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06-21-06, 11:16 AM
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Beginning Your Ending
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T.r.o.o.p (1-0) vs The Kid Sense (0-1)
IP: E629 E3CC
Ok so it's week 2. You must drop a minumum of 16 lines and try and keep the amount of lines even ish.
If you are unsure about the rules then click here You MUST pick a topic a topic from the following list, and you can both do different topics. Good luck and drop dope. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Topics Cleansed by Fire In Anger... I am Truly Happy Shards of a Broken Mind These Shackes are my Freedom Hope is a Tattered Flag This Love is my Pain Of Dust and Air The King in Chains Tears, Idle Tears To Find God The Moons Shadow Risen to a New Low Does the Solder Bleed as much as me? |
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06-21-06, 01:42 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: 3C62 382D
Check Move..............
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06-22-06, 03:35 AM
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Better THAN You!
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IP: 4D68 1908
OOOH nice topics..up..
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06-24-06, 04:48 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: 3C62 382D
I jus got my computer back runnin
i will drop 2night or 2mmorow morning.........
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06-25-06, 01:33 AM
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Better THAN You!
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IP: 5E52 57E4
yea, i been hella busy..so ill drop soon..
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06-25-06, 01:36 AM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: 3C62 382D
Im droppin when i sign on 2mmorow
i jus got my computer back on and i had 2 drop 2 topicals 2day If u dont drop by 2mmorow..U lose so make sure u drop
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06-25-06, 10:17 PM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: 3C62 382D
Risen to a New Low *Sits at My Kitchen Table...Counting Change* its sad how my life is changin from this Manipulation that transformed my body into an rotting annihilation Lack of Communication and even lesser Determination to stop the marks on my arms from Needle Decoration Fascinated the Conversation of my own Prosecution ive Endowed Numerous Penises in my own Prostitution my retribution failed very well due to the Myths Infamous Shamed my Relatives "How did i get my Self Into This" Millions and Numerous Dividends have been Distributed Bringing Extended Pension to the Many men who attributed to the Prostituion in the Demolishing there own Projects Complaining to the Dealer like"Is this all the Rocks I Get's?" Throwing Fits with the Individuals im Shareing Needles With Communicating in Tradeings Like Take this Ill give u a Fifth Then this Cist developed over my Falubian Tubes..Im Done Just when i thought i Could Quit..Jus when i thought i Won Takes only One Dumb Conversation to start the Devastation To Influence your Actions through Several Stages of Aberration See an Application in Life is Fearfull especially with admiration My Skin tone is Pink..My clothes stink leading to accusation Numerous augmentation's ive written asking for my Help But if not anything else my family give Help for my Health New Dishes Now on my Shelf..But my skin has Abrasion's And ive Been Robbed and Life Threatened in many Occasions Socilization in my Enviorement is starting to wear my Pride I Visualize my Own Demize as my Life flashes within my Eye And a Tru Lie Occur's... that Cause my Nightmares to Appear That i owe my Boss Thousands now im living in Ah New Fear From my Fellow Peers new Tears Appear in my Self Destruction Slowly Moving Brick by Brick i Performed my own Self Construction My Days are in Deduction And let ask u Wha Happend..Do u Know? How i could of Risen so High...But i was only Risen to a New Low *Points Gun 2 My Temple* The End.............
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06-25-06, 11:18 PM
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Better THAN You!
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IP: E002 2C35
Rushed It for Ya
From Time to Time, Many Things Manipulate My Mind State, And Line After Line Of Cocaine It Violates And My Eyes Break, Held Down By Chains Shackles Are My Home Armed As I Choke My Life, Take It Away, I Drift In Day By Day And Tell Stories Of My Broken Mind.... *The Man Shivers Uncontrollably* Arguements With Myself Torture The Inner Chambers Of My Soul, Until I Cant Take It No More, And Follow The Void Of Unknown, I'm Cold Blooded Always Ready To Murder And Maybe Rape Kids, But Kind Hearted By Day And Tell Em Run Away Quick, My Eyes Only See Straight But My Mind Breaks Away Into Shards, Of 2, One Good, One Evil, And I Can't Even Fathom Where To Start, Screaming At Myself Until My Ears Bleed, And Tongue Grows Numb, Medication? Something I Need, But Can't Afford So I Live With None, Whole Families Are Dead, Because For Fun I Killed All Of Them, But Then I Hear More Voices Than One, And It Grows Calm Again, I Could Snap Out Of Reality All In A Minutes Time, And Tell Many Stories From The Shards Of My Skitzophrenic mind...
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06-26-06, 05:06 PM
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Middle Weight
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Kid - seen this take been used plenty of time..I've also seen it been done better...
Your telling of this was very shady; I think you could stand to use better imagery to help me get a better idea..the flow was a bit shaky...I think you got your story twisted a bit though, but then again thats my opinion...plenty of stuff could have been worded better, but I see potential.. Troop - Started out well, nice rhyme scheme...the piece was a bit simple, but then again that may be your writing style...Imagery was there, and it flowed nicely...Vocabulary wasn't amazing, but still was above-par..I can tell this isn't your best work, though..Nonetheless, I enjoyed this story more and it was less flawed, so.. -V- Troop |
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07-04-06, 12:29 AM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: 3C62 382D
Troop wins
Troop (2-0) The Kid Sense (0-2)
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