lmmfao
watever kid
3-0 is ko
first to 5 wins
no hate no d/r no bitin
and shit aight normal rules

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waitn 4 one of u niggaz 2 drop

YO YO YO

KAWTIC, Y DA FUCK DO EVEN BOTHER INSTEAD OF U WASTEIN MY TIME I CUD B FUCKIN UR MOTHER WHILE I SHOT UR BROTHER// U DONT NO MAN WOT IM CAPABLE OF SO AFT DIS U GOTA START LUKIN 4 A NEW JOB// UL GO HOME & DA 1ST THING UL GET IS A SMACK 2DA DOME, FROM UR OWN FUCKIN MOTHER 4 EMBARRISIN DA FAMILY NAME COME ON AWG U NO UR 2 SHIT 2 KEEP AT DIS GAME// IL ADMIT IM ONLY GETIN IN2 DIS FREESTYLE LIFE BUT DAMN ALL I CAN DO IS GET EVEN BETTER & MY RHYMES WILL BCOME EVEN MOR TIGHT// LIKE COME ON WHO WUDA A FOT A WHITE MAN FROM NORTHEN IRELAND WHOS EVEN HALF DECENT AT HIP-HOP// U SHUD AT LEAST SHOW ME RESPECT 4 DAT I GET LAUGHED AT OVER HERE 4 MY LOVE OF RAP// BUT DER LIKE U NUFIN BUT H8ERS WHOS ONLY SEX LIFE IS MASTURBATEIN// I DONT GIV A FUCK WOT PEOPLE SAY COZ MS OF DEM R JUS LIKE U...FUCKIN GAY// ALL U R IS A FUCKIN FAGGIT IL STAND ON UR FACE LIKE ID STAND ON A RABBIT// U BENT OVER CISSY ASSED BITCH BOY WHO GETS USED BY ANYMAN AS HIS SEX TOY// NOW B4 U START A BATTLE WIT ME AGAIN U SHUD FIND SUMFIN OUT ABOUT ME COZ FUCK DIS SHIT IM OUTTIEY!!!

AYO
Im going to reavel the pain behind my name that automatically punctures your brain sending shocks to ya membrane/
Goin in INSANE spittin flames that all who oppose that should be considered dame/
Thanx for accepting the Invitation
I continue with lyrical Elevation, my ryhmes like water in the sun as they rise with Evaporaton/
Far from a special occasion as overkill you like holiday inflation/
Its funny how a "wack" steps to the "solidl", gets blasted into the soil/
Afterwards ill ignite you bitch, im fractious to make trouble for those you step in the radius of ma battle bubble/ (lol, wtf me..)
You stumble battle and crumble, take the tumble, you couldnt even get through "GET READY TO RUMBLE"/
Step up:
Transform, become iller, crack your skull and become "Brain Spiller", use ur visual half as choclate jelly filler/
Im a "cereal" killer, dont give shits, how i "EAT" you like "ALPHA Bits"/
Terrosits and ya dont know amount of hostages, could be a "banker" and still not "account" for ur "losses"/
Peak:
Trying to be textcee sittin infront of ur "NEC" battlin an "EMCEE", "monitored" my actions wrong SEE!/
This is too much "Intensity", your punches hold less wheight than foams density/
END:
Your ryhmes are flop, "stick" to janitor wit "mop", pig, cop, ANY profession but this is where you COULD get "TOP"!/

k lets get da votes goin!!

Right,

So Solid:
I'm not sure whats going on here. Halfway through you start givin excusses for why you're wack??!! You need more confidence in your rhymin, sure you'll get better wit time, but don't waste precious lines in a battle tellin everybody.
Anyway, before this section, and after this section, you had the verse sorted with the flow. You now need to concentrate on improvin multis and includin some punches (my problem too). Keep practising!

Kawtic:
I have to say, i thought that was pretty ill. I thought the start was hot. I liked the line "I continue with lyrical Elevation, my ryhmes like water in the sun as they rise with Evaporaton", and i thought it was better than So solid. In this case i liked the fact it wasn't so in your face.

So,

Vote = Kawtic

P.s.
As been mentioned previosly, So solid sort out the grammer, it doesn't do you any favours.

Peace

YEA MAN I GUESS UR RITE, APRECIATE DA ADVICE

ok 1-0 i am winnin

iight, bof verese where kinda whack. i xpected Kawtic'z verse would b nicer, but it waz iight. so solid iz juz str8 whack n should b banned from diz site.

ma vote goes out 2 Kawtic, cuz hiz punches where harda, n made mo sense den S.S. Pluz, hiz verse waz ez'r 2 read da otha guy's...........


flow= Kawtic
punches= Kawtic
meta4/creativity= Kawtic

ova all/vote = Kawtic

It was kind of hard to read so solid's thang
so solid said hiself that he needs practice
but who does'nt, some need more than others
I thought kawtic's intensity density line was kind of neat
kawtic had better vocab and I did'nt have to figure out his words

so the winner is,
kawtic

vote kawtic......pretty obvious......both verses werent amazing but kawtic took dis wit out a doubt.......

ayo kawtic congrats dawg u elevated....

K-awtic won this with-out a doubt J said tha dill...
other duk was wack as fuck...no offence, but shit sounded like a conversation dawg.

Vote::Kawtic

5-0

peace

kawtic got a KO so i wont bother to vote but if it did its kawtic, but so solid, you need to download some battles off kazaa or something so you could see what battling is about you didnt even have any punches and if you did they where so wack i didnt see them, im not hatting im just giving you advise.