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Old 07-16-06, 12:02 PM   #1
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13. Untold (2-0) vs 14. Ace Heratoga (5-1)

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Old 07-16-06, 01:37 PM   #2
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why yes hello..
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Old 07-16-06, 01:59 PM   #3
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yoz..

how many?
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Old 07-16-06, 02:16 PM   #4
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16? I dun care really
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Old 07-16-06, 02:22 PM   #5
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k.. lets drop today or tomorrow.
i don't feel like waitin all week.
but it's ur call. get @ me.
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Old 07-17-06, 12:14 PM   #6
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Werd didn't see you drop...

I said I was askin questions, but you ain’t get it punk
So I’ll axe your limbs the same and leave you stumped
Tough as nails? Homie you keep spittin with me
I’ll crucify you with ya shirt on, get you fitted to a T
Left hand hits hard, but my lyrics’ll leave ya shit scarred
He OD on Xanex… this dudes dead by the 6th bar
I really rap… so I don’t wanna keystyle ok…
voters see where ur coming from but hear what I say
Imma living contradiction, so I hope this chump believes it
I’ll leave the battle with one loss, but still, Un-defeated
Won’t post a a pic, evidence you’re a fuckin herb dude
I’ve had three courses of ju jitsu, so let my foot serve you
Nice with the hands… boxin skills I can live by
So when Ace connects with 4, it’s a straight guy

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13. Met-A-4 (2-0) vs 14. Ace Heratoga (5-1)
I’m gonna go out on a limb though and say that Ace will scrape it.




I guess its easy to balance dudes nuts with that mountainous chin
I’ll rip off ya leg… so Kemp ain't the only one going out on a limb
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Old 07-17-06, 05:07 PM   #7
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i'll leave ya 6 feet deep.. i'm scary bruh
but this battle'll be a walk in the park.. to find a spot to burry ya
'n where i hide ya body, i'll never tell, hoe
cause u'll be harder to find..
..then the lost season of chapelle's show
i'll blast a tech 'n take ya last breath
s'when i rock a toga.. i'll stone his ass to death
bitches hate ya game, it's weak 'n real lame
Jose no so much.. you'd think it was your real name
'n ace is poor 'n lame, buts it cool in the same
s'while i get the picture.. u can't even afford the frame
ya should get mased 'n slap'd cause ur fake 'n wack!
if u wanna get into some gangster shit..
..i'll just stand over ya while i take a crap
dawg, ya smell fishy.. u a pussy 'n so is ya set
but hell, ur not bein selfish.. when its the only job ya can get
i'm a vet, bring'n the tools till ya scream like a fool
so i'll drop my last resort.. 'n have 'ya cleanin it's pools
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Old 07-20-06, 08:05 PM   #8
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uppin this bittccchhh
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Old 07-20-06, 08:46 PM   #9
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I said I was askin questions, but you ain’t get it punk
So I’ll axe your limbs the same and leave you stumped
Imma living contradiction, so I hope this chump believes it
I’ll leave the battle with one loss, but still, Un-defeated
I guess its easy to balance dudes nuts with that mountainous chin
I’ll rip off ya leg… so Kemp ain't the only one going out on a limb

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i'll blast a tech 'n take ya last breath
s'when i rock a toga.. i'll stone his ass to death
ya should get mased 'n slap'd cause ur fake 'n wack!
if u wanna get into some gangster shit..
..i'll just stand over ya while i take a crap
dawg, ya smell fishy.. u a pussy 'n so is ya set
but hell, ur not bein selfish.. when its the only job ya can get
i'm a vet, bring'n the tools till ya scream like a fool
so i'll drop my last resort.. 'n have 'ya cleanin it's pools


Aight, this battle was decent. I felt that Ace had a pretty decent verse although some of the punches just seemed boring to read to me. The concepts were there, but the wording just made me think "God, this is boring!" Mets had a pretty solid verse I thought, the bars were mostly cool... a couple of wack ones that shouldn't be in there, but overall he came with more punches for me to quote... not to mention that fucking gangster shit line made me fucking crack up.

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Old 07-20-06, 09:35 PM   #10
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I said I was askin questions, but you ain’t get it punk
So I’ll axe your limbs the same and leave you stumped
Imma living contradiction, so I hope this chump believes it
I’ll leave the battle with one loss, but still, Un-defeated
I guess its easy to balance dudes nuts with that mountainous chin
I’ll rip off ya leg… so Kemp ain't the only one going out on a limb

VS.

i'll blast a tech 'n take ya last breath
s'when i rock a toga.. i'll stone his ass to death
ya should get mased 'n slap'd cause ur fake 'n wack!
if u wanna get into some gangster shit..
..i'll just stand over ya while i take a crap
dawg, ya smell fishy.. u a pussy 'n so is ya set
but hell, ur not bein selfish.. when its the only job ya can get
i'm a vet, bring'n the tools till ya scream like a fool
so i'll drop my last resort.. 'n have 'ya cleanin it's pools

this was an iight battle, like some of both but untold won this, nik came iight with some iight punches but untold came better the crap line mad me laugh but pretty good battle

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Old 07-20-06, 09:46 PM   #11
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jeez i didnt know Nick was in this battle... hmmm
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Old 07-20-06, 10:20 PM   #12
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My punches were ILL f'real...
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Old 07-20-06, 11:39 PM   #13
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jeez i didnt know Nick was in this battle... hmmm

OH SHIT.. NICK WERE CAUGHT!!!

we gotta KILL all da witnessez!!!
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Old 07-21-06, 12:07 AM   #14
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Imma living contradiction, so I hope this chump believes it
I’ll leave the battle with one loss, but still, Un-defeated

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ya should get mased 'n slap'd cause ur fake 'n wack!
if u wanna get into some gangster shit..
..i'll just stand over ya while i take a crap
dawg, ya smell fishy.. u a pussy 'n so is ya set
but hell, ur not bein selfish.. when its the only job ya can get

Meh ...

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Old 07-21-06, 12:37 AM   #15
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I doidnt like any of aces punches because he came extremely played and i felt that he had more statements than punches

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i'll leave ya 6 feet deep.. i'm scary bruh
but this battle'll be a walk in the park.. to find a spot to burry ya
ya should get mased 'n slap'd cause ur fake 'n wack!
if u wanna get into some gangster shit..
..i'll just stand over ya while i take a crap



dawg, ya smell fishy.. u a pussy 'n so is ya set
but hell, ur not bein selfish.. when its the only job ya can get

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