editing my votes in here:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...16&page=2&pp=15
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=228914
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2759779

THIS VERSE IS A NO SHOW VERSE

fuk a set up, ill just try and sadate you
your so whaaaack... evne your mother hates u
but foreal whats with the ...'s you insane???
well fuk three, ill put ONE DOT to ya brains
ill prolly slice you in the dome and the ear
this is a no show verse, and it PWNS your txt CAREerr!
but yoo, no fear, im just keying this quickkkk
looks like another loss on your hands, like your fathers dick
cos u grab it all the time, and the viens are blue
and this lines dope, i admit... i prerote it, its true

if u show ill post up a verse, might need an extension tho

A real verse is posted farther down the page. . when voting don't count this one.
-Mimesis

check I didn't even know about this.....I'll drop in a bit...10 lins max

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ok....u need to relax....mon...I know its ur first time.....
I understand wat u ment...........................
.....................when u said u was gonna sadate me on the first line...lol
but I like new rapperz....usually....its inspiring.......
but on the real...how the fuck u joined the league?............
......................aint talent a requirement?.....................
dawg....U need to ex urself out....tell mim u quit..........
cuz If wakness was contagiouse......................
.......................thats the only way Id admit U sick......
cuz to be honest....U could rap till u out of spit....
cuz I dont even like rap.....................
...............I just joined to keep u wak niggaz out of it.....

thats 10....

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Ok, i don't know if Monsieur is gonna be allowed to post a real verse, but if not this is my vote. I'm voting for Raw King because he posted a verse that had more effort put into it. That's about it.

vote - Raw King

V/Raw 4 comin less wack

Both ya Need 2 up ya shit

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ok scrap that

Your an ugly fuk, its true ya newb
plenty of bitches fuk raw
...but have nothing to do with you
if you ever said that your dope, your masking the truth
but when u say....
"vote honestly on my battles" dude, your askign to lose
You never made the cut, until after this, bitch
Cos ill destroy you so bad, youll resort to slashing ya wrists
you will never be a known name, dude you slack
seriously, last time i checked raw king was a googlewhack
cant beelive heads starting voting, heres the hearse
cos you know youve been pwnd
when your battles on the same level as my no show verse

sorry for being late, dont know if this will apply but anyway... actual battle?

Alright, Raw King checked in late thus leading Monsieur to post a no show verse. Raw King ended up posting, and so I gave Monsieur an extension to post a real verse.

Now that both have a real verse, it's 0-0 and upping for votes.

thanks mim....way to keep this shit fair dawg............

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nice well ok ima start off like this.


King you came off feeding?!...THATS NEVER GOOD MAN...never feed off of a persons verse it kinda makes you look weak...some lines were more on for audio RAW...so i say elevate and really make your lines more creative and hit harder rather than feeding off..


MON. your first drop SUCKED but your real verse was sdecent at least your punches came on harder and the personals werent too played like before and made sense.

V// Mon for coming stronger with consistancy and punches

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king... came really really simple here. this would have sounded a lot better in a freestyle battle but i didnt really see any punchline concepts or metas or whatever. nothing really hard hitting except the "isnt talent a requirement" line which was only halfway decent. king fed, but besides that mons came wit some better punches and funny flips on the concepts... lol fuck raw... hehe
V/ Mons

Monsieur wins.

Monsieur (1-1)
Raw King (0-2)