check it, dawg.

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when i look @ ya sig, i think..

ya moms loose as a goose, 'n stretched alot
even t.i.'s rubber band reminds me of the bitches twat
flow a hoe 'n lie, a homo on open flys
if asked, intelligent hes always up for blowin guys
i flow hi-fi sound shit, but intell should put the mic down quick
cause you'll always be lo-F.I., like ur initials on sound click
down town bitch, ya stop'd! then rip'd and pop'd
flow was "ny.. born 'n raised".. over his crib and dropped
kid just stop! we know ya forever been a fag
so i'll spicin ur love life up.. shovin a pepper in ur ass!
i'll beat this geek blue 'n leak peeps the truth
sayin ur lowest ranked this week.. sums up next week to
please, dude.. stop text, we hate ur writin arm
flow's so cheesy, i'll have integrated into parmesian
when i cuss i mean it! u dumb cunt, teen bitch!
if ur flow intelligent.. then my flow's a FUCKIN GENIOUS!!!

16. pz.

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Untold is dope, for real though im here to set the score
You aint ever had a dime bitch, let alone Met - A - 4
So its absurd what this nerd claims, searching for first place
Its 'business before pleasure' so 'work' on ya word'play'
And i would tell you to mind ya own, but i shatter business
So if ya flows money in the bank why dont it gather interest
Ya tremblin now, and during winter time youll be shaking too
Cuz come summer time, youre worn-out like bathing suits
You aint toppin me, im ending your career with a death wish
Skill is in my zone .... And you aint hear like deaf kids

10 4 U

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ok, upz and shitz.

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ya moms loose as a goose, 'n stretched alot
even t.i.'s rubber band reminds me of the bitches twat
Meh
flow a hoe 'n lie, a homo on open flys
if asked, intelligent hes always up for blowin guys
Played
i flow hi-fi sound shit, but intell should put the mic down quick
cause you'll always be lo-F.I., like ur initials on sound click
Cool
down town bitch, ya stop'd! then rip'd and pop'd
flow was "ny.. born 'n raised".. over his crib and dropped
Cool
kid just stop! we know ya forever been a fag
so i'll spicin ur love life up.. shovin a pepper in ur ass!
Dope
i'll beat this geek blue 'n leak peeps the truth
sayin ur lowest ranked this week.. sums up next week to
Nice
please, dude.. stop text, we hate ur writin arm
flow's so cheesy, i'll have integrated into parmesian
Cool
when i cuss i mean it! u dumb cunt, teen bitch!
if ur flow intelligent.. then my flow's a FUCKIN GENIOUS!!!
Cool

vs

Untold is dope, for real though im here to set the score
You aint ever had a dime bitch, let alone Met - A - 4
Played Of Tropp`s Cypher Punch
So its absurd what this nerd claims, searching for first place
Its 'business before pleasure' so 'work' on ya word'play'
Cool
And i would tell you to mind ya own, but i shatter business
So if ya flows money in the bank why dont it gather interest
Real Nice
Ya tremblin now, and during winter time youll be shaking too
Cuz come summer time, youre worn-out like bathing suits
Nah
You aint toppin me, im ending your career with a death wish
Skill is in my zone .... And you aint hear like deaf kids
Weak

v-Untold.

uh, would definately appreciate some votes on this.

pz.

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ya moms loose as a goose, 'n stretched alot
even t.i.'s rubber band reminds me of the bitches twat
wak and kinda childish
flow a hoe 'n lie, a homo on open flys
if asked, intelligent hes always up for blowin guys
ehh, another wak line
i flow hi-fi sound shit, but intell should put the mic down quick
cause you'll always be lo-F.I., like ur initials on sound click
good personal
down town bitch, ya stop'd! then rip'd and pop'd
flow was "ny.. born 'n raised".. over his crib and dropped
best line so far.
kid just stop! we know ya forever been a fag
so i'll spicin ur love life up.. shovin a pepper in ur ass!
ok line.
i'll beat this geek blue 'n leak peeps the truth
sayin ur lowest ranked this week.. sums up next week to
good personal
please, dude.. stop text, we hate ur writin arm
flow's so cheesy, i'll have integrated into parmesian
wak
when i cuss i mean it! u dumb cunt, teen bitch!
if ur flow intelligent.. then my flow's a FUCKIN GENIOUS!!!
poorly worded and no real punch.



Untold is dope, for real though im here to set the score
You aint ever had a dime bitch, let alone Met - A - 4
really good name play and personal
So its absurd what this nerd claims, searching for first place
Its 'business before pleasure' so 'work' on ya word'play'
good wording. not a strong punch but a decent line
And i would tell you to mind ya own, but i shatter business
So if ya flows money in the bank why dont it gather interest
ok line
Ya tremblin now, and during winter time youll be shaking too
Cuz come summer time, youre worn-out like bathing suits
wak
You aint toppin me, im ending your career with a death wish
Skill is in my zone .... And you aint hear like deaf kids
good punch.

