   #14
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Voted For: Carmelo

prems the type to cause hype and immitate Vets Style.
Next he'll be ''knittin yarn'' for a better Text-style (textile)
Not that your a biter, I'm sure deep down theres a Fighter..
But Your Mind must be like ''Dim Authors''..
..................................I think you need a Brighter writer.

VS

five thousand posts, no life and still you learning the basics
this fake kid neva get the picture, so I grab a pen and trace it
carmelo? Yeh but Anthony can reply when the orders tall
whereas you can’t ‘hit’ anything, you must have swollen balls

I got this tied on quotables but to me teph came more consistant with punches, his textstyle line was executed well. Prem, you had a couple of ok punches but your verse wasnt as consistant. you had the better flow but not as hard punches.

V./ carmelo

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Old 03-06-06, 01:39 PM   #15
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o.k 1-1

uppin for more votes

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