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NotoriousM 5 55.56%
Clockwork 4 44.44%
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Old 07-13-06, 12:29 PM   #1
Clockwork
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From: Southeast, Southeast
Clockwork vs NotoriousM

IP: 66BD 7173

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Old 07-14-06, 12:28 AM   #2
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NotoriousM has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-14-06 12:28 AM.
 
Old 07-15-06, 01:46 PM   #3
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Clockwork has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-15-06 01:46 PM.
 
Old 07-15-06, 05:34 PM   #4
Clockwork
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Dis dude say he Notorious but he new to the RV
I can get you well know for losin, make it your hobbie
My flow is sicker than animals at the vet
He sweatin now. So he put on some deodarant. He tryin to keep it a Secret
This is your first performance...you actually showed up
Your career like dead fireworks...you feel the light but you still wont blow up
Like police officers dis bitch has no clue
Im a felony, I go to jail just for murderin you
 
Old 07-16-06, 02:48 PM   #5
..Grillz..
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From: Canada
IP: C65F EED5

When he comes to rappin' we gun' see how this clock works.../
Tried throwing one punchline at me and this nigga got hurt...//
Time gun' stand still, As soon as I drop this Clock.../
Get OFF the Fucken grind, You ain't gun' last on ma Block...//
Why the fuck you only battle newbs, You runnin' scared?.../
Is it cuz you ain't bringin' shit to this game, You unprepared...//
Gun' cause my temper to flare, its ma nature im Notorious.../
Over before it started, and You know I'm gun' be Victorious...//
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NotoriousM vs. Clockwork
 
Old 07-16-06, 11:30 PM   #6
Clockwork
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From: Southeast, Southeast
IP: 66BD 7173

uppin 4 votz.......................need some votz

~1~
 
Old 07-17-06, 06:05 PM   #7
..Grillz..
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From: Canada
IP: C65F EED5

yppin............................................. ......
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NotoriousM vs. Clockwork
 
Old 07-17-06, 07:24 PM   #8
Clockwork
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From: Southeast, Southeast
IP: 66BD 7173

uppin............................................. ........................
 
Old 07-17-06, 11:33 PM   #9
Clockwork
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From: Southeast, Southeast
IP: 66BD 7173

uppin 4 votes............................................
 
Old 07-18-06, 12:55 PM   #10
..Grillz..
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IP: C65F EED5

need votes...........................................
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NotoriousM vs. Clockwork
 
Old 07-18-06, 01:09 PM   #11
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A Life Of Chryme
 
From: Boston
This was feedback posted for Clockwork

IP: F6E3 FC48

pollz............................................. ......
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Old 07-18-06, 06:33 PM   #12
Clockwork
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From: Southeast, Southeast
IP: 66BD 7173

uppin 4 votez.......................................
 
Old 07-18-06, 06:58 PM   #13
Stanza.
Please excuse My Sickness
 
IP: 50F3 EF61

Voted For: Clockwork

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Clockwork
Dis dude say he Notorious but he new to the RV
I can get you well know for losin, make it your hobbie
that was weak and not worded well

My flow is sicker than animals at the vet
He sweatin now. So he put on some deodarant. He tryin to keep it a Secret
...Worded bad and strecthed and the punch was weak..

This is your first performance...you actually showed up
Your career like dead fireworks...you feel the light but you still wont blow up
....that was alright nothing specail../

Like police officers dis bitch has no clue
Im a felony, I go to jail just for murderin you
...weak....

overall I think your verse wasnt all that strong you basically need to work on how you word your punchez and how long your lines are and your syllable count can be a hendurance to how people look at your verse so next time man work on those things and you will be straight

Grillz
When he comes to rappin' we gun' see how this clock works.../
Tried throwing one punchline at me and this nigga got hurt...//
...weak...

Time gun' stand still, As soon as I drop this Clock.../
Get OFF the Fucken grind, You ain't gun' last on ma Block...//
a little weak..


Why the fuck you only battle newbs, You runnin' scared?.../
Is it cuz you ain't bringin' shit to this game, You unprepared...//
.. weak...

Gun' cause my temper to flare, its ma nature im Notorious.../
Over before it started, and You know I'm gun' be
Victorious...//
[/b] Weak..[/b]

Man no offense you had nice flow but you didnt throw not one punch that was noticable man i mean i see attempts but they was weak man its like you didnt even try .....you couldve had a thousand punches just off his name i mean I know a few man you need to work on throwin punchez and try to use some personals both of yall

my vote goes to Clockwork

battle wasnt all that great
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Old 07-18-06, 11:59 PM   #14
Clockwork
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From: Southeast, Southeast
IP: 66BD 7173

uppin.............................................
 
Old 07-19-06, 07:57 AM   #15
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Maggot
 
From: Texas
IP: 7C59 08AE

Voted For: NotoriousM

Dis dude say he Notorious but he new to the RV
I can get you well know for losin, make it your hobbie
^weak so nah
My flow is sicker than animals at the vet
He sweatin now. So he put on some deodarant. He tryin to keep it a Secret
^played
This is your first performance...you actually showed up
Your career like dead fireworks...you feel the light but you still wont blow up
^decent
Like police officers dis bitch has no clue
Im a felony, I go to jail just for murderin you
^nah

vs.

When he comes to rappin' we gun' see how this clock works.../
Tried throwing one punchline at me and this nigga got hurt...//
^nah
Time gun' stand still, As soon as I drop this Clock.../
Get OFF the Fucken grind, You ain't gun' last on ma Block...//
^nah
Why the fuck you only battle newbs, You runnin' scared?.../
Is it cuz you ain't bringin' shit to this game, You unprepared...//
^decent
Gun' cause my temper to flare, its ma nature im Notorious.../
Over before it started, and You know I'm gun' be Victorious...//
^self glorify so nah

weak battle

but ima give it to grillz
v/grillz
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