All in all. You both had some really good lines but then there were some really wak line but it was a decent battle. untold had the 1 winning line with the dropping off a building shit but that was just one line. FI had more consistant lines that weren't as great as that line but still had more decent lines. Based on that....I give the vote to

V/ Flows Intell

RTF in my battle with oz.

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--Untold--

ya moms loose as a goose, 'n stretched alot
even t.i.'s rubber band reminds me of the bitches twat
>>Weak hit

flow a hoe 'n lie, a homo on open flys
if asked, intelligent hes always up for blowin guys
>>Bad

i flow hi-fi sound shit, but intell should put the mic down quick
cause you'll always be lo-F.I., like ur initials on sound click
>>Could have hit harder but okay.

down town bitch, ya stop'd! then rip'd and pop'd
flow was "ny.. born 'n raised".. over his crib and dropped
>>Pretty nice

kid just stop! we know ya forever been a fag
so i'll spicin ur love life up.. shovin a pepper in ur ass!
>>Okay

i'll beat this geek blue 'n leak peeps the truth
sayin ur lowest ranked this week.. sums up next week to
>>Multie was off but okay hit.

please, dude.. stop text, we hate ur writin arm
flow's so cheesy, i'll have integrated into parmesian
>>Not liking

when i cuss i mean it! u dumb cunt, teen bitch!
if ur flow intelligent.. then my flow's a FUCKIN GENIOUS!!!
>>Alright


--Flow Intell--

Untold is dope, for real though im here to set the score
You aint ever had a dime bitch, let alone Met - A - 4
>>I've seen better met a four flips, this wasn't one of them. Okay attempt, though.

So its absurd what this nerd claims, searching for first place
Its 'business before pleasure' so 'work' on ya word'play'
>>A bit watered down but good.

And i would tell you to mind ya own, but i shatter business
So if ya flows money in the bank why dont it gather interest
>>Could have hit a lot harder, but okay.

Ya tremblin now, and during winter time youll be shaking too
Cuz come summer time, youre worn-out like bathing suits
>>Pretty horrible.

You aint toppin me, im ending your career with a death wish
Skill is in my zone .... And you aint hear like deaf kids
>>Played, bad closer.


Vote:

Untold


Because he dropped more there was a greater margin for error... not to mention Flow's last two couplets were bad.

Untold-

ya moms loose as a goose, 'n stretched alot
even t.i.'s rubber band reminds me of the bitches twat
-weak. the concepts old and the rhymes soft
flow a hoe 'n lie, a homo on open flys
if asked, intelligent hes always up for blowin guys
-maybe i didnt catch the punch, or there wasnt one at all maybe?
i flow hi-fi sound shit, but intell should put the mic down quick
cause you'll always be lo-F.I., like ur initials on sound click
-that's an example of horrible name play.
down town bitch, ya stop'd! then rip'd and pop'd
flow was "ny.. born 'n raised".. over his crib and dropped
-such a nice thought, but executed poorly.
kid just stop! we know ya forever been a fag
so i'll spicin ur love life up.. shovin a pepper in ur ass!
-gay.
i'll beat this geek blue 'n leak peeps the truth
sayin ur lowest ranked this week.. sums up next week to
-haha no.
please, dude.. stop text, we hate ur writin arm
flow's so cheesy, i'll have integrated into parmesian
-im sick of reading this shit.
when i cuss i mean it! u dumb cunt, teen bitch!
if ur flow intelligent.. then my flow's a FUCKIN GENIOUS!!!
oh did you call yourself better then him? wow good job, nice one.



flow intell-
ihopethis isnt long and boring...

Untold is dope, for real though im here to set the score
You aint ever had a dime bitch, let alone Met - A - 4
-eh
So its absurd what this nerd claims, searching for first place
Its 'business before pleasure' so 'work' on ya word'play'
-AHAHAHAHA NO!!!!!!!!!!
And i would tell you to mind ya own, but i shatter business
So if ya flows money in the bank why dont it gather interest
-im sick of readin


yea fuck both of you i hope i get a battle soon


v/ Untold.

