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08-14-06, 03:37 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Diss To Chase Murder
IP: CF74 5D3A
Diss To Chase Murder
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Diss To Chase Murder CHASE you whack to the extent your head lack rhymes Plus you act blind must need glasses and masses of lines No explanation for this complex situation why battle When I fry and rattle your brain like stampeding cattle? You live pathetic and should give credit for my batch of rhymes Even catch some minds sleeping like yours keeping whores in line Need help and plans while I reprimand your skills like flunkies That fail on jobs you a stale slob dun eat bananas like munkeys You write fake quotes you best make a notes of this ass whooping Do bad posts and can’t add growth to your junk so I’m looping A brown rope around your throat, like Salt-n-Peppa leave you shooping Got a hot sculpture you best adopt this culture I’ll drop your structure Like condemned buildings so I’m above the rim and chilling with rupture Of your spleen couldn’t be exact or dope if I threw crack down your throat If whackness was paper you’ll be a sad tablet with a bad habit can’t tote Flavor in a box with a lid on it kid, you couldn’t come proper with juice And rhyme if you had Doctor Zeus’s mind you a cartoon on the loose Wanna be crafty as fuck but you just a daffy duck no skills at all dawg So CHASE you disgrace your name why place the blame on my dialogue? You whack and lame even as a hijacked plane you blow up with a flow Corrupt sitting inside the world trade Center you are not a tower of power hoe |
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08-15-06, 04:31 AM | #2 | |||
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IP: 241D 0C74
was aiight but needs links.
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08-20-06, 05:25 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2822542)
my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showt...549#post2822549) Last edited by tornado220 : 08-20-06 at 05:31 PM. |
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08-21-06, 08:22 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
See fire from the beast but I desire some peace but this
Require a dumb feast where we all smoke dope and brisk Coke and fine wines even got a mug for some bud really hate Draft beer too much suds, need sincere domination and beer makes An accommodation for this so pass the grass and a glass Let’s get drunk on the funk and party with Bacardi the fast Life |
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08-21-06, 08:44 AM | #5 | |||||
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IP: 860D ECBB
How old is that, is that your current work ? !!!
Emmm sum part were good, but others well played it was alright keep writing. Stay up |
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08-21-06, 01:36 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
P.rodigy NOT SO THESE ARE ALL NEW PUNCHLINES FEEL ME?
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08-21-06, 07:01 PM | #7 | |||||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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IP: F1FE FCAA
Wak....And theres a place for beef...its called the beef thread plain and simple...take that shit somewere else.
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08-21-06, 09:51 PM | #8 | ||||
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IP: E72F 299F
this was ight, you used the same words a couple times, try to stay away from that unless you are usin wordplay. but altogether i would say its a solid diss shawty.
hit me back on my jawn http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=233697 |
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08-22-06, 03:31 PM | #9 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
this is ok at best.
structure is good. multis are forced as fuck alot of times. Your meta's (if thats what you call them) are weird, they dont even relate to what your speaking on. This is ok, nothing great but not wack. stay dropping. |
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08-23-06, 03:38 PM | #10 | ||||||
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IP: 3240 794D
wack.Elevate.nuff.sed
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08-24-06, 05:02 AM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
lot these whack cats like this bitch up top don't know what the word whack mean
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