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Old 02-27-03, 07:45 PM   #1
DETONATA
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Detonata vs ExclusiveDA

IP: 5D4F 6585

10-20 lines
First to 5 votes wins or 3-0 is a KO

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6353#post306353
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=32356

Check In, Faggot.
 
Old 02-27-03, 07:53 PM   #2
ExclusiveDA
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Send it through you fuckin clown
 
Old 02-27-03, 07:59 PM   #3
ExclusiveDA
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Man dude I voted what's the science
 
Old 02-27-03, 08:02 PM   #4
DETONATA
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how you gonna call me a clown, when ur prolly biting others...
we could have a Paint Fight, then id beat you with Flying Colours
tryin to decover the meaning of Ill verses, failed at his 1st try...
guess you must be proud of my seimen, when you swallow ur pride
following guys, ur a shirt lifter, i dont mean a petty thief, dogg...
but its like the Karate Kid, when Ex hears me on wax, he wax off!
The name indicates states ur a newb, no need for boasting
cuz me beating you is a shore bet like casinos near the ocean
straight freepostin', thats how you got that status - your wack
But i gave your girl tha 69, and really did a number on that ass!
i drop more gems than jilted brides, wordplays proper...
ur 1st battle here, while ive ate mo' Heads than Jeffrey Dahmer
thats right, come with tha played "detonata wont Blow Up", while...
i'll smack you square in the face, and really Crack a Smile
ur lacking style, like Crystals i'll Folger, son - its over,
i heard you were heavy Headed, so ima Take The Weight Off Ya Shoulders
 
Old 02-27-03, 08:26 PM   #5
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"I been through this shit dude like fucking twice", be aware.. "my bullets like kidnappers... they be takin ya life",... keep releasing them weak ass rhymes out ya body, man your shit older than the phrase lody dody,little pussy gonna call me a cunt I have ya bitch ass like 1 of my hoes... workin the front, D you a fuckin bitch stay out my fuckin face,... cause I'll have your bitch ass switch-hitting like the fuckin former badboy mase. when this battle is dun you gon find out this rap shit don't work, and get like Mase and take your scared ass to church. You a has been nigga from the block... that live his dreams through gansters like biggie and pac.
 
Old 02-27-03, 08:47 PM   #6
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Dude i'm tired of your weak ass tryin to battle me, that's like Benzino battlin Eminem that's a losing battle B, Sounding like a gay fake ass Nas, You think you a gangster cause you be watching the Oz, I aint from the Navy or I aint from the damn south,.. but I know you will doubt but your your girl is proud to put my seamen in her fuckin mouth, Jeffrey Dahmer you need to go out and act crazy, and take Jay-Z's soul that the only way you can blaze me,Man dude if someone hands you a mike, your fuckin career will end faster than a fuckin enraged.... Tyson fight, Man I'm doing you like a nigga robbing without a mask, to this site I'm a damn virgin but I'm fuckin ya ass.

Last edited by ExclusiveDA : 02-27-03 at 09:09 PM.
 
Old 03-01-03, 01:13 PM   #7
DETONATA
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Wow, im not even gonna sway votes -
votes?!
 
Old 03-01-03, 02:35 PM   #8
fatman
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lol vote - D
this was a close battle <<laughs>>

D u had some nice lines and wordplay first 4 lines were realy hot
only realy need to work on flow cos the punches were spot on
eX get off the site
 
Old 03-01-03, 03:19 PM   #9
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votedetonata

Overall Better Verse But You Had
A Few Played Lines , That Lost A
Few Points For Your Verse .

Quote:
how you gonna call me a clown, when ur prolly biting others...
we could have a Paint Fight, then id beat you with Flying Colours


Second Line Was Nice , But The First Line Was Pure Filler lol.

Quote:
guess you must be proud of my seimen, when you swallow ur pride


Don't Use Cum Lines . . .

But Overall Detonata Took This Hands Down.

ExcusiveDA, You Definitly Need A Lot Of Work, Mis-
Directed Punches , Newbie Style. Played Verse
Overall Weak . . . Keep Working , But As Of Now, I
See No Potential Of ExclusiveDA.

pz.
 
Old 03-01-03, 04:03 PM   #10
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vote = exclusive da since his flow was better wit harder hitting punches but overall poor show lads!
 
Old 03-01-03, 04:09 PM   #11
DETONATA
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ha ha ha ha ha!
Fuck off you wack cunt.
this is why i dont post up at RB
gay assed newbie voters
OMFG!
Suck my dick you cunt
that vote is not allowed
i'll PM prestah or some shit...
 
Old 03-01-03, 04:14 PM   #12
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Yo Yo u fuckin pussy assed prick. Don mess wit ma crew or ahll knock u about dis site u li fag. What the fuck is the mod gonna do? Did u say no newbie votes? Din think so. Jus watch what your sayin and since u din say no h8 votes then the vote goes 2 exclusive da u wank
 
Old 03-01-03, 04:17 PM   #13
DETONATA
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you fucking cunt, i fucking hate stupid internet gangsta's.
how you gonna knock me off the site?
you stupid little bitch.
Fuck you.
set up a battle you wack bastard
i'll sonn you.
 
Old 03-01-03, 04:22 PM   #14
MicDareall
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too much drama over this weak battle......detonata took it wit eaze.....this battle was borin.....det was aight but the other kid way to simple
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Old 03-01-03, 04:33 PM   #15
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True, true. But I dont give a fukk. My mans Detonata did his mothafukking thing. Nobody can take away from his win. My vote is definately going to Detonata. One line did it for me:

Quote:
"following guys, ur a shirt lifter, i dont mean a petty thief, dogg...
but its like the Karate Kid, when Ex hears me on wax, he wax off!"

Fukking hott! I'ma have to use that :-))
Good Battle for Detonata. U suck Exclusive. That was exclusive garbage.

Vote=Detonata
 
 


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