UNTOLD-

when i look @ ya sig, i think..

ya moms loose as a goose, 'n stretched alot
even t.i.'s rubber band reminds me of the bitches twat
6/10 decent
flow a hoe 'n lie, a homo on open flys
if asked, intelligent hes always up for blowin guys
6/10 nothin too special
i flow hi-fi sound shit, but intell should put the mic down quick
cause you'll always be lo-F.I., like ur initials on sound click
6/10 Ok wordplay but sounds forced
down town bitch, ya stop'd! then rip'd and pop'd
flow was "ny.. born 'n raised".. over his crib and dropped
5/10 Didnt like it
kid just stop! we know ya forever been a fag
so i'll spicin ur love life up.. shovin a pepper in ur ass!
5/10 gay
i'll beat this geek blue 'n leak peeps the truth
sayin ur lowest ranked this week.. sums up next week to
7/10 its ok
please, dude.. stop text, we hate ur writin arm
flow's so cheesy, i'll have integrated into parmesian
8/10 cool
when i cuss i mean it! u dumb cunt, teen bitch!
if ur flow intelligent.. then my flow's a FUCKIN GENIOUS!!!
9/10 best line

F.I.

Untold is dope, for real though im here to set the score
You aint ever had a dime bitch, let alone Met - A - 4
8/10 good start
So its absurd what this nerd claims, searching for first place
Its 'business before pleasure' so 'work' on ya word'play'
7/10 The word play is ok
And i would tell you to mind ya own, but i shatter business
So if ya flows money in the bank why dont it gather interest
9/10 hot line best line
Ya tremblin now, and during winter time youll be shaking too
Cuz come summer time, youre worn-out like bathing suits
5/10 not that good
You aint toppin me, im ending your career with a death wish
Skill is in my zone .... And you aint hear like deaf kids
6/10 decent word play

overall

vote=F.I.

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ya moms loose as a goose, 'n stretched alot
even t.i.'s rubber band reminds me of the bitches twat
no
flow a hoe 'n lie, a homo on open flys
if asked, intelligent hes always up for blowin guys
wtf no
i flow hi-fi sound shit, but intell should put the mic down quick
cause you'll always be lo-F.I., like ur initials on sound click
intial disses are played
down town bitch, ya stop'd! then rip'd and pop'd
flow was "ny.. born 'n raised".. over his crib and dropped
no
kid just stop! we know ya forever been a fag
so i'll spicin ur love life up.. shovin a pepper in ur ass!
mehh
i'll beat this geek blue 'n leak peeps the truth
sayin ur lowest ranked this week.. sums up next week to
not relly
please, dude.. stop text, we hate ur writin arm
flow's so cheesy, i'll have integrated into parmesian
its iight notni speacial
when i cuss i mean it! u dumb cunt, teen bitch!
if ur flow intelligent.. then my flow's a FUCKIN GENIOUS!!!
yawn

Untold is dope, for real though im here to set the score
You aint ever had a dime bitch, let alone Met - A - 4
lame
So its absurd what this nerd claims, searching for first place
Its 'business before pleasure' so 'work' on ya word'play'
its iight
And i would tell you to mind ya own, but i shatter business
So if ya flows money in the bank why dont it gather interest
it iight
Ya tremblin now, and during winter time youll be shaking too
Cuz come summer time, youre worn-out like bathing suits
wtf not hard
You aint toppin me, im ending your career with a death wish
Skill is in my zone .... And you aint hear like deaf kids
nope

ya both had weak ass verse i no yall can do better
both of ya sucked evenly.

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Untold...

when i look @ ya sig, i think..

ya moms loose as a goose, 'n stretched alot
even t.i.'s rubber band reminds me of the bitches twat
i flow hi-fi sound shit, but intell should put the mic down quick
cause you'll always be lo-F.I., like ur initials on sound click
down town bitch, ya stop'd! then rip'd and pop'd
flow was "ny.. born 'n raised".. over his crib and dropped
i'll beat this geek blue 'n leak peeps the truth
sayin ur lowest ranked this week.. sums up next week to
when i cuss i mean it! u dumb cunt, teen bitch!
if ur flow intelligent.. then my flow's a FUCKIN GENIOUS!!!


Check this out homeboy...not a bad verse here. Some things I need to clear up tho. Couple of ur setups were "not right" and didn't do the punch justice. like u were just sayin words to make em connect. You spelled GENIUS wrong so that dosen't make you one. And this is dope but gay at the same time

kid just stop! we know ya forever been a fag
so i'll spicin ur love life up.. shovin a pepper in ur ass!

cuz you DON'T won't to shove ANYTHING up a guys ass.

Flow...

Untold is dope, for real though im here to set the score
You aint ever had a dime bitch, let alone Met - A - 4
So its absurd what this nerd claims, searching for first place
Its 'business before pleasure' so 'work' on ya word'play'
And i would tell you to mind ya own, but i shatter business
So if ya flows money in the bank why dont it gather interest
You aint toppin me, im ending your career with a death wish
Skill is in my zone .... And you aint hear like deaf kids

Not as bad as ppl are sayin but I think you shoulda matched his lines. I may have givin you the "V". But I think his punches came harder after comparing em IMO. Ur opener and Closer were cool as a punch. The ones inbetween were cool too...just not HAAAAAAAAARD enuff!! Gotta be Concrete!!!

V/ Untold

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